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SCIENTIFIC REPORT EXCERPT

Client Notes: Hi. Help my report sound like good APA-style British speaker: spelling,
grammer, formating and meaning. My english its not greatly good. Please then give
some comment to improve the english through out, like my punctuations.

RESULT

For the study group of knockout mice (N=26), exposed to smoke from N Tabacum, infused
with p-Menthan-3-ol, 5000 ppm, for 10h/ h per day, over a 2 week period, the upregulation
of NACHRS was statistically significant (p <0.001); like they were for the study group of
knockout mice (N= 28), exposeding to an 2-Isopropyl-5-menthylcyclohexanol infusion of
800ppm, for 8 h/per day, oven over the same period (p= 0.05).
On another handthe other hand, for the third sturdy group of knockout mice (N = 27),
exposed to 5000 ppm of infused p-Menthan-3-o1, for 10 h/day, over a four week study
period, the NACHRS upregularization which was not statistically significance significant
(p=0.01): nor was it for the fourth study of knockout mice (N=82), exposed to an 800 ppm
infusion of 2-Isopropyl-5-menthylcyclohexanol, for 8h/ per day, over a 4 weeks time
(p=.09).
 At last, the controls groups of wild type mice (N=29), exposed to Nicotina Tabacum without
methol infusion, for 10h/day, over a 2 weak week periods, upregulation of NACHRS is of no
statistical significance (p=0.08). Because of this reason, the statistic findings associated with
them, 1st & 2nd groups, supports the claim that susceptiblitysusceptibility to nicotine
addictionnicotine addiction is very much prevalent prevelant among those whom inhale
tobacco smoke infused with a too greatlarge quantity of p-Menthan-3-ol or 2-Isopropyl-5-
menthylcyclohexanol off greater daily dozes then than among those whom inhale nether
variations over long weekly durations. Mostly importantly, the susceptibility to addition was
of more prevalence in the first study group than it was in the control group with the same
varablesvariables, no not menthol; thus, supporting the claim which that menthol promotes
tobacco addiction.
Coming from procedures developed by Laramie & Laredo, (2004), post-mortem studied
supported this qualitative conclusion. 27 mid-brain sample taken off those sacrificed in the
1st study group, and 28 similiarsimilar samples off the 2nd study group show that grater
menthol levels leads to more significant bigger spikes in neroreceptivityNero receptivity
when examining via Western blot analyssist. Never the less, as Laramie et al, (2004), has
pointed out, the genetic mutations of a knockoutcontrolknockout control group can skewer
the results. Brian chemistry, after all, is is a tricky business, and a study with only N=136
participations has limitations to it – generalisability.

ADMISSIONS ESSAY

Client Notes: I must get into this American university! For years i have dreamt of
crossing the pond for this adventure. Please, please, please, make everything
consistent and of the highest academic standard. I have trouble with my train of
thought (I’m a rambler), so kindly help with that. The specific question is: explain one
crucial event from your life and how it relates to a research project you will pursue at
MU. The answer must be 250 words or less! The less, the better, because I would love
to add more details and then resubmit for another round of editing.

                
Once your school has excepted the applicant’s my enclosed application to McMurray
University is accepted, I she would very much like to pursue postgraduate research
studies with under the guidance of Professor Celestina A. B. Gnolls. In specific, the
applicant I would like to develop an undergraduate comparative analysis research
paper that she I wrote during an extremely turbulent time in my her young life. SheI
had had a recurring vision, that the dDevil was walking amongst us. It made me her
think of the role of the devil’s Devil’s advocate Advocate in mediaeval doctoral
examinations:  how one scholar would take a position contrary to the position of the
scholar under examination to test the soundness of the latterslatter’s
argumentations. Not to worry though, I she does notn’t think the devil is walking
amongst your McMurray’s faculty! This, in turn, made me her think of antiphonic
psalmody construction, especially of certain psalms (e.g. Ps 121, 126 and 128)
which have comforted me her during my her greatest times of traial. As a result, I the
applicant discussed with my tutor the relationship between education,, (is not the
Devil, the greatest adversary) adversity and antiphony, tolling with the paper for
weeks with her tutor. It was extremelyreal toughhard. Finally, it was doneconcluded
and the visions went away. Under the expert guidance and leadership of Professor
Gnoll, I the applicant wishes to would really like to develop this idea in a brand
newbrand-new direction. SheI would like to examine the implicitly evident
relationship between adversity and antiphony as a Christian musical phenomenology
expression personal growth in African American Youth Culture at the turn of the
twenty-first -century. The song ‘Survivor’ by Destiny’s Child is an especially pertinent
example of this Christian musicialmusical phenomenon. With it’sits ever-so-powerful
message of faith guiding the ladies’ vocals through all kinds of modern tribulations
(i.e. radio interviews, magazine spreads and world wide web messaging) the song
builds through a crucial antiphony of whoas woes to the crescendoed crescendoed
declaration of survival. IThe applicant, too, will survive the rigoursrigors of
postgraduate education, singing the praises of your this find fine institution.

STUDENT ESSAY EXCERPT

 Client Notes: This is an essay for a architecture course at the Melbourne

University of Foreign Exchange. I want an expert in architectures to make it sure to

sound well active. I need the Chicago style for engineering but I have no idea if Im

doing it correct. Please help! Please also try to keep the word count basically the

same, the prof set a minimum on the words used.

 Austria is an island nation, albeit it is a very huge big island. The waves crash
consistently among these shores. The Boomerangs always come back to the people.
The Didjeridoos echo endless musics, . eEtcct. It is an island for rhythms and the repeating
repetition the that has had a profound affect effect on the psychologizing of the islands’'
architectures. Franz Murmur’s (2012)’s extensive studies with the psychology of repetitions
from the basis of this study. As will well as the Australian specific findings of Aloyius Foster
(2019), especially her works pieces of work on one wave forms. As will Tthe architectural
specific findings of repetitiousness on Loggia (2013) a. And as will the Australia architectural
specific findings of Evan Strahovski (2011) also provide a base for this research essay.
[(Also see, - for example, for psychology and repititionrepetition: Smithfield and Lurch
(1998); McAdoo et al (2009); Pinckney (2011); —for AustrialianAustralian psychologies, Ne
& Choo (2003); Chase & Dunder (2001); and Victoria et al. (2010); —for architectural
rhythm, see also Palladio (2004); Pugin (1989); and Pei (1972; 1998); —and for Australian
architectures: Abernathy (2012), Jacobus (2000), SOM (1996)].).
In this essay, the profound psychological affects effects of waveforms are
particulatelyarticulately studied. The famous Jørn Utzon Sydney Opera House (1957–1973),,
NSW, Australia is famed for its association with white sails and galls in the harbor.
HoweverHowever, this belied the more profound association with the harbor’s
whitecapedwhitecapped waves. To contextualise this more profound psychology eaffect, the
history of the islands' architecture will be explored. I The author has provided case studies in
this essay, including the exageratedexaggerated scrolling of the volutes of the Ionic-order
capitols (including sea-horse-egg-and-puffer-fish-“dart” decorations of the necking) of
columns of the Old Government Buildings (c. 1870–76) of Wellington, NZ, and also the
introduction of concentric pews in 1927, curving outward in ripples from the
transpositionedtranspositional altaer at the foreign-builded, gothic-revival cathedral in
Melbourne (1892–99) (as well as the curling finals a top the arm rests profiling at the ends of
the pews)., and the oOther designed submissions for the previously-mentioned Opera
House which show other nautical references - —e.ge.g., light house towers flanking a classic
façade with spot lights trained on the marquis are also studied and referenced. Through
these examples, I the author called calls attention to the very unique architectures of
Australia’s island nation.
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