Abasov Huseynagha

Reading and Writing III

Balanced Essay- Outline

12.01.2020

Advantages and Disadvantages of Advertising to Children

I. Introduction: Today, almost all the houses possess TVs, computer and other

practical electronic devices that attract the entire attention of family members.

Hook sentence: Of around 73% individuals who utilize those technical advancements

acquire some influences either negative or positive.

Thesis statement: Although the majority of children benefit from the TV ads, several

unfavorable demeanors have been sticking to them too.

II Main Body 1

Topic sentence: On the one hand, advertisements contain several advantages for the

development in children’s life.

A: They can be the resource of information

1. Innovative and up-to-date technological new

2. Acknowledging about the new product on the market

B: Ads possess motivative contents

1. Encouragement for the profession

 2. Chasing a particular dream or purpose

Main body II

Topic sentence: On the other hand, ads have particular effects on children that are the one of

the core downsides in the development.

A: Ads can provoke violent and aggressive opinions

1. Ad misunderstanding by the children

B: Ads are supposed to diminish self-confidence

1. Exaggerated ads

2. Falling in love with “ superior” manners

Conclusion: Even though all the consumers are almost certainly the target audience of both TV

company and advertisers, influential ads have more effect on children either advantageous or

disadvantageous. Several skeptics suppose that ads possess positive effects on children within

the framework of informative and motivative commercials; however, other believers and also me

consider that such ads have dominantly negative impacts on children.