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b. Say which two pictures were not described. Useful anguage: Describing * Use the present continuous to describe action in photographs Several people re waiting ata bus stop. + Use the present perfect (continuous) to talk about things that have a visible effect. Theyre out of breath because they've been running art 2: Describing, Speculating & Eliminating Task 2 GF for questions 6 - 10, match the extracts with the comments, listed AH. There are three items you “t's alla matter of preparation." "Iwas so disappointed.” “ts so unfair.” “rm not wortied any more,* “It all worked out in the end." "It's too difficult for me." “We've done all we can." "We achieved a lot" Ta ™™ One > AEAABG D Medicine in Action You will look at some scenes from operating ‘theatres. Student A, look at picture set 2A on page 253; Student B, look at picture set 2 on page 254, Do not look at each other's pictures, Ce ¢. Describe two of the pictures, saying what is happening and for what reason each photograph might have been taken. Talk for about 1 minute. d. Say which two pictures were not described, 5 _(,) Listen to two candidates doing the speaking ‘tasks above and compare their performance to that of your classmates, ‘Assess your classmates in terms of: * grammar and vocabulary * discourse management * pronunciation + interactive communication = Everyday English * Responding negatively 6 _Inpairs, guess and say what the other speaker says, a Noiidea, sorry. dd thaven't got the b Couldn't tell you faintest idea © Neverheard oft. eI can't help you, sorry. ‘A: Doyou know where Bilis? B: Noidea, sorry. 153Whistle While 154 ( Reading -Part3 ‘12 What does a referee's job involve? What difficulties might he encounter? b. You will read an article about Pierluigi Collina, a famous referee. Before you read, look at the title of the article. What attitude do you expect to have towards his job? ©. The following comments are made by Collina in the article. What do you think he means? Discuss with a partner, then read the article Quickly to see if you were right: * ‘im quite a normal man, realy + ‘Ateach step | was considered one of the best.” ‘© "Nobody is perfect. * ‘Idon’t want to start the match without trusting the players. d. Read the article. For questions 1-7, choose the best answer (A, B, C or D). 1 Collina's health disorder ‘A. has at times affected his refereeing B__ makes players view him with respect. ‘made him more popular with the public. D affected his appearance dramatically. 2 When the writer sees Collina for the first time, he is ‘A. disappointed by his appearance B impressed by his command of English C surprised at how ordinary he is D shocked by his manner. 3 Collina's university studies in Bologna A. enabled him to succeed in refereeing B__ made him want to become the best took place alongside his refereeing career. suffered from his involvement in football 4 Collina quotes the Fiorentina coach in order to show that ‘A. mistakes in football must be forgiven B footballers should not make mistakes, C refereeing mistakes can be quite serious. D_ attitudes towards goalkeepers are unfai 5 According to Colina, why do people say referees make ‘more mistakes today than in the past? A. Football techniques have changed B_ TV coverage is more effective © TVcameras cause confusion, D_ Refereeing decisions are more difficult 6 What does Collina refer to as ‘simulation’? ‘A. A form of cheating B Astyle of refereeing CA form of strategy D. Akind of injury you Pierluigi Coll less fierce off the pitch, and explains why diving is a crime against football. About 18 years ago, Pierlvigi Collina lost all his hair in the space of 15 days due to an attack of the litle understood disease alopecia. ‘| don’t know what happened,’ he says. “I don’t remember anything in particular that could have triggered the attack. All | con tell you is that | was 24.” It is Collina’s great achievement that the disorder which gave him such a distinctive look, and would have been the most memorable thing about almost any other referee, is not the reason why we all know him so well. Earlier this year he was voted best referee in the world for the fourth time in o row. As his wife, Gianna, opens the front door of the family home in Viareggio, Collina skips down the stairs. He exiends a hand and greets me in English. He is clearly as diligent o foreign language student as he is a referee. The first impression is that Collina looks much younger inthe’ flesh than he does on television. He says that a combination of his looks and. the concentration involved in refereeing may make him seem older = and, ‘occasionally, angrier - than he is. ‘But F'm quite a normal man, really.” Collina, born and brought up in Bologna, played football until he was 17 when a school friend suggested they attend a 7 What does Colina imply about the 1999 Barcelona match? ‘A Manchester United dichn't rally deserve to win B_ Refereeing stopped him from enjoying the game C He would have liked his presence to have been noticed D_He found the end of the match very exciting, ® Vocabulary Practice 2. Match the highlighted words/phrases in the article with their synonyms: tendency, in person, hard-working, characteristic, secured, neverthelessRar Ce eae A Coe sep 8 considered one of the best, sometimes the bes,” he says of the 14 years it took him to work his way ihrough the ranks to become a Serie A referee. He also 85 went to the University of Bologna, graduating with o degree in Economics. In 1991 he moved to Viareggio to work for a bank, which he sfil does as @ financial consullant {lialian referees ore not yet fulltime professionals). Does he think of himself as a referee or a 4 financial consultant? ‘t's not easy to say what my real job is, but being a financial adviser is something | will be doing long alter I've stopped refereeing,” Allittie same’ there is no doubting his commitment to football ond the sense of kinship he feels with his Fellow 45 relorees, and this is reflected in a sensitivity to questions about the standard of refereeing. He is weary of the idea that referees are the only people who make mistakes in football. ‘Nobody is perfect. In football, everyone tries to do their best, bul sometimes they con't, | remember a 40 short speech by Giovanni Trapattoni, given while he was the coach of Fiorentina, three or four years ago. His goolkeeper had made a terrible mistake, which cost his team decrly. Trapationi said afterwards, "If a player cannot commit an error on the field, then we might as 45 well stop ploying this game and go home now.” And | think it has to be the same for the referee, too.” He regards television as ‘an unequal instrument” when it comes to recording refereeing mistokes ‘i's too easy to find an angle of vision different from my angle of vision 4 that could show clearly that something happened in diferent way from the way | judged. That's why it seems as though nowadays there ore mony more refereeing misiokes than there were 15 years ago. Back then there were only three cameras in the middle of the field 45 covering the whole playing area. Now there are 16 Text Analysis 3. What does the writer mean by the following? 1... Colla skips down the stairs... 3. fd dean forgotten Pierluigi Colina was in charge that night . (1 96-97 Discussion 4 a. How important is the concept of ‘fair play’ in sport? Discuss in groups. ‘Maybe at the next World Cup there will be 20. later, though, he does waver over whether television may help in eliminating what he calls ‘simulation’ - what we know as ‘diving’ ~ « player falling deliberately to fool the referee inio awarding a foul or — quite often - a penalty, Collina sees diving as a crime against fellow workers. ‘Al the end of the day, all footballers are colleagues. | think gaining an unfair advantage by diving con create a lot of problems for an opponent. The result of a relegation match, for instance, could end a player's career. So | think a player should think carefully, very carefully, before diving.” Trust in players is a recurring theme with Collina and, even if you suspect there must be some notable ‘exceptions, its equally possible to believe that the secret of his success is his inclinalfon to think the best of the 22 others he shores pitch with. ‘I don’t wantitestart a match without trusting the players because | couldn't have a good working relationship with a man I didn’t trust, I's impossible.” Ad ea gech he ost enloved being port off Ref Usually gets in the way” OF enjoying the felon dsp, ‘ou hour och ‘emotion, and | think no one will Champions League 1999 final Munich 1, Manchester Unit ‘one of the greatest moments in They say the ultimate succe you hardly notice his presence. b. Which of the following adjectives can be used to describe Collina's personality as portrayed in the article? Justify your answers by referring to the article. Discuss in pairs. * affable * conscientious * hard-working * strict * principled * unapproachable * respectable 155156 English in Use Inversion Grammar Reference Rewrite the following sentences beginning with the words given. There is an example. 1. They waited for the captain’s signal and then they jumped into the water. Not until che captain had given the signal did they jump into the water. 2 As soon as his mother lft, he stated playing computer games, No sooner 3 It was such a beautiful day that | decided to go sunbathing on the beach Such 4 Once Jason had agreed, they went ahead with the plan only 5 had no idea that she was planning a surprise party for me litle a 6 Samantha nether joined the dance club nor went to the gym, ‘Samantha didnt jon the dance club, nor 7 The supermarket was so busy that we postponed doing the shopping So Finish the following sentences using your own words Only by talking to my fiends Not until Litle did | know that At no time in my life Hardly ever Under no circumstances Not unless tar relly ill Only if the forecast is good Modal Verbs sz Grammar Reference @Vaununs Complete the sentences with the following modal verb forms and explain their meanings. * must have * should have * might have * could have * can’t have * shouldn't have ‘* might not have * needn't have 1 That been John you saw at the match ~ he's out of the country at the moment. 2 You brought sandwiches there's a perfectly good cafeteria, 3. What a mess you've made! YOU s.r. been more careful. 4 I don’t know why she didn’t ask me how to do it =I easily helped her. 5 She .. ‘thought you were too busy ~ | can't think of any other reason, 6 Martin really .. borrowed my tennis racket without asking fist 7 | don't know wiy Fiona’s so late; do you think she got lost coming here? 8 She ‘managed to find the time to come you know how busy she is. Look at the notice about new regulations at a swimming pool. Explain them informally to a friend, using all of these verbs at least once. ‘© can * must © have to © mustn't © needn't ‘don't have to * had to « didn’t have to Inthe past you had to take out annual membership, butnow.. If swimming is a good way to lose weight, how come whales weigh two tons?English in Use ~ Port 2 5, _ Fill the gaps with one word. such thing as a safe junch ‘Mer months f slepless rights 0). and ueting hospital visits to teat . ss one-year-old daughter's fezema, Giorgio Locatelli and his wife, Pay, Set Off 2) ocnnnnsnne the HOt, ry, healing climate ofthe South of France. ‘We borowed a friend's house,’ says PN), 3) oeeeennenenr the doctors sald We should try to get Margherita in the sun, sine her skin was so bad.’ At the airpor, Gogio bought smoked salmon. Moeninwnsinn % OCOCK they fed Wargherta a morsel of fish, sunbathed for BWM, 5) nnn Plaxy went Indoors for a sleep while Margherita and ter rne-year-old brother, Jack, played. Twenty minutes 6) ..nrnesenennn 9 says Ply, ‘my son came up and said, ‘Mummy, there's something wrong f)-.. Margherta.” 1 went ownstars and 8) she was with er head 8) size of a footbal and her lips swelled out, not trething property.” 10) on Plaxy and Giorgio were witnessing for the first time was ‘ephylavis, a severe allergic reaction 1). food that can kil wihout an immediate jab of adrenaline ) kick-start the respiratory system, At the hospital, 13) @ shot was quickly administered, Wargherta recovered immediately, ‘When weld)... Margherita tested,” Says her mother, ‘we found she was ‘eric to 896 different things. Fish, nuts, fomatoes, peppers, chill, paprika, eggs — mest of the things a healthy child 1). ‘no problem eating, rely. Thank God she likes polenta, thank God she likes potatoes. a w 6 a Dependent prepositions Fill the gaps using in, to, against, for, on, into, and between. Then, make sentences with 6 of the prepositional phrases to show their meaning. Ttorely 4 to convert sth sthisb; 2 to object sth; 5 to distinguish one's safety; 7 to be opposed sth; 9 to have trust sth; 10 to rebel sth, 3 to yea sth; sth and sth; 6 to have fear sth; 8 to be prejudiced sth English in Use - Part 3 In most of the lines in the following text, there is an unnecessary word. For questions 1-16, find the unnecessary words and write them on the lines provided. If you think a line contains no unnecessary word, put a tick V) next to it. George Koitanovsk,, who he has died aged 96, set world chess records for blindfold play, He was the world's best at simultaneous blindfold chess, which requires for @ player to rake moves from memory while his opponents move normally. Born in Antwerp, Koltanowiski took up chess seriously at 14, and was Belgian champion within the three years. His family they expected him to follow his father as a clamond cutter, but he copted for chess full time and had discovered his rare talent: in 1930, he broke Richard Ret's world record only by playing 30 games very simultaneous, winning 20 and drawing 10 in 13 hours. He surpassed this on September 20th, 1937 in Edinburgh with 24 wins, 10 draws and no more defeats in 13.5 hours. He con to perform his bindfold show into his late eighties ‘which hosted a chess television show, set uP president of the US Chess continued He wrote books, youth programmes and became Federation, He was being one of three founding members of the US chess hall of fame, with Paul Morphy, the fist great US champion, and Bobby Fischer. His wife Leah, 93, survives him.158 © Words often Confused 8 Say sentences that show the difference in meaning between the words in each set. Use a dictionary if you wish 1 nervous / neurotic 5 wonder / wander 9 economic / economical 2. shadow / shade 6 agreeable / agreed 10 sensitive / sensible 3 tasteful/ tasty 7 opposed / opposite 4. destroy / spoil 8 effect /affect 9 For questions 1-15, select the most appropriate word (A, B, C or D) to complete each gap. Despite being paid over £3m a year by Ford, enough to live wherever he 0) ..A... , Colin McRae is still 1) ou... in the unpretentious Scottish town where he was born. True, he has a(n) 2)... in Monaco and a yacht in Majorca, but much of the time when he isn't rallying he isin Lanark. In the pub, the regulars 3) ..... give him a second glance, which is one of the eal 4) .....» of his job: since he spends his 5) ....... professional life with his 6)... concealed behind a helmet, he can enjoy his wealth without the associated inconveniences of fame. Next month, McRae 7)...» in the RAC Rally of Great Britain - at the end of which he hopes to be 8) smn world champion once again. When he first did it, he was 27. Rallying, he says, 9) ....... a vast accumulation of knowledge and experience to 10) .....» to the top. At 33, he feels he still has many more years left in him and many more things he would like to achieve. For a 11) ......., he'd like t0 see his sport 12) ... more popularity. This, he hopes, will come from a new television 13) .... that begins next 14) ...... ~a contract with Channel 4. The channel will be showing regular 15) from every rallying event around the globe. 0 A fancies B fantasises imagines D pictures 1A founded B established € based D centied 2 A location B place © area D land 3A hardly B roughly slightly D narrowly 4A awards B rewards C prizes D. honours, 5 A complete B entire € total D fall 6 A features B elements C characters D aspects, 7 A attempts 8 competes C contests D challenges 8 A awarded By topped C crowned ‘D peaked 9A requires! B requests C asks D eppeals 10_ A c@ach Barve succeed D oet 11 A beginning Bifirst C start D lead 12. goin B take add Dicollect, 13 arrangement B pact C deal D business 14 season B time € period D term 15. A moments B flashes C sights D highlights © Register Transfer 10 Complete the sentences for each situation with a maximum of two words in each gap. 1. + Reminder note from employer to employee: 2 + Keyppoints tobe included in letter to customers David, don’t Forge to let everyone know about the \We don’t charge fo teling people how much the reps wi ‘new time and place ofthe meeting cost. ff we come across any more problems with the car a + Memo: we're working on it, we always ask the customer before we Ths isto that the time and fit, place ofthe monthly meeting has as follos:+ Letter to customers 4+ "Note fom curator to museum quide We will give you a(n) before Tall visitors not to touch anything, ‘we start repiing your car, nd we wll ot undertake» Museum quid to vistors additional repais without your 1 do ask you to fom touching the extibits 3 © Note: Betty tll everyone that Johnson will nt be there he's gone down with the fu * Announcement Unfortunately, Mr alan Er nglish in Use Part 5 11 For questions 1-13, read the following note. Based on the information in the note, complete the e-mail that follows. The words you need do not occur in the note, Use no ‘more than two words in each Gap. There is an example (0) Members may enter their team for the tournament by 2) Centre's reception. The captain of each team 4) however, for the other players to hold a Sports Centre 6) Players named for each team is ten, Only Addington Universi thefournament, and a registration fee of £30 per team 9) M... ‘The Gannochy Sports Centre is pleased to ann ‘Wheld over the ‘months of January and February (exact dates to 1) . date for team registration is December 9th, For 13) mn 845-415426 or visit www.addington ac.uk/gannochy, 5. * Key point tobe included in advertisement We visit our lents regulary to make sure the equipment has no problems — for nothing, + Advertisement Johnson will be + Wewill attend due to a sudden Your equipment weekly - of charge! Stephen, Can | leave It to you to write an e-mail to all members about ‘the forthcoming basketball tournament? Remember to mention the following: * The tounament wil take place over January and February (Wwe'll let them know when the exact dates are fixed). * They must fill in a registration form to enter - they can find those at reception. * Only registered members can be captains (but other team members don't have to be registered). 9 * At least 10 players per team. All players have to be full-time Addington students, + £30 per team registration fee. ; * Money raised (registration fees, sponsorship, TV money, ticket sales) to be gven to a local charity. * They must register their team by December Oth at the latest. Tell them to call us if they need to know more. ounce the 4th College Basketball Tournament, The Tournament will be the registration form 3) the ~- @ tegistered member of the Sports Centre; there is ty full-time students are 8) .160 Writing Combined Trans Sometimes, you can be asked to produce two pieces of ‘writing, for example a 200-word artide and a 50-word letter, oa 175-word report and a 75-word memolnotice, For the shorter task, you should remember the following: ‘+ Memos often begin with deta such as: To: The Principal From: The Student Sports Committee ‘and may have short heading, e.g. NEW SPORTS STADIUM ‘You should then write 2-3 short paragraphs. Notices, Advertisements and Announcements usualy begin with a heading (e.g, TO ALL STUDENTS INTENDING TO GO ON THE GEOLOGY FIELD TRIP) and address a large «gr0up of people or the general public Notes, Messages and Short Letters are lke letters but are \waitten in an abbreviated style Al ofthe above may contain bullet points, but remember that the examiner needs to see your ability to write connected English If you have to write two tasks, the register is usually very different for each task, so you have to show clear differences between formal and informal writing, Itis also very important to keep to the word limit. = Understanding the Rubric (1) a. Read the rubric below and underline the key words and phrases. Then tick the appropriate boxes for the questions that follow. © You are planning 2 week's business trip to England. You asked a friend who lives there to recommend somewhere to stay that includes health and fitness facilities. Read the letter and the advertisement your friend sent you together with the notes you have made. Then, using all the information provided, write a) alletter to the hotel, making enquiries based on your notes. (approx 200 words) ») an appropriate note to your friend, (approx 50 words) For the letter to the hotel: 1. You should write aninformalletter [] a formal letter [7] 2 Your reason for writing isto: make an application [=]. reserve a room [=] recommend a hotel [_] ask for information [] present information [—] 3. tis going to be read by: someone you dont know [] someone you know [=] For the note to your friend: 4. You should write: an informal note [] a formal note [1] 5. Your reason for witng sto: «ask for information [—] say thank you [=] arrange a business trip [—] arrange a meeting [—] 6 tis going to be read by: someone you know [—] someone you don’t know [—] D Processing the Reading Input (1) b. Now look at the reading input and your notes. Then answer the questions below. \ Caudwell | pot seak? Club Hotel | prices? Our Club Hotel offers special deals to non-members. either visiting London on business or | Ca" Non-members, for pleasure, but who want all the } vse all the: faclties of a health and sports dub | fy. ititec? . ‘thrown in. We offer all the normal ~ facilities of a luxury hotel, with the facilities of a state-of the-art ? health club. These include: Booking. ‘= gymnasium necessary? I ‘+ swimming pool ( cont + wiirpoo! spa '* saunas, steam rooms, massage f + squash courts ‘© members’ restaurant and lounge For further information, please contact Peter White at: ... } Brochure? Glad 10 hear you're coming to England. I know it's business before pleasure, but I hope you'l find the time in ‘your busy schedule o pay us a visit. (Duncan's realy grown since you last saw him.) Right, down to business. Looked at several places, but {found this the most suitable - it was also recommended by a ‘iiend. Hope i's what you want. Tremember that you like all racket sports (and I want revenge forthe last time we played squash). Let us know what you decide, and give us a call when you arrive ~ maybe we can arrange something. Alllthe best. Jim & PatWhich of the following should you include? For the letter to the hotel: 2 request for details about special deals and prices your praise for the number of facilities on offer a query about the use of faites by non-members a question about the need to book sports fcities a description of your sporting abilities ‘ mention of the fact that you have a friend in the area 2 request fora brochure 2 complaint about the lack of information about prices in the advertisement polite and formal phrases For the note to your friend: 4 teminder that your visits strictly business [| a request for'a photograph of Duncan an expression of thanks forthe trouble they have gone to a promise to contact your fiend when you ae in England a negative comment about your fiends poor squash playing friendly, informal phrases D Analysing the Model (1a) 2. Read the model below and cross out the phrases in bold that are not appropriate. Give reasons for your choices. Then answer the questions that follow. Dear MrWhite, Jam planning a business trip to London at the end of next ‘nth and | 1) want you to tell me / am writing to enquire ‘bout the avalabilty of rooms at your hotel for the week Friday ‘tht july to Saturday 3rd August. However, | 2) require some further information / need to know a couple of things tefore| make a firm decision. 3)To start with, your ad says nothing about / First of “allyour advertisement does not give details of the special for non-members. | would be grateful if you could send me alstof room prices and detals ofthe facilites provided. Secondly, 4) are all your facilities open to non- ‘members? J can | use whatever | like in the hotel? For ‘eanpe, the member's restaurant and lounge and, of course, al sporting facilities. Lam a keen squash player and would lke to ‘now if would have use of the courts, whether or not | would ‘teed to book, and if this is included in the overall price. Finaly.| would be interested in receiving a brochure with full of the hotel, 5) I'd like it / I would be grateful if you ‘send me this information before the end of next week in that | can make my booking as soon as possible. ‘Write to me soon. / I look forward to hearing from 1) Does the letter deal with all the major points in the rubric? 2. What effect would the letter have on the target reader? How would this effect change if the inappropriate phrases had been used? 3. How has the writer divided the letter into paragraphs? Analysing the Model (1b) “@ The model below is too long and uses the wrong register. Replace the underlined parts with the correct alternatives. * All the best, * written to * Thanks for everything you've done * | bet he's gorgeous » asked them ‘I'm looking forward to seeing Duncan * I'l call you as soon as! arrive ‘Dear Jim and Pat, ‘Thanks for the note and the Tve 1) entered into correspondence with the hotel and have 2) submitted a formal © writen request for more information, but I reckon I'l stay there ' anyway. 3) Lam deeply indebted to you for the considerable trouble you have put yourself to on my behalf. Td love to see you when I'm over. 4) It will be a source of delight to see your son, D '5) feel confident that he will ‘have grown into a fine young man by now. © 6) Loi telephone you upon my arival.in England, Hope we ‘© can arrange something. b 7) Sincerely yours, Ted D Formal and informal writing 4. The formality or informality of your writing depends on your reason for writing and your target reader. Say whether the following are features of formal (F) or informal () writing? [TJ complex sentence structure ] sophisticated vocabulary short forms frequent use ofthe passive voice colloquialspoken language less complex grammatical constructions 'b. Re-write the informal sentences 1-6 on p. 162 in a more formal style, as in the example. Then say which of the features from Ex. 4a have been used. 161162 1. Tellyouwhat; trya herbal remedy instead. 2. If youwant to know more, drop us a line or give us aring at 3. We fired a time to get together but he just never showed up. 4 What most people don't like about the cub is that there's just not enough to do there 5 reckon ths job's right up your street. 6 You've got to dress right for an interview if you're banking on getting the job D Editing short Tasks 5 pe Los If you are asked to write a shorter task, such as a memo, notice, note or short letter, it is important ‘that you do not go too far over the word limit. This means that your writing must be succinct and you may have to use simpler sentences and contracted forms. Match the phrases below with their shorter forms on the right. anyone who ths might apply to a consider at the earliest opportunity b those concerned bear in mind © please (on a weekly or a monthly basis d regularly Fd like to express my gratitude e thanks think about the possibility of f those responsible people who have done this 9 remember I would be grateful if h Look at the following sentences and, with a partner, discuss the words and phrases that could be omitted or shortened. Then re-write the sentences in a shorter form, as in the example. 1. | would greatly appreciate it if anyone who is interested could contact me by Friday the thiteenth atthe latest. Could anyone intersted please contact me no later than Friday 13th? 2 | feel that its important that we think seriously about the possiblity of relocating our business premises in Order to attain doser proximity to the bulk of our potential market 3. Could all members please bear in mind that the rules and regulations are in place in order to serve the needs Of the club as a whole and any action which is seen by the committee as a contravention could result in the expulsion of individual members, ~~ 7] promptly I 4. As requested in your memo dated 23rd August, I have Implemented the safety requirements outlined in the proposal 5. I would appreciate it enormously if you would be so kind 5 to look carefully at the report and refer back to me ‘with any comments or observations that you may have. D _ Understanding the Rubric (2) a. Read the rubric below and underline the key words and phrases. Then answer the questions that follow. You are the secretary of your local sports lub and your chairman has asked you to survey the opinions of lub members and write a proposal suggesting ways of improving the dub and attracting moe members. Your proposal should cover such aspects as: facities, equipment, and socal activities, After reading the notes and the comments below, write 4) your proposal forthe chairman (approximately 200 words) and ) 2 notice for the club notice board thanking members for their cooperation (approximately 50 words) What do you have to write? \What is your role in vttng these tasks? Who are your target readers for each task? How formal does your writing need to be? \What isthe purpose of each task? Will you use headings? if so can you suggest appropriate ones? D> Processing the Reading Input (2) b. Look at the reading input for the tasks above. Recommend the following + do wp the entrance * rent, rather than buy, some new exercise © Comments from Students © 6 “The entrance is amess~ equipment pee * itrodice « programme | @ Wete’s peeing paint ue © 6 some ofthe equipment is * step wp local advering @ * et cldand doen work ° sa propery’ S what social acvities222” © "We need to advertise - 1 only found out about the club fom ‘© someone at school”Based on the notes and comments in the reading input, filln the gaps in the phrases below with a suitable word. You should aim to paraphrase the words/phrases given in the notes. 1. Asecond suggestion is to local advertising 2 | would like to propose the ofa range of activities. 3 | suggest that wwe make enquiries about equipment. 4 recommend that this area be Analysing the Model (2a) © Read the model and fill in the gaps with an sentence appropriate from Ex. 7b. Then answer the questions that follow. To: Mr Partridge, Chairman From; Jeremy Blaine, Club Secretary Subject: Suggestions for improvements and increasing ‘membership Date: 28" March 2004 Introduction The purpose of this proposal is to suggest improvements to theclub and to present ideas for increasing membership. Club Facitities The two main areas of dissatisfaction among members are the condition of the main entrance and the fact that certain items of exercise equipment are out of date. First of all, therefore, 1) With regard to the ‘eeond problem, 2)... «This would avoid incurring the expense of purchasing new apparatus. Social Activities 7. e » including visits to local athletics events and sports matches. Inter-club activities should ako be considered, as this would provide our members with an extra incentive to train, Increasing Membership One way to increase club membership would be to address the matters discussed above as soon as possible. 4) Pe + emphasising the programme of activities mentioned above. Conclusion ‘Tosum up, I feel confident that improving the premises and updating the equipment will attract new membership. The elect of this can then be reinforced by a concentrated aevertsing campaign, o Does the model contain all the points from the reading input? 2 How does the register in the model differ from the register in the reading input? 3. Has the writer lifted exact words and phrases from the reading input? Find examples of paraphrasing, 4 What effect do you think this proposal will have on the target reader? Analysing the Model (2b) a. Compare the two notices below. Which is not appropriate? Why? Think in terms of * layout + register « content Notice ‘To All Members Ieee ‘Thank you all for taking part in the survey. Your input it the ally useful, and Tve submitted a proposal to ‘Shaman based on my Snings. anyone wants to see a copy, please let me know. ‘As you know, we're trying to increase membership, 60 ould you each do you bit and spread the word? ‘Thanks again, Jeremy Blaine ‘Club Secretary, To members of the club: | have now Submitted the findings of my research to the chairman. Should you require inspection of a Copy, please contact me on ext, 217, A significant effort is currently being made to increase membership, so Ido ask you that You contribute. Jeremy Blaine, . Look at the ‘good! notice and answer the questions. 1. Does the notice follow the instructions in the rubric? 2. How does the register in this notice differ from the register inthe proposal? 3 What effect do you think this notice will have on the target reader? 163Discuss pty. 110 Read the rubrics and the reading input and underline the key information. Then, using the material you have learned in this unit, write one of the tasks A You and ten other students went on a schoo! trip toa summer sports camp which promised a wide varity of sporting activities and instruction in each spor. it was the fist time your school had been to this particular camp, and on your return your teacher asked you to compare nates onthe trip. Read the original advertisement and the comments you have collected and write 2) report for your head teacher outlring the positive and negative features of the trip and recommending wether the school should send students there next year (about 175 words); b) a memo to the other students who went on the trip with you asking them to read over your report and suagest any changes that should be made (about 75 words). Fe ungalow leaky root bit cold at nigh, Food Simple but good & lots of it nly two barbecue nights Limited choice at mareg but adequate for roughing i General Middle of nowhere — fi Age had good an : shovel Mt Spm by 8 You work for your lacal newspaper and your editor has sent you the memo below in order to help you write an article about the hospital in your area. Read the memo and the notes you have made and write: a) anarticle about the hospital for the newspaper (about 200 words); b) note to your editor explaining the point of view you have decided to present in your article (about 50 words). MEMO Mr Smith was unlucky (or wot mad) it Semel! Went to see for melf: tate | ‘To: James Wileox gs eae) of-the-art monitors and curgical From: Sharon Taylor, Editor Average response time in town equipment. Some. stuff old but = 10 winvtes (among. the bet Mlnerkinggorfoct James, "g rae ee rerferth Got a letter from a Mr Smith complaining about inthe country!) Bankside hospital. It sounds awful. Look into it and ‘rite an article based on what you find out. His main i a points were: Spoke fo dectors and mse aie mete Ambulances take too long (he waited 45 minutes) Seemed to care alot bt sy ay yee © Waited another hour for anyone tosee him —____theye's rot enough of them mentioning, though! “SE © Terribly out-dated equipment prt ncties © Food is awful 164