Editing

I cut the documentary down to ten minutes by:

 Cutting out of repeating of the same point in different sentences.

 I slit parts of the interviews up then cut and rearranged them so
different clips of the same interviews would be mixed with different
clips from other interviews.
Other editing, I done:
 I fixed spelling mistakes/ working in the sentence in the questions on.
 I added more transitions to the documentary.
 I fixed the colour slightly.

Changes
Made
Intro

I made the intro different by:

 I edited the second interview clip in

the intro so the jump that was in the Background music
original make was not included.
 Matching the photo change between  I made cuts and
each picture in the intro to the beat rearrange of the
drops in the background music. background music as
 I added a transition between the parts of it was either too
staring interview clips of the high or slow in pitch.
documentary to fade into the intro.  I also shorten it to
 I cut out some of the video from the match the length of the
man walking in the intro so I could video, add fade ins and
slow the clip down without adding outs.
any more time onto the intro.