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Classification Essay Final Draft A
Classification Essay Final Draft A
Classification Essay Final Draft A
Classification Essay
10/6/2020
Zoom goes the speed demon flying down the interstate passing every car imaginable, as
a person in their car yells, shaking their fist in the air at the slow person driving in the left lane.
These are the typical drivers that are seen on the roads all over America. Each type of driver is
unique in their own way and has different characteristics. The road rager, the left lane sloth, and
the fast and furious want-to-be are the three most common drivers that keep America's roads
filled.
The constant anger at other drivers is the staple characteristic for a road rage driver.
They typically get mad at drivers that are going the speed limit and not five over even though
the speed limit is the legal limit. If another driver changes into their lane, it is as if it is the end of
the world because they now do not have a clear open lane to drive in. Even if everything is
going according to plan on the road, the road rage driver still finds a reason to be mad, or
sometimes doesn’t even need a reason to be mad. One thing is for sure, the left lane sloth
The left lane sloth is the one driver that no matter what kind of road they are on, will
always cruise in the left lane. While cruising in the left lane, they tend to hold up traffic by either
going the speed limit or going under the speed limit, which the left lane is known as the passing
lane, not the slow lane. For some reason they have an urge to be in the left lane when in
actuality, they should be in the right lane if they want to drive at a slower pace. In America, the
Honda CR-V is the stereotype car for the left lane sloth to drive and is dreaded by other drivers
when seen. It is seen as a sign that they will be a slow driver. Not only does the left lane sloth
make the road rager mad, but it frustrates the Fast and Furious want-to-be.
Swerving through all the traffic and passing every single car on the road is the Fast and
Furious want-to-be. The only way these fast drivers are going to stop is if they see red and blue
lights flashing behind them. Some drive fast for fun, but sometimes they floor it because they
have poor time management skills. They don’t leave on time for appointments or events which
can be a reason for them to speed so they have a chance to be on time to where they need to
be. Going twenty over the speed limit is a felony, but going nineteen isn’t. The Fast and Furious
want-to-be may not be smart enough to realize there is a speed limit for a reason, but they are
smart enough to try to avoid a felony. They either speed like there is no tomorrow, or they are
America has all kinds of crazy drivers, but the most common and stereotypical are the
road rager, the left lane sloth, and the Fast and Furious want-to-be. As each kind of driver has
their own characteristics, they are all connected. The left lane sloth makes the road rager mad
as the Fast and Furious want-to-be flies by both the rager and the sloth upsetting the rager and
scaring the sloth. All are crazy, but all are unique.
1. Name two specific things that you liked about this essay.
a.I liked the amount of descriptive writing that was involved in the essay
b.I also like the amount of detail that was involved in the essay
2. Does this essay have a thesis statement? If so, write the thesis here.
Yes, Each type of driver is unique in their own way and has different characteristics. The
road rager, the left lane sloth, and the fast and furious want to be are the three most common
drivers that keep America's roads filled.
drivers
5. How many categories does the author use to divide the topic? What are those categories?
three:road rager, the left lane sloth, and the Fast and Furious
6. Are there categories that you can think of that the author has missed in his or her division of
the topic? Write them here.
I cannot think of any other categories, I think she covered the most common ones.
7. Are the categories well-organized? Is there a category that doesn't belong in this
classification?
Overall, The categories are well organized and well thought out. The only thing that I
would change is the specificity between the road rager and the fast and furious want to be, but
that is very minor.
8. Are there grammatical or mechanical errors? If so, please provide assistance on this sheet of
paper.
Yes, she finishes her essay by restating her thesis as well as explains how all the
categories are connected in some way.
Overall, I thought that the structure of the essay was very good and thought out. There
wasn't too much excess information. The only thing there is to fix concerns grammatical errors
but they are not anything major. Lastly I think that she made her point vivid in each paragraph of
the essay and was able to successfully get her point across to the reader.