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Blossoming 2
Blossoming 2
Blossoming
When I started high school, I was a small tree, and I had not bloomed yet. Now after four
years, I have grown into a much larger tree. My branches will keep growing till I reach the
highest point. The tree represents my skills as a writer and how much I have grown.
As a freshman, my writing skills were average, my thesis statements were always weak,
and I had several grammatical errors. Now that I am a senior, my writing skills have vastly
improved because now I feel more confident writing an essay on any topic. My goal this year
was to write more professionally, so I could prepare for college. Another goal that I had was to
eliminate grammatical errors because grammar was always an issue for me as a writer. Having so
many grammatical errors also lowered my credibility as a writer. I also wanted to challenge
With a lot of time and effort, I was able to achieve my goals. It was a challenge at first to
approach a new method but after a lot of practice, I achieved my goals. I made my papers more
professional by having a main central argument and by adding supporting details. I used higher
vocabulary, and I formed more complex sentences throughout my essays to make the overall
paper more professional. I also improved my grammar and syntax a lot more in my essays by
revising my papers. I read through my essay multiple times to check for mistakes, and I also read
it backward to check the flow of my essay. Through this class, I learned how to write different
types of papers from, literary analysis to research papers. Learning these types of essays will
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help me grow as a writer when I go to college. Since writing for me is like a tree growing, my
Since I will start my college journey soon, my future plans are to grow as a writer
especially, for research papers. I intend to major in biology, and I will write many research
papers on various topics. My goal is to use higher vocabulary and support my thesis statement
with supporting evidence. My branches will keep growing from here, and I hope to use my