TYPES OF TRANSPORTATION USED BY UNIVERISY STUDENTS TO RETURN HOME FROM 2012

TO 2015 AND THE REASON FOR CHOOSING THE PARTICDULAR TRANSPORT (what year?)

The percentage of university students who used various types of transport to return home from
2012 to 2015 is shown in Figure 1 and Table 1 shows the explanation why university students
use that specific transport (year?). In general, the percentage of university students who used
various forms of transport was usually affected by the purpose for using it.
In 2014, buses recorded 55% as a form of transport used by university students for them to
return home, while taxis recorded 5% in the same year (good). Next, the method of transport
used by university students in 2013 was train which recorded 23% , which then rose to 30% in
2014. (Your 2nd analysis is understandable but can be adjusted to > Next, train was chosen as a
method of transportation by 23% students in 2013 which then rose to 30% in 2014.)
In 2012, because of inexpensive fare, convenient access, flexible time, and destination, buses
reported the highest percentage (75 percent) as types of transport in 2012 by university
students. In the same year, the lowest percentage (3 percent) was registered by taxi, on the
other hand, because the rate is not fair for the students. (Good synthesis but don’t forget to
mention the year in the second sentence/analysis). The number of aircraft was 10 per cent in
2014, which remained the same in 2015. (Good analysis, better if included in previous
paragraph)
In summary, the percentage of the type of transport that university students use to return home
is affected by the reason for choosing it. (What year?)