Group 19 Assignment 1

by Rory Wilson

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GRADEMARK REPORT

FINAL GRADE GENERAL COMMENTS

Instructor

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Comment 1
Hi Group 19,

Your mark is 23 out of 25. You have produced a high quality work with the highlight being your
exec summary and recommendations. Some of your detail is a little generic and you could have
extended yourselves in some areas but overall a work to be pleased with.

Work receiving a high distinction grade will generally exhibit the f ollowing characteristics:

- Completely answers the question using correct techniques with correct answers
- Contains striking originality of approach or analysis (f or example may challenge current
techniques and provide alternatives)
- Demonstrates exhaustive or innovative research

Overall, clear potential to produce original ideas, based on sound, specialised knowledge that
challenge and extend terms of debate. High level of critical analysis and mastery of material.

T hanks,

Gerard

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Comment 2
Exec summary meets all expectations of content and is well structured.
 Comment 3
Good recommendation - well written with enough detail to provide justif ication to management.

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Comment 4
Consider adding a visualisation to your process.

Add additional research ref erences (make sure you demonstrate your legitimacy).

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Comment 5
Add comment on link to RBS - or better describe RBS bef ore table.

Comment 6
T his could also be shown on RBS

Comment 7
T ry to be specif ic and measurable with descriptions, outcomes and triggers. For example at
what point does a cost estimation become an issue not a risk? Your team will need to have a
specif ic range where it is actioned (e.g. escalated).

Comment 8
Ideally on a project you would balance a number of approaches - there may not be appetite to
spend on mitigating/minimising

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Comment 9
Add comments on what this is showing.

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Comment 10
Good comments.

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Comment 11
Good to see the details of the costs side by side with numbers - management may have
alternatives to consider or only want to give you part of budget.
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Comment 12
Space this by side of image f or readability/useability.

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Comment 13
Good summary

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Comment 14
Good supporting evidence - section well developed.

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Comment 15
Clear, concise section - include some points on the actions you need to enable your
recommendations and the project.

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QM RBS lack of details

Where is your commentary?

What are you showing here and why? How will this impact the management of the project?

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