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Writing Lesson 01 - Final - July 5
Writing Lesson 01 - Final - July 5
4 STEPS TO CLEMENCY
First we want to show you the four-step method we’ve developed to help you pick out where the 7 DEADLY SINS
lie in every WRITING AND LANGUAGE TEST question you face. Here’s a chart of the four steps.
Step 1 Understand the purpose of the Paragraph.
Step 2 Read and Decode the meaning of sentence and try to SENSE the SIN
Step 3 Replace the SIN, if any, with your own words or phrases.
Step 4 If there is NO SIN, go with NO CHANGE.
7 DEADLY SINS
The same types of grammar errors pop up again and again on WRITING AND LANGUAGE TEST question. Our list
of 7 DEADLY SINS tells you what kinds of errors to look and listen for, but you also need to know precisely what
each one means. Below we provide a bit more background and plenty of examples to help make sure you’ve got
each SIN squared away in your head.
A word of advice: When going through the examples below, read them out loud to yourself. Hearing what sounds
right and what sounds wrong can help burn these grammar rules into your brain. Also, we know from experience
that it’s easy to space out while studying grammar. Talking out loud will help keep you focused. Ready to get
familiar?
SIN 1: Subject-Verb Agreement [ICCS]
The fundamental rule about the grammatical relationships between subjects and verbs is this:
• If you have a singular subject, you must use a singular verb. If you have a plural subject, you must use a
plural verb.
It sounds simple, and usually it is. For example, you know that it’s incorrect to say candy are good or concerts is fun.
However, in a few instances, subject-verb agreement can get hairy. There are four varieties of subject-verb
problems the SAT Writing section loves to test:
1. When the subject comes after the verb [Inverted Sentence]
2. When you have an either/or or neither/nor construction [Correlative Conjunctions]
3. When the subject seems plural but isn’t [confusing subject]
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Even though Internet is an essential tool for students to prepare assignment of their courses,
1 there is many people who refused to allow using internet, saying it might deviate students’
attention.
1
a) NO CHANGE
b) there were
c) there are
d) are there
The answer is C. The SAT frequently uses this exact formulation, so be wary if you see a comma followed by the
word there. In this kind of sentence, it’s tempting to assume that just because the word there comes before the verb
is, there is the subject—but it’s not. People is the subject. And since people is plural, the matching verb also must be
plural. Is is a singular verb, and therefore incorrect in this sentence.
2) Prepositional Phrase
Even when you don’t see the red flag of there is, don’t just assume that the subject always comes before the verb.
Look at the following sentence:
Atop my sundae, a colossal mass of ice cream, whipped cream and sprinkles, 2sits two maraschino
cherries.
2
a) NO CHANGE
b) two sit
c) sit two
d) sit one
Tricky! The answer is C. Because the things doing the sitting are two maraschino cherries (plural subject), you
need to use sit (plural verb). The sentence should read Atop my sundae, a colossal mass of ice cream, whipped
cream, and sprinkles, sit two maraschino cherries. Why is this so sneaky? The subject, maraschino cherries,
comes after the verb, sits. With all the singular stuff floating around—one sundae, one mass of ice cream and
whipped cream—it’s easy to assume that the verb should be singular, too. Look out for that kind of backwards
construction.
Not for the world 3is the typical women going to hurt them who most often neglect their feelings.
3
a) NO CHANGE
b) are
c) are the
d) is
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REGULAR: ‘Doctors are seldom sympathetic to men who use drugs or alcohol to mask depression.’
INVERSION: ‘Seldom are doctors sympathetic to men who use drugs or alcohol to mask depression.’
1) The time has never been more opportune to consider alternative energy sources.
2) There are seldom occasions when volunteers are recognized publically.
3) We rarely see such convincing acting in Bollywood films.
4) People never even ventured beyond their village.
5) There are no circumstances where audience members may consume alcohol. (Under no circumstances)
6) Nobody has won so many matches for his team since 1994. (Not since)
7) We won't consider you for the basketball team until you grow up. (Not until)
8) The gang didn't know that the police had them under surveillance. (Little)
9) You can't use my car at any time. (At no time)
Sundaes with whipped cream and cherries, while good if consumed in moderation, 1 is heinous if
eaten for breakfast, lunch, and dinner.
1
a) NO CHANGE
b) are heinously
c) are heinous
d) heinous are
In this sentence, the subject (sundaes) is at the beginning of the sentence, while the verb (is) is miles away.
When this happens, it’s helpful to bracket clauses that separate the subject and the verb so you can still see
how the subject and verb should relate. If you ignore the phrase here (while good if consumed in moderation),
you’re left with sundaes is heinous. That’s grammatically heinous. So C is the right answer.
1) Prepositional Phrase : A preposition usually begins the prepositional phrase, is linked by an article (a,
an, the) to a noun or pronoun, which usually ends the prepositional phrase.
Example:
To them (preposition + pronoun) : The questions to them was/were difficult.
Under a tree (preposition + article + noun) : Animals under a tree is/are safe from the storm.
Through the door (preposition + article + noun) : Leaflets through the door is/are a way of advertisement.
If the conjunction AND follows the noun or pronoun, the prepositional phrase usually continues to the next
noun or pronoun.
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Example:
Between Harry and me (preposition + noun + conjunction + pronoun)
The quarrel between Harry and me was/ were bad.
2) Present Participle phrase : The girls fetching water in pitchers from a pond is/are active.
3) Past Participle phrase : The girls annoyed by a local boy is/are reporting to the councilor..
4) Infinitive phrase : The poison to stop the infestation of rats is/are dangerous.
5) Adjective Clause : The girls who fetch water in pitchers from a pond is/are active.
Correlative Conjunction
In neither/nor and either/or constructions, you’re always talking about two things, so it’s tempting to assume that
you always need a plural verb.
But if the two things being discussed are singular, you need a singular verb.
For example, it’s correct to say, Neither Jason nor Sandra acts well, because if you broke the components of the
sentence in two, you would get Jason acts well and Sandra acts well. It’s incorrect to say, Neither Jason or Sandra act
well, because if you break that sentence into its components, you get Jason act well and Sandra act well.
It can be hard to hear this error, so be sure to check subject-verb match-ups carefully when you see a sentence like
this one:
as well as,
along with, and
in addition to.
Like the neither/nor construction, these phrases can trick you into thinking they require a plural verb.
The teacher as well as all the students 1 have started dancing at the party.
1
a) NO CHANGE
b) have starting
c) has started
d) has starting
The actual subject here is teacher. Since teacher is a singular subject, the verb must be singular, too. The
presence of the phrase as well as does not make the subject plural. Even though there are many people dancing, the
teacher is the only subject of this sentence. C is the answer. the sentence should read.
HW ABCD SOFT
1 APPARATUS The divers checked their diving apparatus.
2 BISON Large herds of bison used to live on the plains of North America.
3 CORPS The officer corps have called for the troops to be withdrawn.
5 DEER Deer are found throughout the world except in Africa & Australia.
9 TROUT Trout are similar to salmon. But they are smaller and spotted.
10 SALMON Trout are similar to salmon. But they are smaller and spotted.
FCPS-V
1 Cattle The cattle are lowing in the barn
5 Poultry Our poultry live in much better conditions than many other people's
EARNINGS Her earnings from flower sales were TK 20000 last year.
ENVIRONS The environs of the city are even more beautiful than the city itself.
STAIRS The stairs were covered with flowers on his wedding ceremony.
JGB-STPL
1 Bellows Bellows are used to make fire burn better
Foreign Plural
1 Axis Axes
2 Analysis Analyses
3 Basis Bases
4 Crisis Crises
5 Parenthesis Parentheses
6 Oasis Oases
7 Hypothesis Hypotheses
8 Thesis Theses
9 Agendum Agenda
10 Datum Data
11 Erratum Errata
12 Medium Media
13 Referendum Referenda
14 Memorandum Memoranda
15 Bacterium Bacteria
16 Continuum Continua
17 Alumnus Alumni
18 Focus Foci
19 Hippopotamus Hippopotami
20 Locus Luci/Locuses
21 Radius Radii/Radiuses
22 Syllabus Syllabi/Syllabuses
23 Terminus Termini/Terminuses
24 Alumna Alumnae
25 Formula Formulae/Formulas
26 Persona Personae
27 Antenna Antennae
28 Appendix Appendices
29 Vertex Vertices
30 Criterion Criteria
31 Phenomenon Phenomena
32 Genus Genera
33 Bandit Banditti/Bandits
34 Cherub Cherubium/Cherubs
35 Bureau Bureaus/Bureaus
36 Seraph Seraphim
TRIMMING
The first and most important step in detecting subject-verb relation and analyzing sentences is
identifying clauses. Every sentence contains at least one clause, which consists of a subject and a verb.
The subject is the noun or pronoun that is "performing" the verb, and the verb indicates state, possession,
position or action of its subject.
The subject-verb unit of any clause conveys the core idea of that clause. For instance, if we take the
sentence “As the sun slowly set, the desperation of the sailors revealed itself in their sullen glances.”
and isolate just the subject and verb, we still retain the core idea: “The desperation revealed itself.”
Sentences can also elaborate the main clause with modifiers or link clauses with conjunctions.
1[Although] 2[generally regarded as the most daunting course in the undergraduate science curriculum],
3[Introduction to Organic Chemistry] 4[not only]5[provides a necessary foundation in the principles of
physical chemistry], 6[but also] 7[introduces students to important experimental methods at the heart
today's most promising areas of medical research]
My chief concern with this budget, which has otherwise been well considered, are the drastic cuts in school
funds.
Obviously, the subject and verb disagree: ‘concern’ is a singular subject, but ‘are’ is a plural verb. So you
have to change the verb:
My concern is the cuts.
But that's no good either, because now the sentence has a number shift: the singular ‘concern’ is equated
with the plural ‘cuts.’ So, we have to revise the sentence:
‘Although the budget is otherwise well considered, I object to its drastic cuts in school funds.’
Notice that this revision not only corrects the grammatical problems, but it also makes the sentence
stronger, clearer, and more concise.
5. Amy, like her friends Jamie and Jen, (wants/want)to go to Mount Holyoke College.
6. Among the lilies and wildflowers (were/was) one solitary rose.
7. Either the chairperson or her assistants (is/ are) going to have to make the decision.
8. There (is/are) hardly even a speck of dirt left on the carpet
9. In every teaspoon of soil (are/is) over two million tiny microorganisms.
10. There (is/are), in my opinion, far too few primary physicians working in this district.
11. Beyond that hill (is/are) hundreds of bison.
12. Never before (have/has) there been such voices heard on the public airwaves.
13. Every player on both teams (was/were) at the press conference after the game.
14. There (has/ have) been a theater and a toy store in the mall ever since it opened.
15. There (is/a re) a great many production problems to iron out before show time.
16. The proceeds from the sale of every auctioned item (goes/go) to charity.
17. There (is/are) more than three years remaining on her contract.
18. Neither of the girls (was/were) frightened by the small animals that scurried past their tent.
19. This technology developed by the military for field communications, (have/ has) become essential to
private industry as well.
20. Every player on both teams (was/were) concerned about the goalie's injury.
21. The company's sponsorship of mentorship programs (has/have) garnered many accolades from
other philanthropic organizations.
22. Neither the children nor their parents (utter/utters) a word when Mrs. Denny tells her stories.
23. How important (is/are) strength training and cardiovascular training to your daily fitness regimen?
Practice in Establishing Noun–Verb Agreement
1. Tucker’s talent in chess and weight lifting, two of our school’s most popular teams, prove his mental and physical strength.
2. The book told stories of thirteen young heroes, each a member of a firefighting team, who dies fighting forest fires.
3. At the end of the season, the team, regardless of whether they win the championship, are splitting up.
4. Either Don or you is going to lead the class discussion on Tuesday.
5. Jane and Mark, who began their yard cleanup business last spring, have decided to hire two new helpers.
6. There is many levels on which a reader will be able to enjoy this book.
7. Admission proceeds from the concert is going toward rebuilding the gazebo, burned down by vandals during the summer.
8. The newspaper reports that a rescue team experienced in climbing rugged mountains are expected to arrive at the site of
the crash tomorrow morning.
9. Before they were laid off by the company, neither the assistant managers nor Mr. McCallum were told that their jobs were in
danger.
10. Many Democratic senators contend that reforms in the tax system has not brought about the economic growth that had
been predicted.
11. Learning to read the daily box scores printed in the newspaper is a desirable thing to do by any fan who expect to develop
a deep understanding of baseball.
12. Politics on both the national and local level have always been one of Dave’s passions.
13. Charles Darwin, along with his contemporary, Abraham Lincoln, are among the most impressive figures in nineteenth-
century history.
14. Katie Green, one of the hottest jazz pianists in town and known for something she calls “3-D playing,” and her accompanist
Lenny is planning to tour the South in May.
15. Nancy, along with her friend Sluggo, appear to be coming down the escalator.
16. The sale of computers in a market that has nearly a billion potential customers have created enormous hope for the
company’s future.
17. Here’s the two statutes to which the defense lawyer referred during the trial.
18. The commissioner’s insistence on high ethical standards are transforming the city’s police force
19. No one in the drum corps, in spite of how they all feel about the issue, want to participate in the rally.
20. According to school policy, there is to be two security guards stationed in the playground during recess to protect the
children.