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All You Need To Know For SAT Writing
All You Need To Know For SAT Writing
All You Need To Know For SAT Writing
Periods Semicolons
• At the end of a declarative sentence • Between two independent clauses (an
(sentence that makes a statement) independent clause is a complete
➞Today, I took a walk to nowhere. thought. It has a subject and a
• At the end of a command or request ➞ predicate.) ➞ Edward joined the
Here’s a cloth. Now gently burp the basketball team; remarkably, the 5 4́ ̋
baby on your shoulder. young man excelled at the sport.
• At the end of an indirect question ➞ • Between elements in a series that uses
Jane asked if I knew where she had left commas ➞ The possible dates for the
her keys. potluck dinner are Thurs- day, June 5;
• Before a decimal number ➞ Saturday, June 7; or Monday, June 9.
Statisticians claim that the average
family raises 2.5 children. Colons
• Between dollars and cents ➞ I • Between two complete ideas when the
remember when $1.50 could buy the second idea explains the first. ➞ Keri
coolest stuff. pushed her dinner away: She had eaten
• After an initial in a person’s name ➞ on the car ride home.
You are Sir James W. Dewault, are you • Before a list ➞ Grandma brought
not? Chloe’s favorite three sweets: chocolate
• After an abbreviation ➞ On Jan.12, I kisses, Tootsie Rolls, and a Snickers bar.
leave for Africa. • Between titles and subtitles ➞ Finding
Your Dream Home: A Buyer’s Guide.
Question Marks • Between volumes and page numbers
• At the end of a question ➞ Why do you ➞ Marvel Comics 21:24
look so sad? • Betweenchaptersandverse➞Job4:12
• Inside a quotation mark when the • Between hours and minutes ➞ It’s 2:00
quote is a question ➞ She asked, “Why a.m. — time to sleep.
do you look so sad?”
Apostrophes
Exclamation Points • Where letters or numbers have been
• At the end of a word, phrase, or deleted —a sin a contraction ➞ I
sentence filled with emotion ➞ Hurry looked at my father and whispered,
up! I cannot be late for the meeting! “It’s (It is) okay to cry every so often.”
• Inside a quotation mark when the • At the end of a name where there is
quote is an exclamation ➞ The woman ownership (remember to also add an s
yelled, “Hurry up! I cannot be late for after the apostrophe if the word or
the meeting!” name does not end in an s already)
➞Mary Jane’s horse sprained his ankle
Quotation Marks during practice.
• When directly quoting dialogue, not
when paraphrasing ➞ Hamlet says, “To
be, or not to be. That is the question.”
• For titles of chapters, articles, short
stories, poems, songs, or periodicals ➞
My favorite poem is “The Road Not
Taken.”
SENTENCE STRUCTURE
A sentence is like a Christmas present: Assembly is always required. Fortunately, the instructions are
fairly basic. Every sentence must have at least a subject and a predicate. The subject is the focus of
the sentence; it is the who or the what the sentence is about. The predicate describes the subject; it
explains what the subject is or what the subject is doing. The completed idea is called a clause, and it
is the building block of all sentences.
• Independent clause: a clause that expresses a complete thought. ➞ Monica walked on the
grass.
• Dependent (subordinate) clause: a clause that does not express a complete thought. ➞
Though it was wet
• A complete thought ➞ Though it was wet, Monica walked on the grass.
• Essential clause: a dependent clause that is necessary to the basic meaning of the
completed sentence. ➞ who are pregnant
Women who are pregnant can crave salty or sweet foods.
• Non-essential clause: a dependent clause that is not necessary to the basic meaning of the
completed sentence. ➞ who growls whenever the phone rings
Elmo, who growls whenever the phone rings, tried to attack the vacuum cleaner.
• Phrase: a group of words that lack either a subject or a predicate. ➞ I nearly spring
In early spring, I notice a change in people’s attitudes.
To construct a sentence:
There are times when saying something twice is needed: for emphasis, to review a difficult topic, or
to explain something more clearly. The SAT, however, is all about being as succinct and to the point
as possible.
Your ability to edit the fat out of sentences is tested in three ways: fixing overly wordy phrases,
finding redundancies, and combining two simple sentences into a more complex one.
The SAT deeply believes in Shakespeare's maxim that “brevity is the soul of wit”: if you can say the
same thing with fewer words, do it.
It’s tempting to think that when a sentence uses a multi-word phrase where a single word will do,
the sentence sounds formal or more academic. But this is not the case. Often, one word is better
than many words (examples 1 and 2).
Sometimes, a sentence might use words that don’t serve any purpose and don’t even need to be
replaced but rather deleted altogether (examples 3 and 4).
Examples
Error: Thinking in a manner more general, we can say that good schools enable people to learn
more.
Fix: Generally, we can say that good schools enable people to learn more.
Error: The company might not be awarded the contract because it lacks production facilities, making
it a worse choice from a theoretical way of speaking.
Fix: The company might not be awarded the contract because it lacks production facilities, making
it a worse choice theoretically.
Error: Although hesitant to challenge herself at first, the student decided to enroll in three AP
courses, two honors courses, and an intensive art course on top of that.
Fix: Although hesitant to challenge herself at first, the student decided to enroll in three AP courses,
two honors courses, and an intensive art course.
Error: When the audience stood to applaud the speaker, it was clear that her words had had a
marvelous, even stupendous, effect on the crowd.
Fix: When the audience stood to applaud the speaker, it was clear that her words had had a
marvelous effect on the crowd.
Redundancy
If a sentence expresses the same bit of information two or more times, it’s considered
redundant. Pick the best way of stating the necessary fact and delete the repetition.
Words or phrases that mean the same thing as each other are underlined.
Error: The stock market might repeat its drop and rise pattern again, warns the financial forecast.
Fix: The stock market might repeat its drop and rise pattern, warns the financial forecast.
Error: Soon a relative calm period followed quickly after the brunt of the cyclone had passed.
Fix: A relative calm period followed quickly after the brunt of the cyclone had passed.
Error: Management was surprised to see a biannual uptick in sales twice each year.
Fix: Management was surprised to see a biannual uptick in sales.
Sometimes, in order to write with concision, you have to combine simple or related sentences into
one. Don’t worry about keeping word order, as this kind of revision often requires you to shift things
around.
• Is there a person, place, thing, or concept that both sentences are talking about? If so, you
can make one sentence into a dependent clause of the other through the repeated noun
(example 1).
• Is there a chronological sequence that the two sentences are describing? Then you can
make one into a dependent clause of the other using prepositions such as before,
after, and following (example 2).
• Does one sentence define the other? Combine them by inserting whatever is being defined
into the defining sentence (example 3).
Examples
The nouns, chronology, or definitions used to combine the sentences that are underlined.
Error: The voting rate has not decreased among uneducated citizens. Uneducated voters continue to
vote for better schools.
Fix: The voting rate has not decreased among uneducated citizens, who continue to vote for better
schools.
Error: Young musicians are encouraged to perfect their techniques and skills through their
conservatory training. After this, they can start their careers in small, local orchestras.
Fix: After perfecting their techniques and skills through their conservatory training, young musicians
can start their careers in small, local orchestras.
Error: The conclusion scientists came to is the idea that instead of being made up of particles, matter
is actually made out of one-dimensional objects called strings. This is string theory.
The SAT tests your knowledge of common English usage, including two types of idioms.
First, there are expressions that mean something different from the actual words being used (such
as raining cats and dogs or kick the bucket). Secondly, there are short phrases or groups of words
that always go together (such as stumble on or keep at bay).
You'll also be asked to distinguish among frequently confused homonyms—that is, words that
sound like each other but are used in different circumstances as they mean different things. One
common example is bear vs bare.
Verbal Phrases
The SAT particularly loves one type of idiom called verbal phrases, which are verb + preposition
pairs, and wants to check that you know for sure which preposition is correct.
Examples
Prepositional Idioms
These are just like verbal phrases except they don’t involve verbs; rather, they're groups of words
that always end on a specific preposition.
Examples
Error: The translucent sculpture used light as a means through connecting viewers standing across
from each other.
Fix: The translucent sculpture used light as a means of connecting viewers standing across from each
other.
Error: In accordance to these findings, future research will focus on analyzing the effect of facial
expressions on mirror neurons.
Fix: In accordance with these findings, future research will focus on analyzing the effect of facial
expressions on mirror neurons.
English has a lot of words that sound similar to each other but mean very different things. Here is
a very incomplete list of examples of these words (you can find more by searching for “commonly
confused words” on Google):
Eminent: prominent
Imminent: about to happen
Examples
Error: After losing his hearing, Beethoven had to rely on his imagination to hear his music,
rather then listening to musicians perform it.
Fix: After losing his hearing, Beethoven had to rely on his imagination to hear his music,
rather than listening to musicians perform it.
Error: Despite hours of work, the web administration team was unable to restore the sight after the
denial of service attack.
Fix: Despite hours of work, the web administration team was unable to restore the site after the
denial of service attack.
Error: The presidential candidate used rhetorical flourishes to great affect in his speech and received
a standing ovation.
Fix: The presidential candidate used rhetorical flourishes to great effect in his speech and received a
standing ovation.
When writing for school, work, or publication in a news or scientific journal, you have to use formal
English. This means you need to avoid slang and words and phrases that sound too casual. It’s
important to keep each sentence at the same language elevation.
Examples
Error: A bunch of guys doing experiments was able to synthesize a lithium-ion battery smaller than a
grain of sand.
Fix: A team of researchers was able to synthesize a lithium-ion battery smaller than a grain of sand.
Error: In 1559, at London’s Westminster Abbey, Elizabeth Tudor, the 25-year-old daughter of Henry
VIII and Anne Boleyn, got to become Queen Elizabeth I.
Fix: In 1559, at London’s Westminster Abbey, Elizabeth Tudor, the 25-year-old daughter of Henry VIII
and Anne Boleyn, was crowned Queen Elizabeth I.
MODIFIERS
Faulty Modifiers
A modifier is a word or phrase that describes (i.e., modifies) something. There are two kinds of
modifier problems tested on the SAT: dangling modifiers and misplaced modifiers.
Dangling Modifiers
A dangling modifier is a descriptive phrase that begins a sentence, has a comma after it, and has the
noun it describes not placed right after the comma.
In the first example below, the modifier coating the sidewalk is supposed to describe the snow.
However, since we is the first word after the comma, the sentence makes it sound like we are the
ones coating the sidewalk.
Examples
Modifiers are underlined, while the nouns being correctly and incorrectly modified are in bold.
Error: Long and tangled, it was difficult to comb the child's hair.
Fix: Long and tangled, the child's hair was difficult to comb.
Error: Exhausted and weak, the soldiers' uniforms were covered in frost.
Fix: Exhausted and weak, the soldiers were covered in frost.
Misplaced Modifiers
A misplaced modifier is a descriptive phrase that's not close enough to the thing it's supposed to
be describing, making it sound like it's referring to the wrong thing.
In the first example below, the modifier on the sale rack is supposed to show where the jacket is
hanging. However, since it's been placed next to too small, the sentence seems to say that it's the
Examples
Modifiers are underlined, while the things being correctly and incorrectly modified are in bold.
Error: Ray wore his one-collared shirt to the job interview, which was stained with mustard.
Fix: Ray wore his one-collared shirt, which was stained with mustard, to the job interview.
PARALLEL CONSTRUCTION
To use parallel construction is to write a list in which all the items have the same grammatical
format. For example, if two things in a list are verbs ending in -ing, the third item should also be a
verb ending in -ing. If one item in a list is a prepositional phrase, then the second item should also be
a prepositional phrase.
Examples
Words or phrases that are already parallel are in bold, whereas those that need to be corrected to
parallel are underlined.
Error: The couple bought the concert tickets, arrived at the theater, and they sat down in their
seats.
Fix: The couple bought the concert tickets, arrived at the theater, and sat down in their seats.
Error: Painting your bedroom requires picking a color, measuring the walls, get the right tools,
and buying paint.
Fix: Painting your bedroom requires picking a color, measuring the walls, getting the right tools,
and buying paint.
Error: The workshop had a whiteboard on one wall, a set of shelves against another wall, and
a third wall had many drawers for tools.
Fix: The workshop had a whiteboard on one wall, a set of shelves against another wall, and many
drawers for tools along a third wall.
Error: Her essay focused on characters' reactions to bad news and showing how these characters
handled success.
Fix: Her essay focused on characters' reactions to bad news and showed how these characters
handled success.
The SAT will test your understanding of how to make nouns plural (when there is two or more of
something) and how to make them possessive (when you have to explain that something belongs to
something or someone else).
To make a plural noun that doesn't own anything, add s to the end of a singular noun:
To make a possessive singular noun, add apostrophe + s to the end of a singular noun:
To make a possessive plural noun, add an apostrophe to the end of a plural noun:
Examples
Error: Every morning, many hawk’s circled the field, looking for prey.
Fix: Every morning, many hawks circled the field, looking for prey.
Error: The more I read the novel, the closer I felt to the authors’ point of view.
Fix: The more I read the novel, the closer I felt to the author’s point of view.
Error: Art Deco furniture is marked by the artists use of geometric shapes, curves, strong colors, and
new materials, such as plastics.
Fix: Art Deco furniture is marked by the artist’s use of geometric shapes, curves, strong colors, and
new materials, such as plastics.
Pronouns
A pronoun is a part of speech that stands in for a noun. For example, the pronoun she can stand in
for the woman or Queen Elizabeth. But unlike nouns, pronouns change their form if they're used in
different ways. These are the ways that pronouns are tested on the SAT.
Nouns and pronouns can be either the subjects or the objects of verbs. Subjects do verbs and
objects have verbs done to them. For instance, in the sentence, "A dog chases its tail," dog is the
subject noun, chases is the verb that it's doing, and tail is the object noun.
Unlike nouns such as dog or tail, pronouns change form depending on whether they're subjects or
objects. For example, in the phrase she likes him, the woman is the subject, so the pronoun
is she. On the other hand, in the phrase he likes her, the woman is the object, so the pronoun
changes to her.
If you’re trying to figure out whether to use a subject or object pronoun when dealing with a
compound noun, one trick is to take out the other noun and try the sentence with just the
pronoun—you’ll quickly know which is right. In the first example below, me ate dinner is clearly
wrong. In the third example as well, sold cookies to I is obviously incorrect.
Examples
Who vs Whom
Who is a relative pronoun which can start either a dependent or independent clause within a
sentence. Who is used when the pronoun is the subject doing the action, whereas whom is used
when the pronoun is the object of the action.
What's tricky about who is that figuring out whether to use its subject or object form doesn't depend
on its antecedent. Instead, you have to see what role who is playing inside its own clause.
For instance, in example 1, even though people is an object of the verb benefits, inside the
clause who understand the tax code, who is the subject of the verb understand. On the other hand,
in example 2, even though skydivers is the subject of the sentence, in the clause whom many people
greatly admire, whom is the object of the verb admire.
One trick is to replace the who or whom with I or me to see whether you need the subject or
object form. In this case, me understand the tax code doesn’t work, and neither does many people
greatly admire I.
Subjects are bold, verbs are in italics, and objects are underlined.
Error: The essay points out that the reduction in taxes only benefits those people whom understand
the tax code.
Fix: The essay points out that the reduction in taxes only benefits those people who understand the
tax code.
Error: Skydivers, who many people greatly admire, tend to be comfortable with risk-taking and in
excellent physical shape.
Fix: Skydivers, whom many people greatly admire, tend to be comfortable with risk-taking and in
excellent physical shape.
This means that when we use pronouns more than once in a sentence, we have to use the
same person throughout. (To clarify: 1st person means I or we, 2nd person means you, and 3rd person
means he, she, it, or they.)
This also means that plural nouns are matched with plural pronouns, and singular pronouns refer
back to singular nouns.
Examples
Mismatched pronouns and antecedents are in bold, while matching pronouns and antecedents are
underlined.
Error: If a person wants to succeed in corporate life, you have to know the rules of the game.
Fix: If a person wants to succeed in corporate life, she has to know the rules of the game.
Error: Like its distant oceanic relatives whales, hippopotamuses can alter their density to sink or
float in water.
Fix: Like their distant oceanic relatives whales, hippopotamuses can alter their density to sink or
float in water.
That vs Who
The basic concept behind these relative pronouns is simple: who is the pronoun for a person or
people, and that is the pronoun for everything else.
Mismatched relative pronouns are in bold, while matching pronouns and antecedents are
underlined.
Error: Coaching can be difficult for people that have a hard time planning strategy on the field.
Fix: Coaching can be difficult for people who have a hard time planning strategy on the field.
Error: The scientific establishment who rejected Giordano Bruno’s theory that the earth revolves
around the sun later had to acknowledge its mistake.
Fix: The scientific establishment that rejected Giordano Bruno’s theory that the earth revolves
around the sun later had to acknowledge its mistake.
Error: The decision was made by the director, wanting to organize the group in a more efficient way.
Fix: The decision was made by the director, who wanted to organize the group in a more efficient
way.
Indefinite Pronouns
Indefinite pronouns refer to a person, place, or thing that is unknown or unspecified. Many
indefinite pronouns that seem like they're referring to multiple things or people are actually
singular.
This means that they use singular forms of verbs: everyone is instead of everyone are (examples 1
and 2). This also means that any nouns that refer to them also have to be singular and not plural: no
one wants to be a dropout instead of no one wants to be dropouts (examples 3 and 4).
Examples
Pronouns and matching verbs or nouns are underlined, while mismatched verbs or nouns are in
bold.
Error: On big-budget movies, each of the actors have large, well-decorated trailers.
Fix: On big-budget movies, each of the actors has a large, well-decorated trailer.
The different forms and abbreviations of these pronouns are frequently mixed up, but they're
something you simply have to memorize. Here are some tricks to use if you're stuck:
• Take the abbreviation apart: does it is, you are, they are, or who is work in the sentence?
Then use it’s, you’re, they’re, or who’s.
• If the sentence is trying to say that something belongs to something else, use its, your, their,
or whose.
• If the sentence is trying to point to a specific or vague place, use there.
in/on that place in the world exist many trees = there are many trees
there
existing somewhere the pants are on the shelf = the pants are there
Examples
Incorrect forms of these words are underlined, while the correct ones are bold.
Error: Who could have known that Da Vinci’s most mysterious painting would become his most
famous, with it’s unique half-smile forever expressing some unknowable emotion.
Fix: Who could have known that Da Vinci’s most mysterious painting would become his most
famous, with its unique half-smile forever expressing some unknowable emotion.
Error: Your just like all the other Americans visiting England who think that cricket is closely related
to baseball.
Fix: You’re just like all the other Americans visiting England who think that cricket is closely related
to baseball.
Error: Having several books to return to the library, Maria checks they’re due dates to make sure she
won’t have to pay any fines.
Fix: Having several books to return to the library, Maria checks their due dates to make sure she
won’t have to pay any fines.
Error: Dismayed that no one agreed with his argument, the city councilman asked, “Whosewith me
on this?”
Fix: Dismayed that no one agreed with his argument, the city councilman asked, “Who’s with me on
this?”
Error: Every study we have come across suggests that bicycles are an excellent way to get
around: there economical, good for public health, and environmentally friendly.
Fix: Every study we have come across suggests that bicycles are an excellent way to get
around: they’re economical, good for public health, and environmentally friendly.
Verbs
There are two main issues with verbs tested on the SAT: verb tenses and subject-verb agreement.
Verb Tense
There are nine basic verb tenses, three for each time period (present, past, future). Below are the
basic tenses formed from the verb to sing. As you can see, some of the verb tenses are created by
adding forms of the verbs have, be, and do.
Generally, the idea is to keep verbs in a single sentence in the same time period, especially if a
sentence is describing things that happen during the same time period (example 1).
If a sentence contains a shift in chronological time, verb tenses should shift to account for the
change in time (example 3).
Examples
Verbs in the same tense are underlined, while verbs in the wrong tense are in bold.
Error: According to the cardiologist, since the patient’s arteries are (present) dangerously clogged
with cholesterol deposits, the medical team had (past) to check for elevated blood pressure and
other heart attack risks.
Fix: According to the cardiologist, since the patient’s arteries are (present) dangerously clogged with
cholesterol deposits, the medical team has (present) to check for elevated blood pressure and other
heart attack risks.
Error: Even though office hours had been (past) over for some time, the professor and her
student are continuing (present) their productive work on the research project.
Fix: Even though office hours have been (present) over for some time, the professor and her
student are continuing (present) their productive work on the research project.
Subject/Verb Agreement
Nouns and verbs are both parts of speech with numbers and are written differently if they refer to
just one thing or multiple things. One dog runs fast, for example, but two dogs run fast.
Subject/verb agreement just means that the noun and verb have the same number (singular or
plural). One point to remember is that collective nouns are singular (a “crowd of people laughs”
Examples
Matching subjects and verbs are underlined, while verbs that don't match subjects are in bold.
Error: A recent survey found that the furniture in most people's homes are mostly made of wood.
Fix: A recent survey found that the furniture (singular) in most people's homes is (singular) mostly
made of wood.
Error: There is a beaker and three pipettes on the top shelf of the cupboard.
Fix: There are (plural) a beaker and three pipettes (plural) on the top shelf of the cupboard.
Error: I am trying to read the name of the store across the street, but a crowd of people keepgetting
in the way.
Fix: I am trying to read the name of the store across the street, but a crowd (singular) of
people keeps (singular) getting in the way.
Illogical Comparisons
There are two different kinds of comparisons that break the rules of logic.
The first relies on the idea that you can only compare things that are alike in some way. One trick
to spotting illogical comparisons is that they tend to happen when a sentence is comparing
something that belongs to someone or something else by using the comparison word than. You have
to make sure that the two things on either side of the than are in the same category (examples 1 and
2).
For instance, you can compare apples and oranges because both are fruits. But if both Stanley and
Cora have apples, you can't say the following:
Examples
Error: Charles Dickens's epic novels, which are almost universally admired by readers and critics
alike, are more sweeping than Jane Austen, who writes novels of manners.
Fix: Charles Dickens's epic novels, which are almost universally admired by readers and critics alike,
are more sweeping than Jane Austen's novels of manners.
Error: For astronauts, the moon is easier to get to than any space object.
Fix: For astronauts, the moon is easier to get to than any other space object.