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GADI BOKNE KO PHOTO( PHOTO OF CAR CARYING MAN)

Dipesh Tripathi

dipeshthefilmmaker®gmail.com
9849912561

2019

1.

EXT. SAATDHARA-CHITLANG - EARLY MORNING

Cold, silent night. Only sound of water splashing from the


taps.

PRAYAG BASNET, late 20's, a bearded man, points gun at


BIKESH, mid 205. A teenage boy, KANCHA,lies unconscious in
the ground. Bikesh holds a pouch in his hands.

PRAYAG
Give it to me

Bikesh hesitates.
PRAYAG
Too much of this hide and seek.

Give it to me or you both are dead.

Bikesh throws the pouch towards Prayag. Prayag tries to catch


the pouch.

Blink. Bikesh takes a gun from his back.

GUNSHOT.

Blood spills from Prayag's stomach. Prayag is down


BLACK SCREEN:

SUPER: Few Days Ago

EXT. CHITLANG -DAY - A WEEK BACK

Rural outskirt of chitlang. Bikesh and Prayag stand outside a


house.

Homestay board an the top of house.

Bikesh watches Prayag shake hands with the owner of the


house.

Prayag takes cash from his bag and hands it to the owner.
An evil smile in Prayag's face. Pragay signals Bikesh to
follow the man. The house owner leads him to other house.
EXT. DHAN BAHADUR GOLE'S HOUSE -CONTD

An old two storey house, unmaintained by modern standards.


Not suitable for homestay.
HOMESTAY OWNER
Dhan ba, sano madat chaiya thyo.

DHAN BAHADUR GOLE, 80's, walks out of house. KANCHA follows

the old man.

HOMESTAY OWNER
Ghar ko kotha sakyo kya, baje ko
eauta kotha chaiyo.

KANCHA
(excited)
Hamro ma ni home stay?

Kancha looks at the Dhan Bahadur and stays quiet.

DHAN BAHADUR

Ahile ta ghar ma kasailai rakhna


sakdina.

HOMESTAY OWNER
Baje, customer gaye pachi feri
aaudaina. Madat gardinuna. Ramrai
paisa aaucha.

Still reluctant to say ok.

HOMESTAY OWNER
Baru khana sana ma utai milauchu,
basna chai yeta jasari ni milaunu
paryo.

Dhan Bahadur looks at Kancha looking for answer to what to

do.

DHAN BAHADUR
Tara jaad raksi, churot ghar vitra
chaldaina. Sahar ko manxe lai
thorai ma basna ni sakdaina.

BIKESH

Tesko chinta nagarnus, ma mazale


sakchu

DHAN BAHADUR

Teso vaye basnus. Pachi yo tyo chai


navannu.

Kancha takes the luggage bag and leads Bikesh into the house.

4. INT. DHAN BAHADUR GOLE'S HOUSE-VISITOR ROOM -CONTD

Bikesh enters the room. Kancha puts the luggage at the


corner .

KANCHA
Sabaile malai kancha vanchan. J
chahe ni malai vannu 1a.

Bikesh dislikes the foul smell of the room.

KANCHA
Ali dherai bhayo, teti ramro kotha
safa nagarko. Tara udus haru
chaina. Rati ali ali 1amkhute
aaucha. teti ho. Basnu na

Bikesh hesitates to sit on the bed.

KANCHA
Tapai yeha basna sakcha jasto
lagena.

Phone rings. Bikesh receives.

PRAYAG(VOICE OVER)
Kotha ramro chaina malai thah cha.
Jati chito kaam sakyo ramro. Ghumna
aako haina hami. Buda lai fakayera
hunxa ki k garera hunxa, i want
that.

Call Ends.

Bikesh changes his mood. Takes out chocolate from his


sidebag.

BIKESH
Laa kancha.

Kancha takes the chocolate.

BIKESH
Ani ghar ma aru ko ko cha?

Kancha takes a bite of chocolate.

KANCHA
(still chewing)
Ghar ma tei ma ra baje. Aru koi
chaina...

As kancha keeps speaking....

EXT. CROP FIELD -DAY

Bikesh sits by the field. Other field workers working in the


field.

KANCHA
(continue from previous)
...baje le palnu vako malai. Bajeko
chora buhari kathmandu ma Chan re,
tara khai bhetna kaile aaudaina.
Phone ni aaudaina.

Kancha takes radish from the worker.

Bikesh takes bite.


KANCHA
Baje bihanai uthchan, nuhauna. Aru
kaam kei chaina. Yei jagga cha. tei
bata ali ali aaucha.

Bikesh looks at the setting sun.

INT. DHAN BAHADUR GOLE'S HOUSE- VISITOR ROOM -NIGHT

Bikesh lies down in his bed. Old O—watt light bulb


flickering.

KANCHA(OFF SCREEN)
Dai kei chaiyo bhane vannu hai.

Bikesh closes his eyes.

Black out.

Bikesh opens his eyes and opens his luggage bag.

Takes a gun, a master key opener, torch light and a mask.


Bikesh goes out of his room.

Makes no sound and walks on his toe.

Bikesh enters another room. Turns his torch light on.


Searches for something. Below the bed. In other places.

A drawer has lock in it. He takes out the master key and
tries to open it.

Sound of someone walking. Bikesh tries hard to open the lock.


Sound approaches nearer.

Bikesh turns the key and opens the lock.

A person enters the room.

Bikesh put his hand to pocket. Holds the gun.

KANCHA
Dai...

Confused whether to take out gun or not.


KANCHA
malai bolaunu vaneko the

ta. Toilet uta ho ni

Bikesh leaves the hold to his gun.


BIKESH
Tei ta...

Bikesh goes to the toilet.

EXT. ASHOK CHITYA -DAY


Kancha acts as guide to Bikesh.
Bikesh takes photo of stupa.
KANCHA
Yo chai ashok samrat ko chori,
charu, aauda banako re. Ekdum man

pareko re hamro chitlang.

Kancha poses for photo.

EXT. NASPATI BAGAICHA -DAY

Kancha climbs on the Naspati tree. Bikesh observes


Kancha picks and throws naspati down to Bikesh.

Both sit down and bite naspati.

BIKESH
Baje ali nobolne khalko hunuhudo
raixa.

KANCHA

Ah.. Baje estai ho... Baje ko chora


chodera gaye pachi, teti bolna
chodnu vayo re... Baje pahila
belama ta khatra ho ni feri. Katra
katra gadi aafai bokeko re...

BIKESH
Paila ta india jane bato yei thyo
re haina?

KANCHA
Ah... Baje ko palo ma, paisa ni
thikai kamauthyo re. Rana haru ko
gadi bokera. Pachi baje thala
paryo. Bokna nasakne bho.

BIKESH
Baje ko purano kunai photo cha ta?
Tyo gadi bokne belako...

KANCHA
Tapai ni tei photo khojna aako ho?

BIKESH
Photo kina khojthe ra?

the place.

KANCHA
Tapai 1e nai sodhnu vako haina ra?
BIKESH

Tetikai
KANCHA

Baje hairan vai sakyo. Sab photo


photo vanndai khojna aauchan...
Photo dinus tapai ko chora firta
lyauchu vandai ni aako thyo...

BIKESH
Photo chai cha baje sanga?

KANCHA
Khai. Photo ko kura aayo ki baje
rishaunu hunxa.

A teenage GIRL passes by. Kancha blushes at her.

KANCHA
Bhayo bhane, Tei bajeko kotha ko
daraz ma cha hola... Baje bela bela

ma dhoka layera hernu hunxa.


The girl smiles at him.
KANCHA

Ma ni herchu... Tara sodhne ra


bolne aat chaina.

Bikesh observes kancha's behaviour.

BIKESH
Aat gara pakka pauchau...

EXT. DHAN BAHADUR GOLE'S HOUSE -NIGHT

Bikesh smokes behind the house. A small fire infront of him.


Looks at the clear sky.

DHAN BAHADUR
Babu lai ghar ma churot nakhanu
vanera paila ni vaneko the..

Bikesh throws his cigratte. Dhan Bahadur starts to leave.

BIKESH
Tapai teti bolnu hunna?

DHAN BAHADUR
Bolnu kunai karan cha ra?

BIKESH
Sadhai karan chahinxa ra?

DHAN BAHADUR

Timi sahar ko manxeharu... Aayo gau


ghumyo... Aafulai janne bujhne
sochyo.

BIKESH

Sangat gare pachi ta manxe chinxa


ni haina. Sabai sahar ko naramro ni
hudainan. B

Dhan Bahadur stays silent and smiles slightly.

BIKESH
Tapai ko jabani ma khatra
hunuhunthyo re ta.

DHAN BAHADUR
Gadi bokne kaam... Bhimfedi dekhi
thankot samma lanthe. Alie ko jasto
dhuwa dhulo thena... Gau ma sabai
manxe the. Gau ramailo thyo. Ahile
koi chainan. Sab sahar ga——

Dhan Bahadur goes quiet while speaking.

BIKESH
Chora ko yaad aaucha hai tapailai?

Dhan Bahadur stands to leave.


BIKESH
Kaile samma yei aas ma hunuhunxa?

Sahar ka manxe farkera aaudainan.

Bikesh takes out a photo of his parents from his wallet.

BIKESH
Mero daddy mummy. Chodera janu vo
re. Kaha janu vo... Kina janu vo?
thah chaina... Janna man pani
chaina
Dhan Bahadur sits.
BIKESH

Hami dubai ustai haun...

DHAN BAHADUR
Mero nati pani tmrai umerko hola.

BIKESH
Nati jastai ta hu...

Dhan Bahadur puts his hands on Bikesh's cheek.

DHAN BAHADUR
Ali churot kam khane gara...

10.

11.
Dhan Bahadur smiles and leaves.

Bikesh takes out new cigarette. Lits it. Tries to put in his
mouth... Stops.

Throws away the cigarette away.

EXT. SAATDHARA-CHITLANG -MORNING


Dhan Bahadur walks towards the tap. Bikesh follows him.
Dhan Bahadur takes off clothes to take bath.
Bikesh sit above the taps.Dhan Bahadur sees him.
DHAN BAHADUR
Aaja ta chitai uthechau ta? Chitai

uthchau jasto lageko thena

BIKESH
Kaam bhayepachi manxe yestai ho...

Bikesh takes bath as well.


Both wear clothes after bath.
BIKESH
Mind fresh vayo... Baje kina jaile

nuhaucha vaneko bujhi halyo ni.

Bikesh observes an old lock in the ground at a corner barely


noticeable covered with grass.

BIKESH
Baje yo tala?

DHAN BAHADUR
Purano tala ho. Mandir kai ho.
Paila puja ko saman rakhthyo re,
pachi chabi harayo ani yestai cha.

Both walk back to the house.

EXT. SHIVALAYA -DAY


Shivam sits oustide the temple.
Kancha takes a rose in his hand.

KANCHA
Dai pura dar po lagdo raaixa hai...

Bikesh laughs.

BIKESH
Nadarai kina vanna sakyau vane kt
tmrai ho..

KANCHA
manla ta usle? Teti anuvab
chaina...

BIKESH
Paryas gara, fal aafai falcha.
The teenage girl passes by. Kancha moves towards her.
The girl stops and looks back.

GIRL
K chaiyo?

Kancha is blank. Takes out the rose.

KANCHA
Yo full vui ma jhareko thyo... Gai
bastu le khancha hola...

GIRL
Hamro gai bastu ta chaina

KANCHA
Teso vaye tme nai rakhana. Vui ma
oilayera jane ta ho.
The girl laughs.

Bikesh enjoys their conversation from distance.

Someone pulls him from behind. Bikesh counters. Takes out the
gun, pulls the man to corner and points on the head.

PRAYAG
Bado ramailo hudai cha ta?

Bikesh puts the gun back.

PRAYAG
Photo bhetyo?

BIKESH
Bhanne bitikia bhetcha?

PRAYAG
Ghumgham garere bhetcha tani?

BIKESH
Mero kaam malai thah cha.Samjhai
rakhnu pardaina.

12.

10.

PRAYAG
Let me be clear we dont have time.
1/2 din maximum. Ta fakauchaus ki
dhamkauchas, i dont care. J garnu
cha gar, maile gare vane, u know
what.

Prayag looks at kancha and the girl.

PRAYAG
Ramro jodi hai? Baje sanga nuha ki
sut malai farak parena, photo nikal
jasari ni..

Pragay leaves. Bikesh looks at Kancha.

INT. DHAN BAHADUR GOLE'S HOUSE -NIGHT

Kancha takes food towards Dhan Bahadur's room. Bikesh


interrupts.

BIKESH
Baje lai ma lagdinxu.

Kancha hands over the food to Bikesh.


Bikesh mixes chemical over the food and enters the room.

BIKESH
Baje khana.

Dhan Bahadur seems happy to see him.

DHAN BAHADUR
Time lera aako?tei rakhdeu

Bikesh leaves the room.

LATER THAT NIGHT

Complete Black OUT

Bikesh takes his torch and moves out of his room.


Enters Dhan Bahadur's room silently.

Dhan Bahadur is unconscious in his bed. Bikesh looks at the


Daraz with a big lock.

Takes out his master key. Tries to open the lock.


Turns the key but lock doesnt open. Fraustrated.
Bikesh looks for the key.

Bikesh searches Dhan Bahadur's body for the key but doesnt
find it.

KANCHA(OFF SCREEN)
Chabi yaha cha...

Bikesh takes out his gun in shock. Ligts 0N.


Kancha enters the room with a knife in his hands.

KANCHA
Baje lai k gareko?

Kancha points knife towards him.

BIKESH
Baje lai kei hudaina. Behos matra
ho...

KANCHA
Baje bata para janu...
Bikesh steps back.

Kancha moves towards Dhan Bahadur.

BIKESH

Photo matrai chahiyeko ho malai...


KANCHA

Yaha bata niskunu.


BIKESH

Kasailai kei garna aako haina ma


KANCHA

Hamro varosa ko k garnu vo dekhi

sakyo..
BANG. DOOR OPENS.

Pragay enters the room.

Hits kancha, removes his knife, folds his hands and ties

them.
Put clothes in Kancha's mouth.

BIKESH
Sorry yaar. Maaf garde.

Prayag throws the key to Bikesh.

Bikesh takes the key and opens the Daraz.


Old clothes inside the Daraz.

Between the clothes is the photo.

Bikesh takes the photo.

11.

12.

The photo is of the old man and his son.


Prayag rushes and pulls the photo from Bikesh's hands.
PRAYAG
Sala, yo photo haina. Tyo car wala
photo khoi?

Prayag throws all the clothes from daraz to floor but finds
nothing.

Prayag starts to throw and smash things. Bikesh stops.

BIKESH
Halla nagar...
Prayag takes some water and throws to Dhan Bahadur's face to
bring the old man back to consciousness.

Dhan Bahadur breathes with difficulty.


Bikesh pushes prayag and holds Dhan Bahadur.

BIKESH
Baje...

Prayag puts Kancha at gun point.


PRAYAG
(to Dhan Bahadur)
Baje photo khoi?
Bikesh looks at Dhan Bahadur.
Prayag steps on kancha's hand.
BIKESH
Ajhai bujhinas, hya kunai photo

chaina. Bachai cha teslai chod..

PRAYAG
Ki phot ki yo dubai dead..

Prayag cocks the gun.

Bikesh jumps towards prayag. Punches him in the face. The gun
falls down. Prayag is down.

Bikesh takes the gun.

BIKESH
Niski hya bata before i shoot you.

Prayag runs out of the room.

PRAYAG
Sahi gardai chainas...

13.

13.

Bikesh unfolds Kancha.

BIKESH
ma yeha photo khojna aako ho tara
kasailai dukhauna haina.

Bikesh gives his hand to help kancha stand.

BIKESH
Ani yo sab jesko lagi ho, tyo photo
nai chaina.

KANCHA
Aba?

BIKESH
Teslai ma herchu. You are safe.
Baje dhukka hunus.

DHAN BAHADUR
Mero chora ko bahek aru photo ta ma
sanga chaina tara ma sanga arko
thok chai cha.
Dhan bahadur points towards the daraz.

DHAN BAHADUR
Tesko Chabi...

Bikesh looks below the daraz to find a old cloth wrapping


something. Bikesh unwraps the cloth to find an old ancient
key.

BIKESH
Chabi?

DHAN BAHADUR
Purano tala ko...charu ko haar

Bikesh looks at the key.


Its almost morning.

Bikesh moves out of the house.

EXT. DHAN BAHADUR GOLE'S HOUSE -CONTINUOUS


Bikesh moves quickly. Kancha follow.
KANCHA
Charu? ko charu? Ashok ko chori

rajkumari charu?

BIKESH
Aba herpachi thah hunxa.

14.

14.

EXT. SAATDHARA-CHITLANG - CONTINUOUS

Bikesh puts the key in the old lock and opens it to find a
small pouch.

Opens the pouch. Old, dusty but shining necklace.

A scream from behind.

Kancha is down on ground. Prayag holds the gun in his hand.


BACK TO THE BEGINING SCENE

Prayag is dead.

Bikesh now holds the gun. Moves forward and takes the pouch
and holds kancha.

FADE TO BLACK
BIKESH(VOICE OVER)
Maile photo ta bhetina, haar bhete
but tyo banda important family.

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