Essay Reflection over RFK Speech

1. Read your paragraphs and explain ​one thing you think you did really well.

One thing I believe I did very well on was identifying what appeals were being used.

2. Read your paragraphs and explain ​one thing you think you really need to improve​.

One thing I need to really improve on is identifying the purpose and tying it back with everything.

After looking at several sample introduction paragraphs, write down one thing that you could have done that would have
improved your introduction paragraph.

3. ​Introduction Paragraph​:

For my introduction paragraph, I could have included the author's purpose and rhetorical choices the he makes.

After looking at several sample appeals paragraphs, write down one thing that you could have done that would have
improved your appeals paragraph. Fill out #4 on your reflection page.

4. ​Appeals Paragraph

For the appeals paragraph, I did very well on it, but forgot one last thing that cost me minus 10 points. ¨Connects this
rhetorical choice back to the overall purpose and explains the effectiveness of this choice.¨ If i would have included this
I would have gotten all points for just the appeals paragraph.

After looking at several sample structure paragraphs, write down one thing that you could have done that would have
improved your structure paragraph. Fill out #5 on your reflection page.

5. ​Structure Paragraph

For the structure paragraph, I could have shortened the quotes and included the author's purpose too.
After looking at several sample rhetorical devices paragraphs, write down one thing that you could have done that would
have improved your rhetorical devices paragraph. Fill out #6 on your reflection page.

6. ​Rhetorical Devices Paragraph

For the rhetorical devices paragraph, I should have listed two rhetorical devices instead on one and explained it better so
it could tie back to the purpose.