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Literary Criticism Essaypdf
Literary Criticism Essaypdf
Olivia Angell
Mrs. Cramer
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What are your favorite types of books to read? If they are realistic books, then With the
Fire on High by Elizabeth Acevedo is the book for you. The reader learns of a compelling story
about a teen mother just trying to figure out what she truly wants in life for her and her child while
also continuing her passion for cooking. The reader will feel sympathy toward the characters
because of their real-world experiences, such as being a teen parent and how some of the main
characters don’t have a parent in the home and live with other family members as their guardians.
Beginning with the main points of the book, With the Fire on High, is that the main
character Emoni is a senior in high school and a teen mom. “When Emoni was a freshman in high
school she met a boy named Tyrone who was older and from a different school. Emoni became
pregnant her freshman year” (Acevedo). By her senior year, when the book takes place, Emoni’s
daughter is about three and Emoni has learned so much about herself and her daughter. Emoni’s
situation makes her a realistic character to the reader because there could be a lot of readers out
there that are in her situation or know someone who is in the same situation. Most books that
involve teen moms are about just the mom and her hard decision on whether or not to keep her
unborn child, whereas in this book the baby is here and Emoni is trying to make sure she is doing
what’s best for her and mostly for her child. On page twenty-one paragraph one Emoni states “I
was that girl your moms warns you about being friends with. And warns you about becoming.”
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(page 21 paragraph 1) When Emoni states this it makes the reader feel upset for her because as the
reader gets to know her in the book the reader realize that she is not what people may think of her,
and the reader will learn that she is a caring person and mother who is trying her best to make a
good impression on people even if they already have their own prior opinions due to her child. The
reader will start to feel sympathy for Emoni because of the hardships she has been through even
though she makes the best out of all of her situations. This makes the reader want to almost praise
her because of how hard she tries to give herself and her daughter a life that they both deserve.
Another reason why the characters in this book are realistic is because two of the main
characters live with relatives other than their parents. “The main character Emoni lives with her
abuela and daughter, Emoni’s mother died in childbirth and her father could not bear to stay in the
city of Philadelphia and moved back to Puerto Rico” (Acevedo). Although he calls and will come
for a little while a few times a year it still has an effect on Emoni and how she parents her daughter.
At the end of the book, he does come back for longer than normal to help while Emoni starts
college, but she does not know for how long and she does worry that he will just leave out of
nowhere like he has done before. Malachi is another main character in the book, he is a new student
at Emoni’s school. They are in the same cooking class and start to build a friendship over the
course of the school year. “Malachi’s younger brother was shot and killed in Newark, after this
happened his mother sent him to live with his aunt in Philadelphia to be in a safer environment
and to get away from all of the violence” (Acevedo). People are able to relate to Emoni and
Malachi’s situation because these situations can be real to people because they could be going
through them or know someone who is. The reader will begin to feel sympathy for Emoni because
money is tight and with her abuela on disability and not being able to have a job, and Emoni being
in school and having a young daughter it can make the reader sympathetic to what is going on in
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her life. It is also easy for the reader to feel sympathy to Malachi as well because of what happened
to his brother and why he has to live with his aunt. He had start at a new school in his senior year
and is not even able to live with his mother which could be discouraging but he knows that it is
for the best and why it was better for him to live with his aunt. The reader will feel sympathetic
In conclusion, With the Fire on High is good for people that want to be able to relate and
feel emotions toward the characters they are reading about. In this book the reader feels as though
they are reading a book with characters that are very relatable with realistic situations. This helps
the reader feel sympathy toward the characters because of their real-world experiences, such as
being a teen parent and how some of the main characters do not have a parent in the home and live
with other family members as their guardians. These aspects also leave the reader wanting more
and wanting to know what happens to their favorite characters at the end of the book.
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Work cited
Acevedo, Elizabeth. With the Fire on High. New York; HarperCollins, 2019. Print