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Allison Bocchino
Writing 2
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A major cause of environmental harm on both a global and local scale that affects
everyone, is the issue of pollution and the energy crisis which is perpetuated by a societal
dependence on fossil fuel energy. There is, however, increasing advancements in the production
of sustainable sources that are able to produce zero carbon, with one being known as green
hydrogen. Looking at two research articles from the different disciplines of environmental
science and economics, both being about green hydrogen, we are able to see similarities and
differences between the two scholarly communities. Each article discusses and conveys the
importance of green hydrogen through their own forms of arguments, conventions, and evidence
The discipline of environmental science is the most obvious discipline that is first thought
of when discussing the production and benefits of green hydrogen, as seen in the article “Green
methods for hydrogen production”.1 The article’s argument is the dire need for green hydrogen
instead of using fossil fuels as there are many green methods that are now available in
productioning it. The article makes this argument clear when in the introduction Dincer wrote, “a
assessed and compared for various applications”.2 Dincer also makes the argument known
through introductioning the idea of “potential solutions” for the greenhouse gas emissions that
are currently being produced by the current usage of harmful fossil fuels.3 By having introduced
the harmful effects of greenhouse gas emissions the argument for the need of green hydrogen
production and the various methods to do so are accentuated as being the best solution for doing
so is a valid one. The research article in the discipline of economics, “Toward a Clean Energy
Economy: With Discussion on Role of Hydrogen Sectors,” argues that green energy sources
drive economic development with green hydrogen being one of them and uses a forecasting
model to showcase the economic benefit of using clean energy.4 By using the forecasting model
based on precedent in Taiwan the researchers highlight the benefits of using green energy, with
hydrogen at the center of it. With both research articles advocating for green hydrogen use, the
differences come in the form of what evidence, audience, and conventions they use to express
their message.
Looking at the differences in audience, conventions, and evidence used within the two
articles and their disciplines of environmental science and economics one can really notice the
contrast between the two. In the environmental science article “Green Methods for Hydrogen
Production,” the audience is environmental scientists who are experts and well informed in many
scientific processes, especially that of hydrogen production. This is made apparent by how the
article is organized in a way that resonates with the environmental science community. To
achieve this the discipline of environmental science organized the evidence of the article in a
way that utilized multiple tables and figures that showed several descriptions and visuals of how
green hydrogen is produced from using different resources and different methods. As seen in
science created by the discipline make it so the scientists know what is being discussed in a way
that is easy for them to understand.5 In comparison to the article from the economic discipline
they are similar in the sense that they both use tables and figures to convey their information to
their audience. The table called “Output growth rate of clean energies and conventional fuels.
Scenario I. Unit: %.” represents the economic community as it shows economic information that
is specifically meant for economists with an understanding of numerical significance of the data
shown.6
The two articles greatly differ in their evidence and the conventions used to make that
difference clear as seen with the overall organization by the two communities. The convention of
specialized jargon is not unique to one article, but what the jargon does for each community and
discipline is very different when the audience is also considered. The environmental science
jargon is a convention that shows the specialized field of environmental science with
terminology that is not easy to understand unless familiar with them. The jargon in the article by
Dincer is meant to technical and explain chemical processes as well the nuance differences
between the methods of producing hydrogen. In contrast the jargon in the article “Toward a clean
energy economy: With discussion on role of hydrogen sectors” serves a different purpose due to
the difference in communities. In the economic discipline the jargon is specific and analytical,
making it very restrictive towards those without a complex understanding of the discipline of
economics through the use of jargon and hard to understand tables and figures. Nonetheless the
use of jargon differs between the two disciplines even though both are restrictive to others
unfamiliar with them. Both uses of jargon are complex and assume that the reader can
understand the information that they present but are difficult to understand for those unfamiliar
The evidence of each article to support their arguments makes use of their conventions by
using terminology and that is difficult to understand to anyone outside of the disciplines and
communities is apparent in both articles. In the environmental science discipline article the
evidence can be seen with the convention of jargon through phrases such as “Parameters of
typical water electrolysis cells,” which is the title of a table. The title itself is already difficult to
understand for those who have no prior knowledge of electrolysis cells, but the information itself
of chemical and electrical processes shows how specialized this article is for the environmental
science community. The discipline of economics in relation to green hydrogen use and
production, uses different methods of sharing their information, as seen through the article
“Toward a clean energy economy: With discussion on role of hydrogen sectors” by Duu-Hwa
Lee and Ching-Pin Hung. The goal of this article is to “analyz[e] how advances in clean energy
energy sources and fossil fuels” as stated in the abstract.7 This informs the reader of how this is
about economics and the results of the analysis describe how economic resources will be used to
authors make a convincing argument for the benefits of clean energy sources, mainly that of
7 Lee, Duu-Hwa, and Ching-Pin Hung. “Toward a Clean Energy Economy: With Discussion on
Role of Hydrogen Sectors.” International Journal of Hydrogen Energy, Pergamon, 19 Mar. 2012.
www.sciencedirect.com/science/article. 15753.
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hydrogen, by using very detailed economic models that use various factors to show the
numerical and economical benefits of clean energy sources with hydrogen being one of the
highest. Having done economic research on the impact and benefits of hydrogen that is seen in
the article the authors of the research are able to use their evidence to state that “Biohydrogen
and hydrogen fuel cells will lead all clean energies, even under competition with other energy
The use of these figures and tables differ from the environmental science way as they are
complex and assume that the reader can understand the information that they present but are
difficult to understand for those unfamiliar with economics. With the audience being those who
know complex economics, the goal of this article is shared through information that uses jargon
that is very economic oriented and field related such as “macroeconomy” and “GDP”, thus
making the article assume that the audience has certain knowledge of the discipline (Lee and
Hung, 2012). Overall this article by Duu-Hwa Lee and Ching-Pin Hung is very audience specific
and analytical, making it very restrictive towards those without a complex understanding of the
discipline of economics through the use of jargon and hard to understand visuals.
After looking at a research article under each of the two disciplines of environmental
science and economics the differences between the two disciplines and the way that each of their
scholarly communities share information on the topic of green hydrogen and overall clean
hydrogen is vastly different. Firstly, the obvious difference is the audience that each article is
focused towards. The article under the environmental science discipline by Ibrahim Dincer is
environmental scientists that are familiar with hydrogen production. On the other hand the article
by Duu-Hwa Lee and Ching-Pin Hung, under the discipline of economics, is geared towards
8 Lee, Duu-Hwa, and Ching-Pin Hung. “Toward a Clean Energy Economy: With Discussion on
Role of Hydrogen Sectors.” International Journal of Hydrogen Energy, Pergamon, 19 Mar. 2012.
www.sciencedirect.com/science/article. 15763.
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those who have a sophisticated understanding of economics. Secondly, the way the evidence and
conventions used to convey the evidence while having similarities achieve their respective goals
Notes
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2. Lee, Duu-Hwa, and Ching-Pin Hung. “Toward a Clean Energy Economy: With