Argument

 
TS:  I agree that born in new age era is easier and
more enjoyable than my grandparent’s era because the
technology of Internet, Transportation, and
communication
 
 
TS1: Internet
- Source Of Information
- Social Media
- Trading Business
CP: So Internet make today's life is easier
 
TS2: Transportation
- Land
- Water
- Air
CP: So, if people want to go somewhere faraway, now
the technology of transportation makes life easier and
more enjoyable than it was.
 
TS3 Communication Technology
- Mobile Phone
- Email
- Instant Messenger
 
CP: So, the development of communication
technology makes today’s life easier and enjoyable
 
CS: Overall, the technology of Internet,
Transportation, and communication, make today's life
becoming easier and more enjoyable.
 
Paragraph
 
         Many people discuss and compare between life
today and life in the past. Some people agree that
today's life is easier and more enjoyable than life in
era when our grandparents were children, but some
others feel the opposite. For me (Thesis
Statement/TS) I agree that born in new age era is
easier and more enjoyable than my grandparent’s era
because the technology of Internet, Transportation,
and communication.
 
         (TS1) Today's life becomes easier and enjoyable
because the existences of Internet as source of
Information, social media, trading business.
(SD1/Reason1 (+)) Internet is the most useful thing to
gather information. (Explanation) Through Internet,
you can access information that you needed.
(Example) Like search for cooking recipe, medical
information, movie review, and everything. On the
Contrary, in the past you can only obtain useful
information only from newspaper or ask the expert
straightly.
 
(SD2/Reason2 (+)) Internet can also be used as Social
Media. (Explanation) With social media you can
follow your friends activities, look you friends photos
and find an old friend who haven't met for a long
time. (Example) For example, social media like
twitter that allows you to follow your favorite artists
activities. You can know what your favorite artists do,
where your favorite artists are, and everything about
them. But, when my grandparents were child, u can't
follow someone activity unless you follow them
physically.
 
(SD3/Reason3 (+)) Nowadays, Internet is also useful
for trading business. (Explanation) With Internet,
you can buy and sell every thing online. Dealing
things on the Internet, make customer not have to
meet the seller physically. (Example) Now, there are
lot of trading business blogs such as ebay, amazon,
kaskus, blibli.com and etc. But in the past, if you want
to make a deal, you have to meet the customer or the
client physically. Those are reasons why I agree that
Internet make today’s life easier and more enjoyable.
 
         (TS2) Life nowadays becomes easy and
enjoyable because the development of transport
technology on land, water, and air. (SD1/Reason1
(+)) Many land transportation has been improved
from this past year. (Explanation) It makes people
easy and comfy to go other places. (Example) beside
by using their own private car, a lot of Jakarta
residences go to work by Transjakarta, Public Bus,
and Taxi. On the contrary, when my grandma was
child, it was such a difficult thing to find land vehicle.
Although there are some of it, but it was still hasn't
comfy enough.
 
(SD2/Reason2 (+)) Beside land transportation, Water
transportation also has been improved these past
years. (Explanation)  That modern water vehicle
helps people to move between island and
archipelagos. (Example) Many of them also use ship,
to bring cargo for business interest. Some others may
ride star cruise for their family recreation and
entertainment. On the contrary, when my grandma
was child people could cross the sea only by
traditional boat. But because traditional boat was
made by plain wood, so it will risky our lives.
 
(SD3/Reason3 (+)) The most important part of
transportation that gives big influences is air vehicle.
(Explanation)  Air vehicles nowadays, so much help
people to transfer overseas faster than land or air
transportation. (Example) Nowadays air vehicle like
airplane is so much efficient, for example like Boeing
777 Aircraft, which can fit over than 200 people per
fly. On other hand, when my grandma still kid, only
small aircraft that exist
 
(TS3) Communication technologies such as Mobile
phone, email and quick messenger are the one those
bring big influence in today's easy and enjoyable life.
(SD1/Reason1 (+)) Nowadays mobile phones are
much more sophisticated than it was. (Explanation)
Mobile phone is handy and simple. (Example) Like
Samsung and Iphone Mobile, which are very smart,
but have thin and small body. On the contrary, in the
past, phone can only stay at one place.
 
(SD2/Reason2 (+)) beside mobile phone, on today's
life people also use an electronic mail (e-mail).
(Explanation) E-mail exists to substitute the letter
mail. With email, people needn't go to post office nor
buy a postage stamp.  (Example) Most of all big
companies, choose their new employee by read the
curriculum vitae that sent by the candidate worker by
using their email, so they do not need to keep many
file of candidate workers that have no potential, like
in the past.
 
(SD3/Reason3 (+)) Today's life becomes so much
easy and enjoyable because of instant messenger.
(Explanation) Instant messenger is the fastest way to
send or distribute message to others. Nowadays, A lot
of people use this application for business need,
family need and etc. (Example) To reduce a sense of
longing, a lot of family chat with their siblings or
family members that stay so far away. With instant
messenger application, distance would be
meaningless. So different when it was my grandparent
era, it was extremely hard to keep in contact with
someone who lived far away. (CP) That's way
nowadays communication technology give influence
to make life easier and more enjoyable.
 
(CS) Overall, the technology of Internet,
Transportation, and communication make today's life
becoming easier and more enjoyable. I am so grateful
that I was born in new age era as a successor from Y
generation. I hope the development of global
technology, make world become better and better than
it was.