Learning language is an active process that begins at birth and continues throughout life .

But there are several ways to learn a language, we mention three of them such as taking online lessons,
taking lessons with a private tutor, and going to live in a country where the language is spoken.

Firstly, the benefits of learning language by taking lessons online are instant access to the internet
because when you are learning a language online , you can easily send links like photos and videos
related to the topic of the lesson.

Also, it is convenient. for example, you don’t have to worry about managing your time .

Along with the accessibility because they work on computer program you can access at any time. But
the disadvantages appears as you won’t Learn how to understand and speak in reality, moreover you
may end up with being overly dependent on written words and instance requirement for self-discipline
because The problem is the time management and the organization of skills which are necessary .

Secondly, the benefits of taking lessons with a private tutor appears in fewer distractions because a
large classroom can be highly distracting , preventing students from focusing in the session,

it improves confidence and self esteem as well because working with a private tutor can help students
to become more confident about their knowledge in the subject , as a result they can become more
active and with a private tutor you can work on the obstacles .

The cons appears as tutoring can be expensive. Also, the tutor may not be a certified teacher and it can
be hard to find an experienced and professional tutor.

Thirdly, the benefits of going to live in a country where the language is spoken are learning faster
because you are practicing what you are learning in that country , also it is an opportunity to learn more
about places and improve cultural literacy and you will learn and know new words . But the
disadvantages are becoming truly independent because you will do everything by yourself, adding to
that, you might face communication problems and it may be difficulty in adaptation.

To sum up, learning language is useful for self-development and cognitive development equally ,
However, the method is different because each of us has its own way of learning.

Remarks:

Use different linkers of addition : in addition, besides, moreover, furthermore, and, also, adding to that…

*You used also many times

* it is better to use might instead of may

As well should be at the end of the sentence

If you take sentences from the internet, try to paraphrase them and use your own way of elaboration