Name : Ahmad Faiz Alamsyah

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Name : Fachry Ahsany

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original narrative :

True Friends
Once upon a time, there were two close friends who were walking through
the forest together. They knew that anything dangerous can happen any time in the
forest. So they promised each other that they would always be together in any case
of danger.

Suddenly, they saw a large bear getting closer toward them. One of them
climbed a nearby tree at once. But unfortunately the other one did not know how to
climb up the tree. So being led by his common sense, he lay down on the ground
breathless and pretended to be a dead man.

The bear came near the one who was lying on the ground. It smelt in his
ears, and slowly left the place because the bears do not want to touch the dead
creatures. After that, the friend on the tree came down and asked his friend that
was on the ground, “Friend, what did the bear whisper into your ears?” The other
friend replied, “Just now the bear advised me not to believe a false friend”.
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True Friends

Once upon a time, there were two close friends. His name is Dono and
Indro. who were walking through the forest together. They knew that anything
dangerous can happen any time in the forest. In the forest it is famous for many
wild animals So they promised each other that they would always be together in
any case of danger. They were forced to pass through the forest because they
wanted to get to school quickly

On the way, suddenly they saw a large bear getting closer toward them. One
of them (Dono) climbed a nearby tree at once. But unfortunately the other one
(Indro) did not know how to climb up the tree. So being led by his common sense,
he lay down on the ground breathless and pretended to be a dead man.

The bear came near the one who was lying on the ground. It smelt in his
ears, and slowly left the place because the bears do not want to touch the dead
creatures. After that, Dono on the tree came down and asked his friend that was on
the ground, “Indro, what did the bear whisper into your ears?” Indro replied, “Just
now the bear advised me not to believe a false friend”. Then with surprise, Dono
said "I'm sorry friend, not my intention to leave you with the threat of the big bear,
I promise not to repeat it again " Indro replied "Okay I forgive you Don, next time
if there is a friend who cares, don't think about yourself” " yes dro, I'm sorry, I
promise to do not it again"

But Indro doesn't believe Dono, therefore Indro also has a plan to test if he
really has changed or not. Approximately 2 days after the incident, indro invites
dono to go to school through the forest with the reason to be faster. That day Indro
was intentional to go to school with a tight time. Because of the reasons for close
friends and because dono had promised Indro to always be together under any
situation, dono was forced to wait for indro who was late going to school and
passing through the forest.

Arriving in the forest, after about 4 minutes they passed the forest with a
feeling of fear, finally reappeared the big bear chasing them both. Indro and Dono
were separated. But dono remembered a promise that will be shared indro in any
situation. Finally dono also embrace indro and they run together, but the bad
behavior befalls when he runs while embracing indro. He fell into a ravine because
his legs tripped on a broken branch. Dono fell, with surprise the bear was stopped
chasing them, because this bear is a teddy bear which is a casino that is their own
friend. Casinos and indro also directly help Indro, the casino and indro cry and
apologize to dono. "Yes, my friends forgive your actions (while smiling and
holding pain)" dono answer. But shortly after it dono died. Indro also felt sorry for
losing a friend who held his promise to always be there for him.