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Tips For Writing - How To Make Your Sentences More Descriptive
Tips For Writing - How To Make Your Sentences More Descriptive
A deer ran across the road furiously, and I hit the brakes
immediately.
In this sentence, the adverbs are taking away one’s need to use
descriptive verbs. They act as sprinkles on an otherwise mundane
sentence.
The deer sprang across the road. Smashing the brake pedal,
I swerved to avoid it.
The verb choice here puts more detail back into the sentence.
“Art washes away from the soul the dust of everyday life.”
The imagery that this evokes in the mind of the reader is deep—in some
sense literally. It brings to mind waves crashing over a shore and is much
more descriptive than it otherwise could be: