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Bab 4 - 5
In this chapter, the researcher would like to explain about the description of
In this part of the chapter, the researcher would like to present the description
of the data obtained. The data in this research were found from the students’ score in
been discussed in previous chapter, the population of this research was the eighth
The researcher used cluster random sampling to choose any classroom from
eleven classrooms of eighth grades in SMP Negeri 3 Palangka Raya as the sample,
and the test was held on Tuesday, 21 May 2019. As the result of the sampling, class
VIII-2 classroom become the sample for the research which consist of 32 students.
However, four students did not attend the class when the researcher held the test, so
the valid number of the sample was 28 and 1 teacher for questionnaire.
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4.1.1 The Description of Students’ Score in Writing Descriptive Text
The data presented here was the scores the students got in writing descriptive
text. There were 2 instruments used to collect this data. The first was students'
worksheet for essay test and the second was scoring rubric for assessment. The
The final score was obtained by dividing the students’ score with the max
score 30 (max score of each criteria multiplied with the number of criteria) and then
multiplied it with 100. The result of this calculation then used to see if the student has
Based on the result, it can be showed that the students’ problems in genre
based criteria in writing descriptive text. There were 4 problems or 14,2% in genre
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Table 4.2 Students Problem in Textual Language Criteria
Based on the result, it can be showed that the students’ problems in textual
connective.
The data presented here was obtained from open-ended questionnaire given to
the students. It gave them 10 questions about the problems the students faced in
studying English and when writing descriptive text based on the characteristics of the
genre of describing.
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No Question :
Did you being active when your teacher taught English in the class?
Answer :
Numbers 8 10 7 3
No Question :
Did you feeling difficult to understand English material in the school?
Answer :
Numbers 6 20 2 0
No Question :
Have you learned Descriptive Text at school?
Answer :
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3 Yes Not Really Nothing at all Other
Numbers 28 0 0 0
Percentage 100% 0% 0% 0%
No Question :
Did you feeling difficult to understand about Descriptive Text?
Answer :
Numbers 10 14 4 0
No Question :
Did you feeling difficult to write about Descriptive Text?
Answer :
Numbers 14 7 7 0
No Question :
What did the difficulties that you faced when describing a Descriptive
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Text?
Answer :
Numbers 16 10 2 0
No Question :
Did you feeling difficult to understand about Generic Structure in
Descriptive Text?
Answer :
7
Very Difficult Not Very Not Difficult at
Numbers 17 11 0 0
No Question :
What did the difficulties that you faced in arranging sentence when
Difficult all
Numbers 7 7 12 2
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No Question :
Did you feeling difficult to choose Tenses correctly in writing
Descriptive Text?
Answer :
9
Very Difficult Not Very Not Difficult at
Numbers 4 10 10 4
No Question :
Did the time that was given by the teacher to writing Descriptive Text
is enough?
Answer :
10
Very Enough Quite Enough Not Enough at all
Enough
Numbers 3 12 6 7
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From the answer on the questionnaire at the table 4.3 we can see that there
were many variations of problems the students faced but the researcher would like to
resume them. According to the students, the problems that they faced in studying
English subject especially Descriptive Text were, 1) the students active enough when
the teacher taught English in the class, 2) the students difficult enough to understand
the English material in the school, 3) the students were learned Descriptive Text at
school, 4) the students difficult enough to understand about Descriptive Text, 5) the
students very difficult to write about Descriptive Text, 6) the difficulties students
faced when describing a Descriptive Text was translate, 7) the students very difficult
faced in arranging sentence when writing a Descriptive Text was translate, 9) some
students were difficult enough and some not very difficult to choose Tenses correctly
in writing Descriptive Text, 10) the time that was given by the teacher to writing
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4.1.2 The Description of the Teacher’s Answer on Questionnaire
The data presented here was obtained from open-ended questionnaire given to
the teacher named Susi Dona, S.Pd. It gave her 7 question about the difficulties she
faced in teaching English and student’s problem while writing descriptive text based
No Question :
Did you find any difficulties in teaching materials of English subject
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1 Yes No Not Really
No Question :
Did you find any difficulties in teaching Descriptive Text to the
No Question :
Did the students find any difficulties in simple present tense in writing
No Question :
Did you find any difficulties in explaining the tenses in writing
No Question :
Did you find any difficulties in explaining the format of Descriptive
No Question :
Did the students find any difficulties in describe about person, thing or
No Question :
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Did the students really understand about the generic structure and
For the teacher as we can see at the table 4.3, the teacher also answered that in
writing descriptive text that the students were do not have difficulties in describe
about person, thing, or place. In teaching about the material in descriptive text the
teacher was not have a difficulties since she mastered about the material before teach
the students. Also for the generic structure and textual language of descriptive text,
most of students were do not really understand what generic structure is and what
Describing
The researcher calculated the number of each score on each sub criteria to get
the level of qualification on each characteristics of the genre of describing in the form
of percentage.
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Based on the level of qualification the researcher was able to discover the
percentage of the student’s achievement by considering that the students that were on
Very Good, Good, and Fair Level have met requirement of the genre of describing.
considering that the students that were on Poor and Very Poor level were having
problem.
and theme was 82% where very good score 42,8%, good score 25% and fair score
14,5%. In the term of generic structure was 78,5% where very good score 35,7%,
good score 42,8% and fair score 0%. In the term of personal and commonsense
description was 78,5% where very good score 78,5%, good score 0% and fair score
0%. In the term of sentence structure was 92,8% where very good score 82,1% and
good score are 0%, and the fair score 10,7%. In the term of paragraph 85,6% where
very good score 35,7% and good score are 46,4%, and for the fair score 3,5%. In the
term of connective 78,5% where very good score 60,7%, good score 17,8% and for
The students problem on each characteristic are: the term of genre and theme
the students’ descriptive text have met the requirement of very low problem genre of
describing while 14,2% of them. In the term of generic structure, the students’
descriptive text have met the requirement of low problem genre of describing while
21,3% of them. The term of personal and commonsense descriptions the students’
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descriptive text have met the requirement of low problem genre of describing while
21,3% of them. In the term of sentence structure, the students’ descriptive text have
met the requirement of very low problem genre of describing while 7,1% of them. In
the term of paragraph, the students’ descriptive text have met the requirement of very
low problem genre of describing while 14,2% of them, and in the term of connective,
the students’ descriptive text have met the requirement of low problem genre of
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CHAPTER V
In this chapter, the researcher would like to explain more about the research
that had been carried out. The researcher would discuss and make conclusion about
the analysis of the data that has been explained on the previous chapter which was the
answer of the problem of the research. Then, the researcher would give some
5.1 Discussion
As the result shown on the previous chapter, the researcher would like to
discuss about the characteristics of the genre of describing in descriptive text written
by the eighth grade students of SMP Negeri 3 Palangka Raya and the problem they
faced in implementing them. These characteristics were divided into two criteria. The
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first criteria were genre-based criteria were consisting of genre and theme, generic
structure, and personal and commonsense descriptions. The second criteria was
textual language criteria was consist sentence structure, paragraph, and connective.
percentage of the students who get score 2 (poor) and 1 (very poor level).
The percentage of problem on genre and theme is 14,2%, the generic structure
is 21,3%, and the personal and commonsense descriptions is 21,3%. The percentage
21,3%.
implied here that majority of students were able to implement the characteristics of
genre of describing in their descriptive text. It was in line with the percentages of the
students who got score more than minimum passing criteria (75) which was 78,5%.
writing descriptive text according to the students and the teacher’s point of view. The
students gave many variations of answer about their problems in writing descriptive
From the students’ point, the problems that they generally faced in writing
descriptive text were problems on write simple present in descriptive text and
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From the teacher’s point, the problems that they generally faced in writing
descriptive text were similar with that the students described. The problems were on
write simple present in descriptive text and understanding the generic structure and
5.2 Conclusion
Based on the result of the test on the previous chapter and the explanation on
the previous section, the researcher would like to make a conclusion about the result
of this research. Conclusion was the answer of the problem of the research. The
- In the term of genre and theme, 82% of students’ descriptive text have met
them.
them.
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2. The students’ ability and problem in implementing the textual language
criteria :
met the requirement of very low problem genre of describing while 7,1%
of them.
- In the term of paragraph, 85,6% of students’ descriptive text have met the
them.
- In the term of connective, 78,5% of students’ descriptive text have met the
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5.3 Suggestion
Considering the result of this research, there was some suggestion that the
a) For Students
1. The researcher suggests the students to study more about how to write
a good descriptive text, especially about person, thing, and place with
exited and focus when in learning the lesson in the class even on the
b) For teacher
writing descriptive text. Start from how describe a person, thing, and
place.
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2. The researcher recommends the teacher to use any interesting strategy
in teaching English so the students can give more attention to the class
1. The researcher hopers that this research can be useful as a reference for
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