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Popular events like the Football World Cup and other international
sporting occasions are essential in easing international tension and
releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way.

Every four years, the whole world stops to watch international sporting
events such as the Olympics and the Football World Cup in which
athletes show their best performance to make their country proud.
These sporting occasions have proved to be helpful in easing
international tension in di�cult times when powerful leaders were
trying to control the world’s economy and other governments were
�ghting over the land.

The Olympic Games are one of the best examples which prove how
sporting events can bring nations together, at least temporarily. From
the ancient History, when Greeks and Romans would interrupt battles
to participate in the games, to the more recent international disputes,
when athletes from Palestine and Israel would forget their differences,
compete peacefully and even embrace each other after an event.
Moreover, these popular events have called the world’s attention to the
terrible consequences of wars; thus some leaders have tried to reach
agreements to end their disputes and live peacefully.
Similarly, international sporting events show bene�ts in some
developing countries which live in a daily internal civil war. For
example, Brazil has a high rate of unemployment, lack of education,
hunger, crime, poverty and corruption which leads to an immense
embarrassment of being Brazilian and a low self-esteem. However,
when the Football World Cup starts, the Brazilian squad, which is
considered the best team in the world, provokes an amazing feeling of
pride in their country. Most people seem to forget all their problems
and even the criminal activity decreases. They paint roads with the
national colors, wear the Brazilian team shirts and buy national �ags.
Moreover, the competition brings families and neighbors together and
even rival gangs watch the games and celebrate peacefully.

In conclusion, popular sporting events play an important role in

decreasing international tensions and liberating patriotic feelings as
history has shown.

This is a great essay, the ideas, language, structure of paragraphs and

sentences, and your grammar show a good command of the English
language. In my opinion it is Band 8. Keep up the good work.
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Mila
July 21, 2018

which type of essay is that one please?

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Simone Braverman
 July 21, 2018

This would be an Argument (agree/disagree) essay type.

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August 14, 2018

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August 15, 2019

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