Good exposition

Good interjections

Good chord choice

Bar 23 a longer chord

Good sectional close with the repeat

Hums accompanying soli

Good bass figures throughout the piece

Successful modulation

Good use of canonic imitation

Bar 75 good antiphony between tb and sa should have gone on slightly

Bar 100 just slight rhythmic variation with the entries

Good fragmentation of melody

Antiphony at bar 124 could be maintained with slight rhythmic variation to accompany the melody

Pedal on the alto

Maintain the motif

A bit more fioritura on the last cadence