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“No kid should be getting three or four hours of homework a night. There’s no breathing time,
there’s no family time, there are just extracurricular and homework and then go to bed” said
beautifully by Ross W. Greene an American physiologist who works with kids and families. It is
unfair that students are experiencing 3-4 hours of homework each night. Would you want an
extra 3+ hours of work after you left work? No! There is too much homework for students
because it is taking away time from students, it’s causing mental issues in students, and
homework is making students stressed - causing homework to be ineffective. Homework was
even invented to punish students, the creator of homework Roberto Nevilis only invented
homework to punish his lazy students in 1905! Now homework is everywhere in schools across
America, punishing students who do try. Furthermore, there will be more details on how
Homework is ineffective.
Not only is stress causing problems, but the time being spent for homework is not beneficial to
the student themself. Even so, potential over-cramming could lead to depression and worse.
What do I mean by that? Students are not given enough time to sleep, not enough sleep means
their brain was unable to process what information what it was given to them that same day.
With this stress and worry, kids are experiencing the negative effects of their brain being
overworked. Things like depression and anxiety can closely become one with students life. “'If
you don’t sleep, your brain doesn’t have a chance to consolidate information.'” (“Five”). Says
expert Dr Melissa Weinburg, meaning when students stay up all night cramming in their
homework. They aren’t actually retaining information, because they don’t give their brains
enough time to process information. Which kind of defeats the purpose of homework right?
Homework was created so students could refine on the material they are learning. So, we can
fairly say we should lesson the homework to give the time for sleep and that process of
information. “Researchers also say that too much stress from studying can cause brain
inflammation and result in memory loss and depression” (“The”). This is another reason why
homework is self-destructing. If your over-cramming constantly at night because you don’t have
time any other time, you can forget it all in a snap. Which is quite unfortunate if you have a test
the next day. This is why I think homework should be banned or reduced because it will improve
performance in tests. With a whopping 36.4% of college students experience anxiety
(“College”), which can connect to the fact most of these students have probably over-crammed
throughout the following years of college. Just thinking about how some of these effects could
have prevented is very rage-inducing- without homework the percentage of students with
anxiety, depression, and other mental issues would drop significantly. Thats why I think
homework has yet to take its leave. But what about the independence that students have
learned from homework?
#2 Counterclaim (Its the students fault for not doing this or that)
The next claim comes down to the students, some people say that homework could be more
and that students are choosing to not do homework. Really when it comes down to it. Student’s
should be doing homework, it is their responsibility. There are not any reasons why students
shouldn’t, right? Well, when it comes down to it. Sometimes people forget that homework may
be boring, it isn’t a priority, and/or students need help and are not asking for it. So they end up,
not doing that homework because of those obstacles. “Emotional Intelligence and the Yale Child
Study Center found that nearly 75% of the students’ self-reported feelings related to school
were negative” (Belli). To say if we improved the quality of homework, then students would be
learning and their feelings for school would improve. Instead of eradicating the entirety
existence of homework, we should change the parts of homework to make it fit for its job.
Students with negative feelings for school probably have similar feelings towards homework, if
we could perhaps improve the quality of homework, we could fix the “Why” students aren’t
finishing homework or not doing it in the first place. “The ratings scale supported the findings,
with students reporting feeling stressed (79.83%) and bored (69.51%) the most” (Belli). And so,
judging from the results from the findings of the conducted research, 69% of students were
bored. If we engaged in the homework would, there would be no reason to get rid of homework.
It also says in another article that countries with that average higher grades for students assign
less homework. “many countries with the highest scoring students, such as Japan, the Czech
Republic and Denmark, have teachers who give little homework” (Blaum). Which means
students would be doing better if our teachers assigned less homework. Overall, homework
should stay, because it helps students understand their material. By assigning less homework,
students grades would improve because they are not feeling as overwhelmed. Finally, to
summarize this.
Conclusion
Homework has its pros and cons, but effectively homework has done more harm than good.
I say that homework has done more harm than good because I have only looked at a small
percentage of millions of articles with evidences and studies showing us that homework hurts
our students.