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Q1 & Q2
Q1 & Q2
Q1 & Q2
As of the learning and developing officer, you’re doing great and the company is very happy with your
dedication and contribution to the company. The training and education that has been given to the staff by
you is remarkable.
(S-situation, T-task) However, 2 weeks back you were asked to develop a new health and safety manual
for the staff. I know you were not told at the time of interview that you might need to do such a thing and
its new for you.
(A-action) Now that you’ve written the first chapter, I went through that (R-result) and I think that the
content is fine but your writing style can be a little confusing for that staff to understand. So, here with
me, I’ve got some tips on how you can improve your way of writing and develop a good manual.
If you have any questions, please feel free to ask. I’ll send this on your email as well. We will see if these
tips help and we will have a follow up meeting afterwards. Thanks for coming, have a good rest of your
day.
3. AVOID REDUNDANCIES.
Tiresome writing occurs when a writer needlessly repeats a word or an idea. It’s redundant, for example,
to speak of a “beginner who lacks experience,” because the word beginner already implies a lack of
experience. Redundant words or phrases are those that can be eliminated without changing the meaning
of the sentence.
Parallelism in writing means expressing similar parts of a sentence in a consistent way. Elements alike in
function should be alike in construction. Parallelism is an important element of style because it builds
clarity and power. Note the following sentence in parallel form: “In the summer before college, I waited
tables, sold magazines and even delivered pizzas.” Now compare this with a nonparallel form: “In the
summer before college, I was a waiter at a restaurant, pursued magazine sales and pizza delivery was my
third job.” Do you see how the parallel version reads more smoothly?
9. BE SPECIFIC.
One major difference between good writing and mediocre writing lies with the specific and concrete
examples that you use (or fail to use). Vague language weakens your writing because it forces the reader
to guess at what you mean instead of allowing the reader to concentrate fully on your ideas and style.
Choose specific, descriptive words for more forceful writing.
The masculine generic refers to the sole use of the pronoun he or him when referring to situations
involving both genders. As much as you can, make an effort to avoid using he when referring to either a
he or a she, and using him when referring to either him or her. Because 50 percent of any general
readership is likely female, it’s not only politically astute but fair-minded to avoid using the masculine
generic, and to alternate the pronouns or opt for gender-neutral language, instead.