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Argumentative Essay Final Draft
Argumentative Essay Final Draft
Matthew Carter
Professor Needham
English 101
4/23/2021
As the famous Rodney Dangerfield said, “I went to a fight and a hockey game broke
out!” This, while it sounds funny, is entirely true. Fighting has long been apart of the history of
hockey. Teams used to employ players whose only job was to inflict pain on another player of
the opposing team. The nickname they gave these players were enforcers. These tactics included
dangerous blindsided hits and fighting. Fighting in hockey has always been favored but it is time
to take a deep look into the harm that it causes players and the image it portrays to the youth who
idolize players. Things from concussions and long-term health, influences on youth and how
NHL players voluntarily subject themselves to fighting are the most talked about issues when it
comes to fights. There is no room for any of this in today’s game and the NHL should be the first
Fighting is causing long term health issues for players. Players are committing suicide
and it is found that most of them had one thing in common. CTE. Chronic traumatic
encephalopathy is a degenerative brain disease that is being linked to athletes across all platforms
and hockey is no exception. As Charlie Gillis writes, “Fighting is on the decline in hockey and
for good reason. Over the last five years mental health and physical tolls have taken some of the
so called “enforcers” out of hockey and some out of living their retired life to the fullest. Todd
Ewen, considered an enforcer in hockey lingo, died by suicide, which has been linked to the
injuries sustained during his career to include fighting. The NHL has a class action lawsuit, filed
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by former players, stating that scientific research is showing the growing link between
concussions and having depression, mental illness and long-term brain damage. This could spell
bad news for the league and its revenue. So, with this in mind, GM’s (General Managers) are
turning an eye to the enforcer role and are taking on players that are more rounded,” (Macleans).
Todd Ewen, who last played professionally for the San Jose Sharks as a right winger, is only one
of many that have died with links to CTE. With how much CTE has been brought to light
recently it is a wonder that hockey, especially the NHL, allows this to happen. Commissioner
Gary Bettmann has consistently turned away from any links with CTE and hockey, Bettman has
gone on record saying that, “The science regarding CTE, including the asserted ‘link’ to
concussions that you reference, remains nascent, particularly with respect to what causes CTE
and whether it can be diagnosed by specific clinical symptoms… A causal link between
concussions and CTE has not been demonstrated… the relationship between concussion and the
asserted clinical symptoms of CTE remains unknown,” (Hockey writers). This comment came
after three players died in a four-month span, the two things they all had in common, CTE and
being labeled as an enforcer. Mr. Bettmann is completely missing the point. With all the research
that has gone behind CTE, all the doctors, scientists and researchers, that have done their due
diligence with this, to say what he did is appalling. What Mr. Bettmann does not realize or fails
to get is the fact that CTE is a major concern in every contact sport. He must have people around
him saying that he is dead wrong. If a 100 people had it, his comments could be understandable,
but thousands of athletes living and deceased with major CTE issues, please Gary Bettmann get
ahold of yourself. The NHL needs to do something about this and needs to do it fast.
Kids grow up idolizing people whether its your parents, musicians, athletes or actors.
When NHL players have a fight, it is showing the younger up and coming hockey players that
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this is ok. Kids learn by watching and then will use that knowledge to play that way on the ice as
well. If my favorite player does this then this is the way I need to play. It will get me recognition.
This is not the way it needs to be. The youth does not have a good understanding about
something like CTE or having a broken hand from fighting. In an article published by G Keays
MSc and B. Pless MD, “The behavior of children and youth playing in minor leagues seems to
be influenced by their watching televised NHL games. A survey showed that 90% reported
having learned a ‘‘behavior, technique or skill’’ from watching professional hockey players. In
addition, 56% stated they had copied illegal tactics of professional players at least once during
the current hockey season. Another survey indicated that high school hockey players who chose
aggressive NHL players as role models were more likely to assault others during games. More
recently, a report commissioned by the ministry of sports in British Columbia noted that 27% of
the 144 young hockey players surveyed imitated illegal hits they had seen after watching NHL
players.” (Chronic disease and injuries in Canada). When does it stop? When will the NHL
finally see that the product, they allow effects the youth as well?
NHL players are to blame here as well. They sign multibillion dollar contracts and
subject their bodies to this punishment. The surprising consensus is that the players want
fighting! “Ninety-eight percent of NHL players voted to keep fighting in the game, yet somehow
members of the news media take it upon themselves to try to convince the players that the
scribes know what is best for them. They do not write about the times a heavyweight skates by
his opponent's bench to say, "Settle down, or I'll settle you down," and it works. They don't
notice a tough guy warning an opponent at a faceoff. They've never heard a star player march
into their office, slam the door and demand the team get tougher because he's getting killed out
there by opponents playing without fear. They've never seen a chippy game on the edge settle
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down after a good fight,” states Brian Burke, President of Hockey Operations of the Calgary
Flames. Players should start taking note of retired players and the tole that it has on their bodies
Fighting is exciting to see in a ring, not a rink. It is a determent to the game. Players
putting their body on the line to change what, maybe the momentum of the game? When these
players retire and start having health issues, they will have nobody to blame but themselves. Yes,
they know the risks but at some point a change needs to happen. It obviously will not come from
Gary Bettmann, so logically the players need to take a stand. Policing themselves is fine but not
Works Cited
Burke, Brian. “Guest Column: In Support of Fighting.” USA Today, Gannett Satellite
fighting-column/3320245/.
Charlie Gillis October 4, 2015. “The Last Days of the Hockey Brawler.” Macleans.ca, 7 Oct.
2015, www.macleans.ca/society/the-last-days-of-the-hockey-brawler/.
Silber, Sammi, and Sammi SilberSammi Silber covers the Capitals beat for The Hockey Writers
and is an NHL contributor with Sporting News. She has also contributed to USA TODAY
College. “War on Ice: The Chilling Truth of Enforcers, CTE and Fighting in the NHL.”
enforcers-cte-and-fighting-in-the-nhl/.
“Study Shows Hockey Hall of Famer Stan Mikita Suffered from CTE.” USA Today, Gannett
www.usatoday.com/story/sports/nhl/2019/09/13/study-shows-hockey-great-stan-mikita-
suffered-from-cte/40145889/.
Keays, G, and B Pless. “Influence of Viewing Professional Ice Hockey on Youth Hockey
Injuries.” Chronic Diseases and Injuries in Canada, vol. 33, ser. 2, Mar. 2013, pp. 1–6. 2.
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