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Tenley Phoebus Student - Heritagehs - Argumentative Essay Rough Draft Raisin in The Sun
Tenley Phoebus Student - Heritagehs - Argumentative Essay Rough Draft Raisin in The Sun
Tenley phoebus
Mr. taylor
English honors 1
4 May 2021
It is not where your dreams take you, it's where you take your dreams
Walters one goal in life was to own his very own liquor store and have his very own business
so he can be able to provide for his own family but he does not have the money to get started he
is living in a one-bedroom house with his mom, sister, wife, and his son and to make it worse he
finds out that his wife is about to have another baby and previously his father had died so they
were still waiting on his life insurance money to come in and when it did his mom bought a new,
bigger house and she also put some into saving for Travis and bennie but one of the most
important things that happened with the money was that walters mom gave him the money so he
will be able to open his own liquor store and be able to provide for his family and maybe move
Walter thinks he has more money than he actually does Walter gave his money to Travis
because he was caught up in the moment thinking about how he had more money then he has and
thinking about his dreams as if they were real and wants to own his own liquor store he had
money to just give away the money that he gave to Travis was the money that he was supposed
to use for car fair so when he gave Travis the dollar he had to get money from his mom ‘’I have
to she won’t gimme fifty cents why not cause we don't have it what you tell the boy things like
that for here son thanks daddy he needs to be more careful and smarter about his money and the
way he spends it
Phoebus 2
Lena gets big Walter walters father life insurance and she will finally be able to move out into a
bigger house so she will be able to have some of her own space because she lives in a one
bedroom apartment with five people and a baby on the way she will also be able to give bennie
money for her nursing school and give some for Travis to put in his savings for school ‘’Listen to
me, now. I say I was wrong, son. That I have been doing to you what the rest of the world has
been doing to you. Walter: What you ain’t never understood is that I ain’t got nothing, don’t own
nothing, ain’t never really wanted nothing that wasn’t for you. There ain’t nothing as precious to
me There ain’t nothing worth holding on to, money, dreams, nothing else if it means if it means
it’s going to destroy my boy. I paid the man thirtyfive hundred dollars down on the house. That
leaves sixty five hundred dollars. Monday morning I want you to take this money and take three
thousand dollars and put it in a savings account for Beneatha’s medical schooling. The rest you
put in a checking account with your name on it. And from now on any penny that comes out of it
or that goes in it is for you to look after. For you to decide. It ain’t much, but it’s all I got in the
world and I’m putting it in your hands. I’m telling you to be the head of this family from now on
Walters dream will finally come true because he now has the money to start his very own liquor
store and so his dream in life will finally be able to come true and he will be able to provide for
his family and they won't have to perry about money as much and ruth will not have to have an
abortion because they have the money and the space for the baby and so everyone will be happy
because Walter will get his store mama will get her garden bennie will get her nursing school