NAME Laura Camila García Orozco GRADE

GROUP 20
CODE 0000158034

ACTIVITY 9 (In class)

1. Write your draft based on the feedback received on your outline and the samples given in VS, and in class. (350-360 words)

Did you know that fake news worries 86 % of Spanish internet users? This is a very important social problematic because it

damage the online reputation of people involved . In addition, misinformation on controversial topics increase spontaneously. Also,
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mistrust in web portals is getting a common feeling in public. Users should filter the sources where they get the information.

Fake news has the ability to alter information, in various areas, and noticeably affect events, such as: political campaigns, the
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public image of some people is distorted and also, a massive distraction in important information is evidenced. These events over

the years have increased exponentially, because every day the use of social networks increases and it is easier to create

misleading advertising, which contains false news, which are not extracted from reliable sources and from This way, slander and

false information are generated. Measurements must be taken into account because fake news phenomena have the power to

disrupt large crowds and this means dangerous and unjustified disturbances.
 Attract readers and generate advertising benefits because as uninformed readers attracted, false information tends to spray

through the society also it increase in bad decisions as direct consequence of spreaded gossips, also the society knowledge

decreases. As it can be seen the discomfort generated by fake news is greater than the positive impact that can be obtained
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from it.

So this means that users should be more careful about tge pages where they obtain the information because it can be false

and thus cause harm to users. as conclusion uncontrolled increase in false information, also lack of transparency in the bond

of trust between the reader of a massive diffusion media and its issuer. So the rise in fake news has skewed the judgement of

the population and generate unnecesary quarrel.

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Positive comments Needs for improvements