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Modul Writing Week 3-4
Modul Writing Week 3-4
Cause-Effect-
Argumentative Solution
Descriptive
Sequence
Informal Letter
Product Review
Customer
Complain
EXERCISE:
Carilah contoh argumentative essay dan tandai kalimat yang termasuk ciri-ciri
argumentative essay!
Argumentative Essay
1. Definition
Argumentative a style of academic writing where the author presents both sides of
an argument or an issue. The purpose is to inform rather than convince.
Structure
Body 1:
Counter Argument
/Reason 1
Introduction
Thesis Statement Conclusion
(Take a position)
Body 2:
Counter Argument
/Reason 2
Example
Introduction
(brief overview):
- Background Fact?
- Statement/Position parents should not
Conclusion:
Short point from body 1 & 2
Below is given an introduction paragraph of argumentative essay.
It is considered by some that being a university graduate is the key to securing a good job,
while there are others who think that it is better to have experience and soft skills. In my
opinion, I believe that having university education is essential for academic jobs while soft
skills and experience are more useful in business.
- The part of “It is considered …have experience and soft skills” is a building sentence of
the introduction. It tells the debate that is going to be discussed in the paragraph.
- “In my opinion … useful in business” is the thesis statement. It shows the author opinion
and some brief explanation of the reason indicating that this is the thesis statement of
argumentative paragraph.
An example of body paragraph in argumentative essay
In my opinion, whether reading high level of education or skills and experience, depends
on the position being applied for. Take for example law, medicine or teaching, it is
impossible to be considered for a position without the required educational background. In
contrast, in business, it would be more important for a candidate to have soft skills and
experience in that line of business so they can step into a position without further training
and be of immediate benefit to the company.
- The part of “In my opinion, … being applied for” is a topic sentence of the body paragraph.
It becomes main idea of the whole paragraph.
- “Take for example …benefit to the company” is the supporting sentences of the body
paragraph.
This is an example of conclusion in argumentative essay.
In conclusion, getting a good job requires a relevant background either in experience or
education depending on the type of work and field. People should make sure that they attain
the necessary skills or degree before applying for a job in order to be sure of success.
- The part of “In conclusion, getting … work and field” is the summary of all previous body
paragraphs
- The last sentence is the author’s opinion related to the topic given.
EXERCISE:
a. Suggestion Topic for argumentative essay
Can students evaluate and critique their teachers?
1. Definition
Cause Effect the cause is the reason for something to happen. The effect is the
outcome and the impact it makes.
Problem Solution the essay gives information about a problem and explains
one or more solutions.
b. Problem Solution
1. Bullying on social media has caused lots of teens to get depressed. How can we
address cyberbullying in your school/hometown?
2. What is the best way to drag a friend out of depression?
3. Smoking is highly addictive and extremely hard to quit. How can we address
the smoking problem and educate teens that it isn't cool to smoke?
4. People can often be manipulative and Machiavellian, getting into other
peoples’ way. What is the best way to deal with such people?
5. People litter without thinking of environmental consequences. How can we
educate these people?
Body 1: Effect 1
Introduction
Thesis Statement Conclusion
(Intro the cause)
Body 2: Effect 2
b. Structure 2
Cause 1
Body 1
Introduction Cause 2
Thesis Statement
(Background
Conclusion
Information) Effect 2
Body 2 Effect 2
OR
Cause 1
Body 1
Introduction Effect 1
Thesis Statement
(Background
Conclusion
Information) Cause 2
Body 2
Effect 2
Problem Solution
Structure
1. Structure 1
BODY 1:
Problem 1 +
Introduction Solution 1
Thesis Statement
(Background
Conclusion
Information) BODY 2:
Problem 2 +
Solution 2
2. Structure 2
BODY 1:
Introduction Problem(s)
Thesis Statement
(Background
Conclusion
Information) BODY 2:
Solution(s)
3. Structure 3
Introduction
Thesis Statement Body 2: Consequences of Problem(s)
(Background
Conclusion
Information)
Body 3: Solution(s) 3
- The part of “In summary, obesity…and eating disorders” is the restatement of thesis statement.
- The next words are the brief summary of all previous body paragraphs
A full version of the cause-effect essay
The number of overweight people is right now constantly increasing. inactive lifestyle and
unhealthy eating habits are the causes this epidemic while the effects are physical health problems
and loss of productivity.
The main causes of obesity are inactive lifestyle and unhealthy eating habits. Today more and
more people rely on cars instead of walking, have less physical demands at work and prefer
inactive leisure activities. This results in burning less calories and gaining weight. Moreover, the
problem is accentuated by the growing number of people, who eat irregularly and consume large
portions of high-calorie food. For example, about 50% of the adult population in Europe with so-
called disordered eating suffer from obesity.
The possible effects of this problem include physical health problems and loss of productivity.
First of all, obesity results in incorrect functioning of the human body and contributes to the risk
of developing some chronic illnesses. For example, as body fat percentage increases, the person’s
metabolism worsens, which in turn may result in diabetes or heart diseases. Secondly, overweight
people are very unhealthy and often suffer from stress and tiredness. This lessens their work
capacity and results in lower productivity. For example, it has been proven that an obese person
needs to put more effort to complete some task than a person with normal weight.
In conclusion, obesity is a big problem that affects a lot of people nowadays. It is mainly caused
by inactive lifestyle and eating disorders and results in severe health problems and loss of
productivity.
EXERCISE
a. Suggestion Topic for essay
How peer learning can be a solution for improving English ability.
In this module the description will only be explained for Task 1 IELTS Academic (Chart or
graph). It is because everyone will likely describe a graph either in school assignment, thesis,
research, competition, or even work report. However before learning the outline, we need to know
the type of data and graph.
Type of Data
Type of Data
Analytical Data
Descriprive Data
(Statid and Dinamis)
1. Introduction
a. Type
b. Topic
c. Place (If Any)
d. Unit of Measurement (If Any)
2. Overview
a. General Trend/Change
b. Contrasting Points
c. Main Stages
3. Body Paragraph
a. Topic Sentence
b. Supporting Sentence
Example :
1. The water use Domestic at Bahrain about 55 %
2. In Agriculture, the use of water at Saudi Arabia is more than 80 %
3. At UAE, The percentage of water use Industrial is slighty above 0 %.
Example :
1. Coca-cola’s sales was approximately $38 per share in 1996, the lowest between 1996 and
2001.
2. In 1998, coca-cola share price is around four-fifths.
3. There was a steady drop in the sales of coca-cola’s in 2000.
Example :
1. In Malaysia the proportion of expenditure (34%) was on housing while in Japan housing
accounted for just 21% of the total.
2. Food came in Japan at 24% while in Malaysia the actual proportion was higher (27%).
3. In Japan another major expense was transport at 20%, but this was much lower in
Malaysia (10%).
Writing Structure
The diagram illustrates how gold sales in Dubai changed from January to
December 2002.
A. Informal Letter
It is a type of letter sent to friends or family that express your personal matters just as
chatting with those people. As it is informal or casual, it is up to you to write anyhting
you want. However, there are rules to follow to indicate that it is still a letter, not other
kinds of writing.
• Put the date at the upper left or right of the page. You may add your address
below the date, but it is optional.
10 October 2019
Jl Brawijaya 75 Pare
Kediri, Jawa Timur 64212
• Begin with a greeting. You can show affection or love in the greeting.
Dear Sumiyati,
Dearest Mom and Dad,
My beloved Sansa,
• Close the letter at the lower right or left. You can express affection or love in the
closing as in the opening.
Sincerely yours,
Affectionately,
With all my love,
• You can add a postscript with a final thought at the very end.
P.S. ..........
Look at the three possibilities for the greeting of a friendly letter. Greetings can be
friendly, affectionate, or loving:
Dear Mary,
I’m sorry I haven’t written sooner, but I’ve been away on the most wonderful trip.
My friend Bill and I rented a van and traveled from Johnstown to Seattle, then from
Seattle to Los Angeles, and returned home by way of the Grand Canyon.
It was the most spectacular trip. We saw mountain ranges, beautiful forestlands,
deserts, and the magnificent Grand Canyon. I never expected the Grand Canyon to
be so big or to be so breathtaking. Bill took several hundred pictures, andI, of
course, had my video camera running all the time. I’m eager to show youwhat we
saw.
The only bad moment came when Bill sprained his ankle hiking down a trail. I
carried him piggyback all the way back to the van. We must have beenquite a sight.
We both laughed for a long time, even though Bill was in a lot of pain. Two days
later his ankle was a lot better, and by the time we reached Johnstown, he was as
right as rain.
I wish you could have been with us. But you’ll have to experience our adventure
through our pictures. Let’s get together soon. I hope you’re well and that things are
going smoothly at your new job. I lookforward to seeing you.
Yours truly,
Jim
P.S. If you want to call me, I have a new cell phone number: 555-1234
EXERCISE 1. Write a letter or email to your best friend about your days in
Pare.
B. FORMAL LETTER
In contrast to informal letter, this kind of letter is used for specific purpose, i.e. for
professional relationship. It can be used between company to company, company to
individuals or otherwise.
• Start with the date on the left. Then include your return address, about two lines below
the date. Your phone number is often included immediately following your address.
June 30, 2009
2990 West Main Street
Johnstown, IL 60622
(311) 555-1234
• Skip a line and then type the name of the person to whom you are writing followed by
the company name and address.
Ms. Mary Brown
Jones Medical Center
400 East Oak Street
Johnstown, IL 60634
• The greeting is next. If you don’t know the name of the person to whom you should be
writing, just write the position name (manager, accountant, etc.) or write “To whom it may
concern,”.
To whom it may concern,
Dear Sir/Madam,
Dear Mr/Mrs Art Director
Dear Ms Wanda Maximov
• Skip a line and then begin the body of the letter. Use as many lines or paragraphs as
necessary to express why you have written to this person. If you start a communicaton, just
begin with stating your purpose directly, or introducing yourself if your letter recipient
have not known you. If you reply a letter, start by thanking the recipient.
I am a student from Indonesia . . .
I am writing this letter to enquire about . . . .
Thank you for contacting me about . . . . .
• Type your full name and title (Manager, Chairperson, etc.) after the space left for your
signature.
[Your typed name]
[Your title]
• If you are enclosing a document with your letter, skip a line and indicate that at the end
of the letter.
Enclosure (1)
Remember that if the letter is typewritten, it should always be single-spaced. Let’s look at
this sample letters.
June 30, 2009
On June 25, 2009, I received a bill from your office in the amount of $2,500.00. It is my
understanding that my insurer will cover $2,400.00 of this amount.
Please contact Mr. Roger Smith at Johnstown HMO for confirmation of my insurance and to
adjust my bill. Inform me of any other steps I must take to correct this error. I have enclosed
a copy of my insurance policy with this letter.
Thank you.
Sincerely,
William Green
EXERCISE 2: Write a letter to a professor overseas and ask about the requirements to apply
the course you want or write to a company asking about a job vacancy.
Sequence
Structure
Body 1: Event/Step 1
Introduction
Thesis Statement Body 2: Event/Step 2 Conclusion
(a brief overview of
setting)
Body 3: Event/Step 3
Gordon Ramsay is one of the most famous chefs in the world. He is popular on television
and for his restaurants. Ramsay is also known for being a great teacher. He makes videos
on how to prepare relatively simple dishes, such as rice. His method of cooking is as
follows: 1) Get 400 grams of rice (preferably basmati). 2) Use cold water to rinse the dust
and starch from the rice. 3) Place the rice in a pan. Add some cardamom pods (broken
open), star anise, salt, and pepper. 4) Add one and a half cold water. 5) Get the lid on, bring
to a boil, then turn the heat down to let it steam for about 8-10 minutes. 6) Keep the lid on
throughout the steaming process. 7) Get the cardamom pods and star anise out, and use a
fork to separate the rice a bit by running the fork through the rice a few times. 8) The rice
is ready to be served (Shukla, Pragati). This recipe makes for a fragrant and downright
delicious basmati rice dish. Serving curry on top of this rice adds to its tastiness.
The sample of conclusion in sequence essay is shown below.
In the conclusion, the body paragraphs are summarized and restated.
To summarize, three different methods of cooking rice was examined: Gordon Ramsay’s
fragrant basmati rice, Fine Cooking’s scientific way of preparing white rice, and Martha
Stewart’s simple method of cooking white rice. Each way has its own merits and only
self-experimentation will determine your favorite.
EXERCISE:
Brainstorm your own mind map or outline and write down your essay.
a. Suggestion Topics for sequence essay
How to submit campus admission