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Zhiwen Zhang
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8 May 2021
Dear reader,
and argumentation in my research essay. I will explain terminology into plain words
of Chinese parenting style that influence children’s relationship with parents. From
my perspective, parenting style is an attracting topic that makes many students and
I’m planning to find essays from pervious scholars that best match my thesis. I’m
going to rewrite my annotated bibliography and maybe the first draft. To gather data
Changes I have made so far to my project is the research proposal, I rewrite the
elements that too complicated. For instance, my thesis is too complicated with
multiple questions, so I deleted some of those questions that are less relevant to the
main thesis I want. Furthermore, I added some details of primary sources like
collecting data by using the questionnaire. I also changed the form into the MLA
standard. My current draft analyzes the second sources that conform to my thesis and
main statement. Even though it’s my first time to write such long and complicated
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Introduction
In the process of rearing children, there are many aspects that contribute to
cultivate a healthy and well-developed child. The parenting style is one of the most
important aspects that help children to grow. For most families, in order to raise their
children in “correct” ways, parents tend to follow some kinds of structure that makes
their children achieve their expectations. There are several types of parenting styles.
The “authoritarian” and “authoritative” parenting style seems like the most popular
style that used by many families between America and Chinese (Chao1111).
Among the Chinese parenting style, the most popular one is called “authoritarian”
style because Chinese parents are often called “strict” and “authoritarian”. From the
this is an obsessive, intolerant style. But the “authoritarian” style is not all the same to
describe the Chinese parenting style. The most relevant parenting style of Chinese
family is called “authoritarian”, but it has some differences between the criterion of
that most Chinese family use “authoritarian” style is not totally the actual situation of
Chinese family. Even though the traditional thought of Chinese parenting style is
mentions that there is actually little relationship between Chinese parents and
“authoritarian”. Chinese parents are more involved in parental concern, caring, and
aggress, and not believe in their children (Chao1112). For the difference of culture
parenting styles mainly focus on keeping the family organized, achieving social
not always accord with Chinese parenting style. In Chinese tradition, they followed
the role made by Confucious --- chiao shun and guan. This is a concept that follows
this reasoning: people are defined by how they get along with others; relationship is in
the stepped form; and by attaching importance to relationship, each party maintain the
style.
Method
The method through using questionnaire and 5-point Likert scale among
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equivalent average age, they all received the same level of education and upper-
middle class. It also used a univariate analysis of variance (ANOVA) and Multivariate
analysis of covariance (MANCOVA) to measure and analyze the research data. Using
(MANCOVA) to test the score of ideologies to their children and authoritarian scale
scores between the similar educated Chinese and European - American mothers,
researchers collect data to get higher score of Chinese mothers than European -
authoritarian score, parenting control and ideologist (1117). After developing the
significantly more used in Chinese parents than America parents. This finding
To compare with this secondary source, another discusses more about children
development under certain kind of parenting styles. Although the first secondary
source states that the “authoritarian” style results high score in school, it does not
discuss the other aspects including influences on children. While for the second essay,
it not only states the “authoritarian” Chinese parenting style, but also make further
explanation about children development and different parenting style impacts. This
further explanation expands more information of Chinese parenting style. The reasons
to form “Authoritarian” parenting style are the traditional thoughts of Chinese parents
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and they pursue to cultivate their children to be useful (ideologist), but the impact on
parenting style, Yiyuan Xu, Jo Ann M. Farverb, Zengxiu Zhangc, Qiang Zengc,
Lidong Yud, and Beiying Caie found the “Authoritarian” style results in the highest
(529).
Researchers uses Parenting Stress Index-Short Form that yields three 12-item
subscales to measure the stress level of mothers (PSI-SF; Abidin, 1995). they also use
Child Rearing Practices Report (CRPR, Block, 1981) to collect the data from
Wang, we can see there is a boy and his mother. This boy is standing in front of piano
and playing the piano while reading a stack of books and using his feet to write
calligraphy. His mother is Waving her whip to supervise her son. We can see the right
corner from this image, it writes “CHINA DAILY”. So, we can know that this graph
is depicting a “classical” pair of Chinese mother and son. This graph vividly reflects
the “authoritarian” parenting style. In Chinese culture, the strict parents are important
to make children be more excellent. As an old saying goes: “spare the rod and spoil
the child”. This means that Chinese parents tend to use punishments to let their
children be obedient and follows their expectations. From this image, we can see that
this Chinese mother use whip as a punishment to her son. Her son is doing multiple
tasks at the same time: playing the piano, writing calligraphy and reading books. The
multiple tasks bring him heavy pressure, and he can just be obedient to his mother to
avoid the punishment. From his unhappy face, we can indicate that he is not willing to
finish such heavy tasks even though these tasks can make him more excellent. This
graph perfectly reflects the Chinese parenting style that conform to “authoritarian”
how their parents treat them: Do they force you to do what you don’t want to do? Do
they usually require you to be what they expect? Can they tolerant things you’ve done
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that not satisfy them? Do they care about your happiness and thoughts? After thinking
about these questions, they rated each question from 1 to 10 points (1 is strongly
are not sensitive aware of and able to understand their feelings. Except the last
question, my friends average score is high (8.4), and they average score slightly low
in last question that their parents care about their happiness and thoughts. From
research, this actively demonstrates that most of my friends’ parents use the
parenting style is pretty common among Chinese parents. The reason why I want to
use this as my primary research is that I can confirm that whether my research result
However, my research has some drawbacks: my sample size is too small to get a
general conclusion. This result of survey only measures a small amount of people in
my life circle, and we can only conclude that my result is subject to those of my
friends and surrounding people. Besides, the self-report method is not very objective.
Since the self-report is a way to report people’s own ideas in their minds, which is
more subjective than other research like observation and measurement through
instruments. So, I added the survey to know the ideas from my friends’ parents. I
made a questionnaire contains several questions like “what is the frequency to ask
your children’s mood and health?” “How often do you demand your children to do
something that you think is right?” and so on. Each question has level 1 to level 10.
Level 1 means never; level 10 means very frequently. Most parents tend to choose
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above level 5 when they are asked questions about the caring to their children and the
control willing to their children. My questions are not directly asking the caring
frequency or the control actions, but indirectly ask them in another way that can
reflect their level to represent “authoritarian”. This result indicates that parents
themselves may not be aware of their control of their children, but they still got a high
parenting aims to form a slightly strict and give emotional support to their children.
While most Chinese mainstream parenting style form the particular reason for
circumstance that follows the Confucius’ inspiration to raise children with knowledge
better than the second generation of the “authoritarian” parenting style. First
generation children get a higher score, have a better academic performance and
interpersonal skills than the second generation (Chao, 1994, 2001; Shek, 1999, 2001;
Su & Hynie, 2011). Among numerous Chinese cross-cultural families, their income
impacts their level of stress. Usually, a higher income Chinese family has lower
pressure than lower income Chinese family. Chinese mother who has higher
accumulative pressure would lead children to have lower academic score than mother
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who has less accumulative stress (Cheah et al., 2009; Fung & Lau, 2010).
Conclusion
they will have a broader viewpoint of cultivating their child. There may develop a
different parenting style because of the need to conform the society. We can’t know
Works Cited
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Chan, Siu Mui, Jennifer Bowes, and Shirley Wyver. "Chinese parenting in Hong
Kong: Links among goals, beliefs and styles." Early Child Development and
Care 179.7 (2009): 849-862.
Scarlett Wang. “The “Tiger Mom”: stereotypes of Chinese parenting in the United
States”, APPLIED PSYCHOLOGY OPUS, https://wp.nyu.edu/steinhardt-
appsych_opus/the-tiger-mom-stereotypes-of-chinese-parenting-in-the-united-states/