CIEDI

COLEGIO INETRNACIONAL DE EDUCACIÓN INTEGRAL

LANGUAGE &LITERATURE
ENGLISH
SUMMATIVE ASSESSMENT – PERSONAL NARRATIVE (STORY)
LIZZETTE ZELLER Á.
2020-2021

Title: FIRST BIRTHDAY

I- Introduction:
Topic sentence to hook reader’s attention - What the story is going to be about (name the event):
How you ever think what was your reaction to your first birthday?

Well here am gonna talk about how I react if I was a baby aolso I am gonna talk about who were the
pearsones imbolucrated …

II- Body Paragraph:

Provide the important details (when and where the event happened, people who were involved,
what the event was all about, how this situation positively or negatively marked your life)

It was a 26 of January of 2008 I was a baby I had 12 months and I was about to turn one year old,
obviously I didn´t know nothing for me was a normal day but what I don’t know was that my
parents they were preparing me a birthday party that was in a famous kids/babys restaurant and in
the party were my mother, father, brither, oncle, ant other ancle othere ant and my my grandmother
and that mark me very positive

III- Closing Paragraph

Re-state your intro.
What you learnt from this event
I learnt a lot of things like we the hummans have birthday and one of the mostg important is the first
I aolso learnt that for the birthdays all the family joins to celebrate your birthday and one of the
most important things I learnt is to to take advantage of all the time you are with your family

This draft does not respond to what you were requested to do! You must work so hard to
improve it for the final version!
 CIEDI
COLEGIO INETRNACIONAL DE EDUCACIÓN INTEGRAL
LANGUAGE &LITERATURE
ENGLISH
SUMMATIVE ASSESSMENT – PERSONAL NARRATIVE (STORY)
LIZZETTE ZELLER Á.
2020-2021