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Citing - Sources Plagiarism
Citing - Sources Plagiarism
_ ___ 10. As grocery clerk Sue Jami son reported, "M y wallet was
stolen, and within a week , the thieves had ordered an expensi
ce ll phone pack age, applied for a VISA credit card , and
received a PIN from the Department of Motor Vehicles to
change my driving record online."
_ ___ II. It is easy for a thief to use the U.S. Postal Service to steal
identities. .
_ _ _ _ 12. For example, thieves steal.credit card statements from
mailboxes, and then send a change-of-address card to the post
service to have future statements sent to a different address.
_ ___ 13. Mo st victim s of identity theft are young adults.
_ _ _ _ 14. The Federal Trade Commission reports that there were more
victims in the age group 18-29 than in any other group.
_ _ _ _ 15. The police should do more to protect citizens from identity
.theft.
_ _ _ _ 16. "You cannot prevent identity theft entirely, but you can
minimize your risk," according to the Federal Trade Commis-
sion booklet "Facts for Consumers."
_ _ _ _ 17. Most identity thieves operate in large, organized gangs.
Plagiarism It is important to learn how to use information from outside sources without com-
mitting plagiarism. Plagiarism is using someone else's words or ideas as if they were
your own, and it is a serious offen se. Students who plagiarize may fail a class or
even be expelled from schooL When you use information from an outside source
without acknowledging that source, you are guilty of plagiarism.
One way to avoid plagiarism is to always put quotation marks around words that you
copy exactly. (You do not need to use quotation marks if you change the words.) You
are also guilty of plagiarism if you fail to cite the source of outside information-words
or ideas-that you use. To cite a source means to tell where you got the information .
42 " j I Writing a Paragraph
Th e abbreviation "Q&A" in parentheses at the end of this sente nce is the first ele -
ment of the title of an article from which the words in quotation marks were copied.
There was no author.
If re aders want more information about this so urce, they ca n turn to the works-
ci ted list at the end of the essay, report, or paper and find this entry:
"O&A: Red Light Running." Insurance Institute for Highway Safety June 2003.
26 Feb. 2004 <htt p://www.hwysafety.o rg/safety _facts/quanda/rlc.htm >.
Thi s entry tells us that the complete title of the articl e is "Q&A: Red Light Running."
It was published online in June 2003 by the Insurance Institute for Highway Safety.
The dat e 26 Feb. 2004 is the date the writer found the articl e whi le researching the
top ic. The information in angle brackets < > is the Web site address (U RL) where the
article can be found .
More complete information on how to writ e in-text citations and works-cited lists
is found in Appendix E: Research and Documentation of Sources.
Ouotations
Quotation from reliable and kno wledgeabl e so urces are goo d suppo rt ing det ails.
Th ere are two kind s of quotation s: direct and ind irect. In a direct qu o tation , you co py
another person's exact words (spoken or written ) and enclose them in qu otation
mark s. In an indirect quotation, you report the person 's words w ithout quotation
marks, but with a reporting express io n s uc h as according to XYZ .. . o r XYZ
believes that . . . .
Direct Read the following mod el and not ice how di rect quotat ion s are use d to suppo rt
Quotations the topi c se ntence. oti ce that a quotation ca n be a co mplete se nte nce (or sev eral
se ntences) or a short phrase. Al so notic e the pun ctuation of eac h qu otation .
Supporting Details : Fa c ts , Quotation s , and Statistics
' Herper, Matthew. "Olympics: Performance Drugs Outrun Olympics:' Forbes 15 Feb. 2002 . 30 Mar. 2004
. <http://www.forbes.com/2002/02l 15/02 15ped.html>.
The form of this in-text citation shows that the words in quotation marks arc trom paragra ph 4 of an
online article written by a person whose last name is Herpcr,
2Bamberger. Michael. and Don Yaeger. "Over the Edge ." Sports Illustruted 14 Apr. 11.)1.)7: OO-X6.
The form of this citation means that the words in quotation marks were spoken by Dr. Michae l Karsten
and were quoted on page 62 of an article written by two peop le named Bamberger and Yaeger.
44 I \\Irili n ~ a Par agr a ph
" To win in wor td-ctass competition ," says one young bicycl ist, " you have to
take drugs" (Jones).
" To win in wortd-cta ss competit ion , you have to take drugs," says one young
bicyclist (Jones).
According to one young bicycl ist, ath letes have to take drugs to win (Jones).
Athletes have to take drugs to w in, according to one young bicyclist (Jones).
2. Reporting verbs can be used either with or without the subordinator as.
As one wri ter sa ys when discussing the case of an Olympi c medallist who
unknowing ly took a banned drug, "The human body. of course, doesn't
distingu ish intentiona l use from inadvertent exposure. Neither does the
IOC (International Olympic Committee)" (Kidder, par. 5).
One wr iter says when di scussing the case of an Olympic medallist who
unknowingly took a banned dru g, ' The human body. of c ourse, doesn't
distinguish inten tional use from inadvertent exposure. Neither does th e
IOC (Intern ational Olympic Co mmi ttee)" (Kidder. par. 5).
Some cri tics claim ed that the International Olympic Commi ttee had been lax
on enforcemen t of drug bans ("2000 Olympics," par. 6).
2. Normall y, place co mmas (and periods) before the first mark and also before
the second mark in a pair of quotation mark s.
According to Sports Illustrated, "Eliminating drug use from Olympic sports
would be no small challenge."
• When you _add an in-text citation after a quotation, put the period after the
closing parenthesis mark.
The Institute of Global Ethics warns, "The Olympics could well become
just another money-drenched media promotion in which contestants will
be motivated less by athletic glory than by lucrative future contracts"
(Kidder, par. 7).
3. Capitalize the first word of the quotation as well as the first word of the
sentence.
Dr. Donald Catlin, director of a drug-testing lab at UCLA, stated, "The
sophisticated athlete who wants to take drugs has switched to things we
can't test for" (qtd. in Bamberger and Yaeger 62).
4. If you break a quoted sentence into two parts, enclose both parts in
quotation marks and separate the parts with commas. Capitalize only the
first word of the sentence. - ,--
"The sophisticated athlete who wants to take drugs," stated Dr. Donald Catlin,
director of a drug-testing lab at UCLA, "has switched to things we can't test
for" (qtd. in Bamberger and Yaeger 62).
6. If you add words, put square brackets around the words you have added.
One athlete declared, "The testers know that the [drug] gurus are smarter
than they are" (qtd . in Bamberger and Yaeger 62).
Several years ago [when] 198 athletes were asked if they would take
a performance-enhancing drug if they knew they would NOT be
caught and they would win, 195 said they would take the drug . The
second question revealed a more frightening scenario. The athletes
were asked if they would take a drug that would ensure they would
win every competition for five years and wouldn 't get caught, but the
side effects would kill them-more than HALF said they would take
the drug ("2000 Olympics," par. 12).
For more examples showing the use of quotation marks, see pages 288-289 in
Appendix B.
PRACTICE 2 Add punctuation to the following direct quotations, and change the capitalization if
neces sary.
Punctu ating
I. Dr. Yixuan Ma, a well-known astrophysicist who has been studying black
holes, said they are the most interesting phenomena we astrophysicists have
ever studied.
2. As she .explained in black hole s the laws of nature do not seem to apply.
3. A black hole is a tiny point with the mass 25 times the mass of our sun
explained Ma 's associate, Chun-Yi Suo Black hole s are created by the death
of a very large star she stated.
4. It is an invisible vacuum cleaner in space she added with tremendous
gravitational pull.
5. According to Dr. Su, if a person falls into a black hole , he will eventually
be cru shed due to the tremendous gravitational force s.
6. Time will slow down for him as he approaches the point of no return she
said and when he reache s the point of no return , time will stand still
for him.
Supporting Details: Facts, Ouotations, and Statistics
Indirect In indirect quotations, the speaker's or writer's words are reported indirectly. with- j
Ouotations out quot ation mark s. For this reason , indirect quotati on s are some times called,
reported speech. Indir ect quotation s are introduced by the same reportin g verbs used
for direct quotations, and the word that is often added for clari ty. The tense of verbs
in indirect quotati ons is affected by the tense of the reporting verb.
Compare the following model with the second paragraph of the model for direct
quotations on page 43 . Notice the changes that occur when you rewrite direct quo-
tations as indirect quotations.
Note: The same sentence numbers are used to help you compare the two para-
graphs.
MODEL
Drugs and the Olympic Games 2
' It seems apparent that if athletes want to win, they must consider using
drugs. :'Dr. Michael Karsten, a Dutch physician who said he had prescribed
anabolic steroids to hundreds of world-class athletes, stated that if [athletes]
were especially gifted, [they] might win once , but from his experience [they]
couldn't continue to win without drugs. ·7He asserted that the field was just too
filled with drug users (qtd. in Bamberger and Yaeger 62)~ "i n fact, some people
claim that record-breakinq performances of Olympic athletes may be directly '
due to drugs. 9Charles Yesalis, a Pennsylvania State University professor who
has studied the use of drugs in sports believes that "a large percentage" of '
athletes who have set new records have done so with the help of performance-
enhancing . drugs. ' ~()He claims that a lot of experts, .at 'least in private, feel that .
way (qtd. in Herper, par: 6).
1. Underline the verbs said and stated in sentence 6. What tense are these
verbs?
2. Underline the verbs in the indirect quotations following these two verbs .
Compare them with the same verbs in the model on page 43. Are they in
the same or a different tense?
3. Compare sentence 7 in both models. What has been added to sentence 7 in
the model for indirect quotations? How did the verb in the quotation
change?
4. In sentence 6, why are the words athletes and they in square brackets?
5. Compare sentence 9 in both models. Did any words change?