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E-Mail: Weaknesses
E-Mail: Weaknesses
WEAKNESSES:
Body: Discuss all the details regarding the Training Conference clearly.
Closing: Telling him to share and ask his queries with you and give him the deadline also.
IMPROVED E-MAIL
To: Greta Targa <greta.targa@gamma.com.>
Cc:
Greta,
As you know, we have been working hard to plan a Gamma Fall Training Conference. It will be
held in Miami.
I have lined up the speakers for training session. On Tuesday, November 12, is Nicole Gold. Her
scheduled topic is ‘Using E-mail and IM Effectively’. Anthony Mills said that he could speak to
our group on November 13, Wednesday and his topic is ‘Learning Groups and Teams’. Their E-
mail addresses are: tony.mills@sunbelt.net.and n.gold@etc.com.
You can help us to make this one of the best training sessions ever. Please send each of them an
E-mail and confirm the dates and topics. We must print the program soon by September 1. Call if
you have any query.
Jim
E-mail: conference.meeting@suite.com
Cell: 0300-1234567