The line graph below shows the percentage of tourists to England who visited four

different attractions in Brighton.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make
comparisons where relevant.

The given line graph illustrates the proportion of travelers to England who visited certain
Brighton attractions over a period of thirty years beginning in 1980.

Overall, it can be seen that the Pavilion and Festival are the most favourite attractions between
1980 to 2010. Besides, it is also clear that the percentage of visitors in the Pavilion and the Pier
increased over the period, while the amount of tourists in others fell.

Visitors to the Pavilion increased dramatically from roughly 28% to around 48% during the
1980s and 1990s, before steadily declining steadily to 31 percent in 2010. The art gallery
followed the same trend as the pavilion. From 1980 to 1985, visitors climbed dramatically from
approximately 22% to about 37% making it the most popular during that time , but then
progressively declined progressively to fewer than 10% over the next twenty-five years. The
number of visitors who came to Brighton.

The percentage of people attending the Festival started at the highest at 30% in the beginning.
In 1995 After that, this number declined slightly by around 5%, but later went up to around 28%
and leveled off from 2000 to 2010. With regards to the number of visitors of the Pier, in the
first twenty years , the figure fluctuated moderately at around 12% before it surged to
about 22% by the end of the given time frame.

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tourist spot

*paragraphing
*Sentence in task 1( body)
a. Linking word
b. The value/ figure
c. The trend/ change (how)
d. Time -could be a linking word
With regards to the number of visitors of the Pier, in the first twenty years , the figure
fluctuated moderately at around 12% before it surged to about 22% by the end of the
given time frame.

*some inaccuracies in your data( the use of about and around)

*incomplete info
*repetitive expressions
TA= 5.5
*has a clear overview but inadequate data
CC=5.5
*inadequate use of linking words; overused one
LR= 6
GA= 5.5
WT1=5.5