Professional Documents
Culture Documents
Ocr Magazines
Ocr Magazines
Ocr Magazines
Front Cover
Larger image would look better
‘Pop Revolution’ – bigger?
Can’t read all the writing in the background
Black and white image – does it fit with genre?
Barcode positioning and size doesn’t look right
Price, issue doesn’t look right – hard to read, covered by image
Consider camera positioning on image
Fonts used are good
Masthead good
Reaches out to female audience
BOW Magazine
Minimal Level 1 Basic Level 2 Proficiency Excellence
10-23 marks 24-35 marks Level 3 Level 4
36-47 marks 48-60 marks
Framing a shot, All shots fit well
including and on all pages –
excluding professionally
elements as presented. Poses
appropriate fit with genre
Using a variety of Used variety of
shot distances as shots – long, mid,
appropriate close up
Shooting material Cap shows
appropriate to awareness of
the task set genre and target
audience;
however more
props could be
used.
Selecting Mise- Three colour
en-scene pallet shown
including colour, throughout
figure, lighting, portraying
objects and continuity across
setting each of the pages.
Lighting is
appropriate and
fits the photo
well, reflecting
personality, e.g.
front cover
lighting comes
from around the
model –godlike?
Choice of clothing
fits genre and
colour pallet.
Manipulating Clear sense of
photographs as layout on the
appropriate to DPS, photo fits
the context for well using colour,
presentation, clear and
including professional.
cropping and Photo on the
resizing cover could be
manipulated in a
different way that
you want the
audience to view,
however fits in
well with genre.
Accurately using Exciting and
language and entertaining
register language used
which reaches
out to audience.
Medium register,
structured well
Appropriately Clear sense of
integrating layout, image fits
illustration and in well with text.
text
Showing Good sense of
understanding of page design and
conventions of layout on DPS.
layout and page Improvements
design could be made on
the front cover
and contents
pages
Showing Same font
awareness of the throughout, links
need for variety with genre.
in fonts and text
size
Using ICT Good use of ICT
appropriately for considering
the task set layout and the
pictures are of
good quality.