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S62103D 5/5/2021
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Ho Chi Minh City is a dynamic and magnificent metropolis. The active, along with
the beautifulness of this town not only comes from the residents’ lifestyles but also
from many architectural masterpieces. One of the best go-to places in the city is
Ben Thanh market. This ancient market is seen as a historical witness and
observed many ups and downs of the city. When referring to the Ben Thanh
Market, the customer will immediately associate the fulsome smell and vivid colors
of food courts. Besides, the brightness and wide range of commodities from
souvenir shops will also overwhelm the customers. Nevertheless, this old site is
gradually deteriorating because of over-use and disrepair. This essay will point out
Located in the city’s downtown, this centenarian market is like the intersection of
regarded as the most current and cleanest market, the hygiene factors are a
severe problem for many years and made customers lose their appetite. Because
of lacking dustbins, the rubbish is littered disorderly and leads to sewer pipe
blockage. The apparent drawback of clogged sewers is that the customers have to
undergo the stink while shopping or eating. Besides, food safety is also a vital
criterion in every food store. Hence, the market’s manager should consider
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replacing old pipes and setting some rubbish bins at busy parts. Concurrently, they
can think of choosing a group that is responsible for testing the freshness of
foodstuffs. This innovation doesn’t merely ensure people’s health but also lifts the
Above all, not just renowned for European and remarkable architectural features
like the duplicate of Big Ben clock tower on the south entry, the market also owns
Asian specificnesses. These traits come from the red iron roofs taken the idea of
Vietnamese tile roofs, or multiple windows are constructed to let in sunlight like
Thailand Grand Palace. Hence, these features bring a sense of belonging and
attraction to customers. However, the interior space of the Ben Thanh market is
degrading. At present, it is easy to realize the leaky roof. Many customers will be
caught by surprise because there are some colorful buckets on the top of stalls.
They will believe that it is a part of Vietnamese culture. However, this is merely the
way shopkeepers catch the rainwater. Moreover, the floor tiles that are broken can
cause injury to the customers. To solve this problem, the local authority has to
cooperate with architects with high levels of expertise because restoring a historic
site is actually difficult. They must try to find materials that are the same as the
original to make the restoration seamless and keep the soul of the architecture.
Thus, the more concentrated on infrastructural renovation, the safer and more
In conclusion, the Ben Thanh market is a symbol of business in HCM and the pride
sanitation have made this place less enticing. Consequently, innovation is integral
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