Name: Alejandra Mitzumy Torrejon Sanchez

Have you ever made a change that improved your life

or the lives of others?
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The changes that we generate in our lives are to improve every day, in some things in
which we are failing and it is not bad to have things to improve because they always mean
that they are bad, but that we can do them better. Something that I rescue from a person is
the kindness and respect that they have with a person, regardless of the social class or the
situation they are in at the time, we must respect people, not forget that everyone has a human
value and The fact that you are in a bad economic situation, serving in a job, because of your
age, race or economically, these reasons do not justify that people feel superior to others.
Greetings, it does not affect us at all or take away our time, we must be kind, respect people
a lot and let the material value more than the essence of a person. When I have the
opportunity, I talk about the subject, as each day that passes you can see that that quality of
kindness and repentance that characterizes a person is lost.

Have you ever made a change that improved your life or the
lives of others?

Topic Supporting Concluding

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SS1: We must respect people, When I have the

The changes that we
not Forget that everyone has a opportunity, I talk
generate in our lives
human value. about the subject,
are to improve every
as each day that
day, in some things in passes you can see
which we are failing that quality of
and it is not bad to
SS2: Learn that a please, a kindness and
have things to repentance that
thanks, a greeting, does not
improve because they
affect us at all or take away our characterizes a
always mean that they
time. person is lost.
are bad, but that we
can do them better.

SS3: Let the material value

more than the essence of a
person.