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Lê Thị Lan Anh - Portfolio Writing Task 2 - 2nd draft
Lê Thị Lan Anh - Portfolio Writing Task 2 - 2nd draft
Student
Name: Lê Thị Lan Anh L9942603
number:
Adam
S2001C 25/03/2020
Class: Teachers: Humble Date:
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During the development of the world, science has brought new breakthroughs and
brought great inventions to help people escape backwardness. No one can dispute
the great importance of science. In the recent past, we have begun to use
innovations in the food we use every day in order to bring many benefits to
humankind.
One of the most positive things science has on food is the genetic modification of
agricultural and industrial crops. This is aimed at creating the best plants that can
concrete example, as you know, rice is one of the main foods in Vietnam and also
one of the main commodities exported to the world. But due to the increasingly
heavily affected. Therefore, scientists have tried to create a rice strain that can
withstand the unpredictable climate change. This helps to avoid food shortages for
people as well as ensure that rice can be exported to major markets around the
ingredients that make artificial meats with chemical liquids. This is still a
controversial issue among consumers. Some people believe that the use of
chemical foods will be harmful to their health as well as the taste of it is not as
good as the real meat and has a much higher price. But the truth is they have so
many great benefits. First of all, the purpose of the scientists who made this dish
did not want the Earth to be destroyed by greenhouse gas emissions by raising
experts, emissions from livestock production is greater than emissions from active
vehicles. In addition, we do not need to use violent acts against animals. Secondly,
the population of the earth is growing rapidly with more than 8 billion people while
livestock always needs a large area so limiting the use of real meat will be very
To sum up, science on food has brought great benefits to humanity and helped
people improve their lives for the better. Without these innovations, they could face
challenges like rice in Vietnam. Through these things, we must cherish the food
that we eat every day because it is an effort of those who have created and
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