Paragraph Writing: problem & solution

Audience: English language learners

Prepared by: G&R Languages - August, 2013

English Grammar:
Paragraph Writing II
Problem & Solution
For: English language learners
Presented by: RZP August, 2013

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 Effective Paragraph: problem and solution
TS=Topic Sentence SD=Supporting Detail CS=Concluding Statement

Obesity in North America

  Obesity has become a major health issue for North

Americans, and this problem is aggravated by the lack of
physical activity in large segments of the population. In
addition to healthier eating habits, one solution would be to
make it easier for obese North Americans to exercise on a
daily basis. This could be done at work, before and after the
shift, to ensure full participation in the program. This
program would be beneficial to obese employees as they
would be required to participate twice daily to help
decrease obesity among North Americans.

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 Problem & Solution

  Obesity has become a major health issue for North

Americans, and this problem is aggravated by the lack of
physical activity in large segments of the population. In
addition to healthier eating habits, one solution would
be to make it easier for obese North Americans to exercise
on a daily basis. This could be done at work, before and
after the shift, to ensure full participation in the program.
This program would be beneficial to obese employees as
they would be required to participate twice daily to help
decrease obesity among North Americans.

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 Problem & Solution

Obesity has become a major health issue for North

Americans, and this problem is aggravated because of the
absence of physical activity in large segments of the
population.

In addition to healthier eating habits, one solution

would be to make it easier for obese North Americans to
exercise on a daily basis. Photos courtesy of ClipArt

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Paragraph Writing: problem & solution
Audience: English language learners
Prepared by: G&R Languages - August, 2013

English Grammar:
Paragraph Writing II
Problem & Solution
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Reference: http://www.slideshare.net/elkissn/text-structure-for-young-readers
Emily Kissner 2010

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Paragraph Writing: problem & solution
Audience: English language learners
Prepared by: G&R Languages - August, 2013

English Grammar:
Paragraph Writing II
Problem & Solution
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o u For: English language learners
y Presented by: RZP August, 2013
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a n
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T
Reference: http://www.slideshare.net/elkissn/text-structure-for-young-readers
Emily Kissner 2010

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13-08-13