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Research Essay Rough Draft
Research Essay Rough Draft
Jalen Ramiro
Stanard
English 1201
8 August 2021
Social media has taken over the world. Platforms like Instagram, Twitter, and Facebook
were made to make it easier for people to connect, but its continuous use has created problems
with many people's social skills and mental health. When looking around everywhere, people’s
faces are likely buried in their phones and what has come from it. These distractions and other
lifestyles people see on social media have caused mental issues and lower self-esteem. Not only
that but the social skills of this generation are on an exponential decline. With the advancement
Before the creation of social media, the way many people communicated with each other
was through calling or writing letters to each other. That is until technology started becoming
more advanced with the creation of computers and the internet. Internet relay chats, or IRCs,
were first used in 1988 and continued to be used through the 90’s. This led to the creation of one
of the first social networking sites, Six Degrees, that let people create a profile and become
friends with other users which is now the basis for many other social media platforms. The early
2000’s saw the creation of sites like MySpace and LinkedIn setting the trend for many other
platforms that would come out years after. This includes YouTube, Facebook, and Twitter which
are all still used today with more and more users joining.
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According to Datareportal, as of July 2021 over 4.4 billion people around the world use
social media which is over half the people on the planet. The amount of influence and power
these platforms have is scary to think about not mentioning the average time spent on these sites.
Social media is one of the most distracting and time consuming things for a person to do.
Procrastination is nothing new but the new technology has created more ways for students and
others to not complete their work. When students study or do homework, it’s too easy to look
down at their phone to look at instagram or watch a youtube video. This creates that circle of
looking down at the phone and losing focus at what they are doing, making it hard to complete
things in an efficient and timely manner. Research conducted by Stop Procrastinating, an app,
surveyed 1500 undergraduate students and found “that 51 percent of students admit to losing at
least an hour of productivity a day to social media and internet distraction. About 44 percent of
those polled were worried about the overall quality of their work decreasing due to
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procrastination caused by the internet”. This is something many can relate to and it isn’t going to
In 6 Ways Social Media Affects Our Mental Health by Alice Walton, the main reasons
social media are affecting people are because: it’s addictive, causes less well being, makes
people compare themselves to others, jealousy, people think it will make them feel better, and
the illusion that more followers means their more social. One of the points emphasized is that
people believe social media will make them feel better. Like a drug people chase for that high or
feeling they get when they use it and when they don’t get it they feel terrible. Same goes for the
use of social media. People open their phones thinking they’ll feel better but end up feeling
worse. That’s where the addiction comes into play as well. People keep going back to it creating
One of the most recent sources that has come out on the effects of social media is the
Netflix Documentary The Social Dilemma that consists of interviews with tech experts and
former employees of major platforms such as Facebook. Many of them state their companies
developed technology that effectively manipulates the human psyche. That is why all these
people are becoming addicted to social media. It's all a business model, more people on their site
equals more money. Daniel Hövermann said something that resonates well on this topic, “If
you’re not paying for the product, then you are the product”. People’s attention is worth so much
money and many social media companies are taking advantage of it. A study was conducted by
Phil Reed at Swansea University about the withdrawal effects of using the internet and social
media. The study found that people experienced the physiological effects of withdrawal when
they stopped using the internet which is commonly found with people who are addicted to
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something. This addiction is not only hurting our society but may cause the opposite of what
social media was created to do, disconnecting people from the real world.
Shying away from addiction and more so on the social side of things, Tristan Harris,
former design ethicist at Google and co-founder of Centre for Humane Technologies mentioned
in the documentary, “We’re training and conditioning a whole new generation of people that
when we are uncomfortable or lonely or uncertain or afraid we have a digital pacifier for
ourselves that is kind of atrophying our own ability to deal with that”. A digital pacifier is a great
word to describe what this rise in social media has done. Everyone has found this comfort in
looking at their phones that, when presented with an uncomfortable situation, then they
Also in Social media's growing impact on our lives by Summer Allen and How Using
Social Media Affects Teenagers by Rachel Ehmke dive into the idea of social displacement.
Once again this time spent on social media is reducing the amount of “face to face” time with
other individuals and deteriorating people’s social skills. Now because of this “kids are missing
out on very critical social skills… it puts everybody in a nonverbal disabled context, where body
language, facial expression, and even the smallest kinds of vocal reactions are rendered
invisible” (Ehmke). Those little social cues like body language are learned through meeting
people face to face. If everyone is using social media to “connect” with other people then their
skills in the real world are terrible. It seems like kids these days aren’t even able to talk to a wall
or even keep a conversation going because of the circumstances they live in.
Another prevailing issue from the use of social media is with people’s mental health. In
Effects of admiration of others on social media fatigue: Loneliness and anxiety as mediators by
Yupeng Chen, “according to a report by Kantar (2019), between 2017 and 2018 the number of
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users in China who thought social media had a negative impact on their lives increased by 4%,
and the number of those who experienced negative emotions as a result of seeing other users’
happy behavior increased by 10%”. This ties in with Alice’s idea of social media promoting
jealousy between people. When someone sees another person living this extravagant lifestyle, all
people tend to wish for the same. Same with how people look on social media. There is this
standard that social media creates with what the perfect person looks like and that’s why many
people have this lower self esteem about themselves. This continuous comparison people are
doing everyday is exhausting and isn’t good for the mind. J. Cole's song “Love Yourz” embodies
what people’s mindset should be. There’s always going to be someone out there that has more
but true happiness won’t come until they love what they have and be grateful.
The creation of social media was made to make it easier for people to "connect" around
the world. And it hasn’t been easier to communicate and see what’s going on with people around
the world. But it seems it is working to do the opposite of connecting. The rise of social media
has created a society that is addicted to their phones creating many negative effects. With people
constantly looking at their phones they are disconnecting from this reality. Face to face
communication is becoming a lost art and people’s mental health is coming into question.
Hopefully people find a way to overcome this addiction as the technology is constantly evolving.
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Works Cited
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Ehmke, R. (2021, May 10). How Using Social Media Affects Teenagers. Child Mind
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Lenhart, Amanda. "Social Media and Teen Friendships." Pew Research Center: Internet,
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Lincoln, Caesar. Social Media Addiction: The Ultimate Guide to Finally Overcoming
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