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Part 1 famous people

Q1 没有必要重复自己的话哈: 结尾:No I am not really into who’s famous ….


It just remind me – S
Who tend to stick –稍微有点卡顿
Run out of … very fast—very quick
Watch … using TV--- on TV

New year – 这里卡顿稍微多一点,可以再熟悉一下内容,整理一下断句哈。


When people getting together
Outside our home—outside 就可以了

Museum 更流利了~
Very eye-opening – very 很少修饰 eye-opening : often ~
Knowledge—不可数
Relic ――P
The live of people---lives

Holiday
Well actually – actually 有转折的意味,很多问题回答不适合用在开头。
It is a very good time for travelling – which is…. 碎句子比较多这一块,记得使用从句

Part 2
Get this job in the future—信息量不多哈哈: in the not-far future
有意识使用从句,
词汇搭配和用词都很不错,
犹豫和卡顿较少,能够感觉不费力地保持语流
说得很棒~

Part 3
Q1
Exciting to do – excited to do
Exploration – P
天性—好奇—探索类的工作: ----- 这一点答案展现的很好,就是前面铺垫有点长哈哈,
尽早进入主题。
另外一个思路: 身边的影响: 1 父母的工作 2 老师 3 听到的故事,看到的电视里的
工作

Q2
Some children they think that--- they might find it easier to do …. 语气委婉化哈
其他的说的很好

Q3
Competitive—P
思路给的不是很好:只想挣钱的就会后悔,想要报效社会的就不会后悔, 容易站不住脚。
参考: 都会后悔,因为 career 都是很年轻的时候选择的, 因为阅历的有限,在工作过程中
难免做出一些日后回看会后悔的选择。
但是我认为收获和后悔是并存的,人们也可能会发现收获的成就感和经验远远大于后悔。

Q4
选择工作考虑的因素:
第一个 会不会对身体造成影响:----- 那么 builder 是不知道自己的工作都很危险吗?
(危险的工作,对应的是【健全的安全制度】,而不是【不选择这份工作】。
一份危险的工作,有健全的安全制度保护人的安全,也可以是一份好工作。)
第二个 工资-------这个应该放在第一位

参考:
最重要的: 工资
第二重要的: 工作地点: 人们想在机会多的,交通便利的,离家近的地方工作。
Part 1
Where is noise -- V
Medical kids;kits? I can use
Not much animals – S
A local reserve which is located in the xx area --- the local xxx
Documentary attract the xxx of the wildlife –…focused on

Part 2
很多句子都用的很好: reduce the use and reduce; show the determination on xxx
The law included – S

Part 3
Q1
回答的很好,前面句子可以再简洁一些,争取能够说到 50s 以内。
最后可以表达一下自己的态度: to some extent, in a short term, this is great news for students
who are suffering from heavy study loads/ I have to say it’s kind of barking at the wrong tree,
seeing that the competition of finding a good job isn’t seeing any easier.

Q2
pay respect to – respect teachers
Exclusive school ---- private ~
Cellphone is banned – using xxx is not allowed

Q3
Set up punishment --- 还得有表扬做得好的:Establish a reward and punishment system
Forced to do some cleansing work – force 词义不好
How to behave after school --- 放学之后吗?
Reflect recent situation –反映现状; 体现现状; keep their parents informed

Q4
思路:家长学习,家长找视频让小孩学习,找个警察来跟小孩聊天---???

参考措辞:家长可以在日常中教育小孩:出行要遵守交通规则,看电视可以和小孩讨论案
例,带小孩参加社区举办的警民活动。小孩表现的好,要及时发现,给与奖励。

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