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Journal Critique: Writing Style
Journal Critique: Writing Style
Journal Critique: Writing Style
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the believability of the NO Comments and Evidences
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research
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Report Title ✔
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● Is the title clear, Yes, the title of the report, “Influence of Laboratory
accurate, and Culture Media on in vitro Growth, Adhesion , and
unambiguous?
Biofilm Formation of Pseudomonas aeruginosa and
Staphylococcus aureus”, is clear and concise. The
title perfectly depicts the study which explores the
influence of various culture media on certain factors,
such as (1) growth, (2) adhesion, and (3) biofilm
formation of P. aeruginosa and S. aureus. Moreover,
it avoided the use of acronyms, technical jargons,
and abbreviations, alternatively chose simple but
accurate terms that directly describe significance and
objectives of the study. The title also serves as a
bird’s eye view regarding the main theme of the
paper, determining the culture medium suited for
these pathogens.
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● Is the purpose of
the study or V2
research
problem clearly
stated?
In the abstract and introduction to the study, the
research problem was clearly stated. According to
the researchers, biofilm-caused polymicrobial
illnesses are on the rise all over the world. Some
organisms, such as P. aeruginosa and S. aureus,
can cause infections, worsening the patient's health.
They also stated that there is minimal information on
the effects of culture media on biofilm development.
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Logical Consistency
The study was presented logically and systematically
● Does the by following the format used by IMRAD. It first began
research report
follow the steps with the introduction where brief backgrounds on P.
of the research aeruginosa and S. aureus, and culture media were
process in a shown. It was subsequently followed by the
logical manner? methodology which elaborated on the steps the
researchers had undertaken to acquire data. Then,
the results of data analysis using statistical tools
were identified, followed by a thorough discussion
that provided more in-depth explanations with
support from previous studies. The study ended with
a conclusion that is parallel from the results and
discussion. Each section was written
comprehensively and succinctly, thus capturing the
audience’s attention.
Literature Review
● Is the review
logically
organized and
offers a balanced
critical analysis
of the literature?
Theoretical Framework
● Is there an
identified
conceptual or
theoretical There was no conceptual or theoretical framework
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framework? that was identified in the research.
● If yes, was it
adequately
described and is
the framework
appropriate?
Aims/Objectives/Resear ✔ The objective of this paper was briefly stated in the
ch abstract on page 1, and was further explained in the
Question/Hypotheses introduction on page 2. The main aim of the authors
● Have aims and was to investigate how the 4 culture media affect the
objectives, a biofilm formation, adhesion, and planktonic growth of
research P. aeruginosa and S. aureus. The research was
question or clearly conducted with these goals in mind, and the
hypothesis been
literature review reflected supporting information that
clearly
identified? was in line with the objectives.
● If yes, are they
clearly stated
and reflect the
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presented in the
literature review? The objectives of the study were clearly identified in
abstract and the introduction of the paper on the last
paragraph in page two. The objective was to
determine the effect of the different culture mediums
used in the study on the growth, adhesion, and
biofilm formation of mono- and cocultures of S.
aureus and P. aeruginosa biofilms. The objectives
reflect the information presented in the literature
review, which support the objectives of the study.
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● Were the Since the focus of the study were effect of culture media
participants fully on the in vitro growth, adhesion, and biofilm formation of
informed about both Pseudomonas aeruginosa and Staphylococcus
the nature of the aureus, informed consent and confidentiality were not
research? taken into account since human participation was not
● Was the ✓ considered.
confidentiality of
the participants
guaranteed?
● Was ethical Ethical approval was not sought for the study because it
permission does not contain any human or animal subjects.
granted for the
study?
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References
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Sullivan. (2008). Critical Appraisal for Research Papers Appraisal Checklist & Guide
Questions.
University of Santo Tomas
Faculty of Pharmacy
Department of Medical Technology