Edited Sample: I always wanted to learn new ways to help make people's everyday lives

easier. Back when I was learning about PID controllers, I learnt that this technology was
used by BMW to implement the cruise control technology in their cars. This piqued my
interest on how these simple concepts can be put to use to make our everyday lives a lot
easier.

Original: While learning PID controllers, I was surprised to know how this concept had been
used by BMW to implement cruise control technology in their cars. These simple concepts
have made our everyday lives easier and more comfortable.