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Problematique Volume Two
Problematique Volume Two
C.H. Gorrie
A Kind of Reprisal
“Study of X #2”
Sacha Archer, 2020
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“Study of X #4”
Sacha Archer, 2020
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“Study of X #1”
Sacha Archer, 2020
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“Study of X #3”
Sacha Archer, 2020
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“John Cage Dreams He’s
Composed of Spliced Tape”
Sacha Archer, 2020
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Stephen Bett derek beaulieu: a ’pataphysics of imaginary solutions
Please, No More Poetry - derek beaulieu (with nods to glosa’d Dworkin Jones, Thensen, & Bernstein)
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The three derek beaulieu concrete lines that follow are from Kern (p.87) & Xerolage (p.3)
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Peter Ackroyd, in one of his novels, makes passing reference to an annual 500 unread books of
poetry collecting dust on the National Library’s shelves. (♪ 500 miles, 500 miles ♪…)
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Fiddling with Zukofsky, of course: “A”-22
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Stephen Bett Philip Lamantia: Violent Ekstasis
The Enormous Window - Philip Lamantia (with nodes to PL, Breton, Buñuel & co, & Blaser tales)
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Incidentally Philip Lamantia: A Study of the Poetics of Surrealism (MA thesis, 1976: super. Blaser,
Bowering, Maud, Quartermain)
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RUS KHOMUTOFF UNTITLED
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K. Maeby Untitled Collection of 22 Poems
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K. Maeby Untitled Collection of 22 Poems
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K. Maeby Untitled Collection of 22 Poems
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K. Maeby Untitled Collection of 22 Poems
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K. Maeby Untitled Collection of 22 Poems
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K. Maeby Untitled Collection of 22 Poems
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K. Maeby Untitled Collection of 22 Poems
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K. Maeby Untitled Collection of 22 Poems
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K. Maeby Untitled Collection of 22 Poems
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K. Maeby Untitled Collection of 22 Poems
proof infect
bone
infect finger, toe,
static bed -
let’s put some bad
in that great
big
empty
i am sleep
talker,
face toucher,
midnight patient and
virgin mother-
there is no
throat
without metallic
burning
lung
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K. Maeby Untitled Collection of 22 Poems
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“Da Amphetamine Plane”
Charles J. March III, 2020
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“Raw Dog Nervousness”
Charles J. March III, 2020
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“Extensive Preparation H”
Charles J. March III, 2020
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“Exacerbated Bedtime”
Charles J. March III, 2020
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“Angel Dust Doctor”
Charles J. March III, 2020
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David Piersol gamboler v.
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David Piersol gamboler vi.
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David Piersol gamboler vii-viii (to my rapists, fuck forgiveness)
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David Piersol gamboler x.
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David Piersol gamboler xiii.
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David Piersol gamboler xiv.
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David Piersol Q1
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David Piersol Q4
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David Piersol Q5
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David Piersol Q9
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David Piersol orpheus i.
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David Piersol orpheus iii.
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David Piersol good tidings
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David Piersol electric (not a joke, but funny nonetheless)
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David Piersol monday
the anglologorrhetic was primed for the cut, a bit dull but
but there's no doubt: this was prompted by cracked shells
by summer salads tossed by ruddy-faced truck drivers
middlegrounding rutters with intricate sculpted auteurs.
auxiliary blown engines drip with honey-thick jellies run
to get away from the song: an abortive subject, no insides,
an alien patient built from scraps on a far-off dreaming sanctuary.
the fluid expression of life and living means that i am
dualistically entangled without the use of a metronome or
transparency as an insect i would only deign to escape
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David Piersol degree
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“White on White”
Joanna Mariak, 2020
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“White on White 2”
Joanna Mariak, 2020
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“Quarantine”
Joanna Mariak, 2020
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“Quarantine 2”
Joanna Mariak, 2020
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“Quarantine 3”
Joanna Mariak, 2020
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“Quarantine 4”
Joanna Mariak, 2020
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“Aurora, Goddess Sparkle 1”
Joanna Mariak, 2020
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“Aurora, Goddess Sparkle 2”
Joanna Mariak, 2020
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“Balance”
Joanna Mariak, 2020
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“Three People Building a Space”
Joanna Mariak, 2020
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“Light in the City”
Joanna Mariak, 2020
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“Light in the City 2”
Joanna Mariak, 2020
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Shea O’Connor Libertas
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Shea O’Connor L’Assomption
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Shea O’Connor Carry On
Wand’ring well
through my downtrodden trench
Grasping for life on this old garden bench
My lover, departed, has whispered away
What reasoning I had constructed today
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Shea O’Connor By the Lake
Glimmer happily as
Waterford’s newborn presence
Ordained by reflection
Of two different orders
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Shea O’Connor Colorado
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Shea O’Connor Adirondack
O, golden heart
Reward us one more moment
You fell with the sun
And briefly illumined the roads
Of your family’s navigators
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Shea O’Connor Myth
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Shea O’Connor Atlantic Avenue
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Shea O’Connor Six-Year Brooklyn Shoes
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Shea O’Connor Caput Mundi
Take it easy
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Shea O’Connor Elegy for a Soul
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Shea O’Connor Star of the Sea
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Shea O’Connor Beneath the Bells
Surely wrought
With archangelic purpose
Our soul and song
Exhumed for service
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Shea O’Connor Couriers
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Shea O’Connor Florida
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“Ghosts”
Joanna Mariak, 2020
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“Ghosts 2”
Joanna Mariak, 2020
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Kristopher Biernat Reimagining of Shea O’Connor Poems
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Kristopher Biernat Reimagining of Shea O’Connor Poems
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Kristopher Biernat Reimagining of Shea O’Connor Poems
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Kristopher Biernat Reimagining of Shea O’Connor Poems
what monolith
holds soil purpose
in a humble
autumn toil
circus sun.
walls wails
and exhausted chirps
singing to a
loyal horse.
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“Branchery”
Joanna Mariak, 2019
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“Branchery 2”
Joanna Mariak, 2019
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“An Old Story”
Joanna Mariak, 2020
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“Walk With Me”
Joanna Mariak, 2020
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“Two”
Joanna Mariak, 2020
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“The Fence”
Joanna Mariak, 2019
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“The Summer is Ended”
Joanna Mariak, 2020
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“Me”
Joanna Mariak, 2020
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“Kim”
Joanna Mariak, 2020
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“Emily”
Joanna Mariak, 2020
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“Dark Outside”
Joanna Mariak, 2020
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1.
“I’m sorry!” Michael shouts at his naked body in the mirror. He tenses as many muscles as he
can and shakes violently, staring into his own eyes the entire time. “I’m fucking sorry!” He runs
out of the bathroom and flings himself onto his bed where he writhes and grunts, punching
indiscriminately at the air and sheets. His thrashing grows sluggish as he gradually relaxes. He
pants, tangled in a blanket, heart pumping in his ears.
It’s late January. Winter quarter at the University of Oregon is in full swing and Michael should
be occupied with the weighty coursework his syllabi announce. But he isn’t thinking about
school at all. He’s far away, stuck in the events of the previous year, his mind now replaying the
last conversation he and his ex-girlfriend Elise ever had.
It’s last September and she’s tearing up. Michael notes her remarkable composure. It intimates
that, for her, a long summer spent holding onto a wish he could at best caricature is coming to a
close. She’d sought an ideal in Michael that he, a people-pleaser extraordinaire, had
unconsciously feigned. A terrible mess ensued: Elise falling for a version of Michael that never
existed, Michael straining himself to the breaking point to try and be Elise’s Michael, and, when
that inevitably failed, attempting and failing to manage the emotional fallout.
“I–” Elise says, closing her eyes. A tear rolls silently down her cheek, the afternoon light
dancing off it as it disperses across her upper lip. “I know we will find other people better suited
for us,” she says, nodding. She turns her head toward Michael without making eye contact.
“There was just a moment when I ... when I really believed, you know?” She closes her eyes and
gulps, her face a grief-stricken frown.
Michael tries battening down feelings of relief as he watches Elise do her best to let go. A host
of incongruous emotions jockey for position in his chest as he mulls over what to say. “I want
you to know...how special you are,” he says quietly, embracing Elise from the side and rubbing
her upper back. They sit like this for a few moments, Elise’s body softly heaving against his.
“It’s probably time I go,” Michael says eventually, his growing impatience overpowering the
accompanying guilt. He rises and exits Elise’s apartment out the back door, walking down the
alleyway. Elise stands in the shade of her apartment building, watching him until he turns the
corner onto the next street.
Michael experiences what he’s dubbed “aftershocks” and does bizarre things in private, like
what he’s just done, shouting at the ghost of Elise still living in his head and flailing violently at
nothing in particular. He likes to think of these lapses as purges, where he “relives” the
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emotional excesses of his relationship, letting them exhaust themselves in the spent
musculature of his sweating body.
Michael wriggles free of his blanket and throws it to the side. He stares at the clock on the
nightstand: 10:33am. His electives at 11. He hurriedly throws on an outfit and grabs his laptop
bag on the way out the door.
2.
The girl with long black hair has been staring at him on and off throughout most of the
workshop. Michael’s tried avoiding her eyes, but he’s just finished reading, and the girl’s
volunteering a first critique.
“I didn’t really understand the part with the floating pyramid,” she says, looking up from her
papers. “Is Lauren having some kind of hallucination?”
Michael stares at her amber eye shadow and fidgets in his seat. “She’s just imagining it with her
eyes closed,” he says, his gaze moving to the floor in the middle of the classroom. “She’s
supposed to be thinking about the TV show she watches at the beginning of the story.”
“Oh, well,” the girl says, glancing down at the pages in her hands, “I think that could maybe be
made a little clearer.” She speaks the word “clearer” haltingly, accentuating the syllables as she
turns back to the story’s first page. “Maybe if you had the show’s host’s words come through her
mind again just before?”
3.
Michael sits on a bench outside after class, a large organic chemistry textbook open and resting
on his inner thighs. He’s reread the same explanation of resonance four times without
registering the words. He stares at a diagram of hexane and benzene, his mind wandering.
The dark lobby off of NW 13th Avenue in Portland smells faintly of cleaning products. The rain
outside beats down in sheets, the street a shallow stream. The lobby is about eight by eight feet
and the lack of lighting gives the impression that all the businesses in the building are closed
for the evening. Michael places a paper bag filled with fine-tipped colored pens on the floor. He
removes his grey, rain-speckled peacoat and tosses it next to his bag.
“I told you,” Michael says in a strained tone. “I told you that you should do what’s best for you.”
Elise stabs his sternum with her right pointer finger. “You.” She stabs his sternum again,
trembling and clenching her teeth. “Could have been a man.”
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“Hey.”
A pair of black suede boots materialize over the top of Michael’s textbook.
“I liked your story a lot.”
Michael looks up. It’s the girl from his creative writing workshop. Her blue,
white-flower-spotted dress flutters in the breeze. The noonday sun backs her head, causing
Michael to squint. He sort of salutes, using his left hand as a visor. A relaxed smile spreads
across her light-brown, oval face.
Michael recalls the frenetic creation of his story. Writing quickly without brainstorming or
outlining beforehand, he’d lapsed now and then into a kind of flow state. When he’d finished,
he’d had the overall impression that the work was somewhat confused. “I honestly wasn’t sure
about it,” he says.
“I mean,” the girl begins, taking the opportunity to sit down next to Michael on the bench. “It
definitely needs to be touched up in certain ways.” She pulls a set of papers from her laptop bag.
Michael scoots a few inches away from her. He remembers that all his other classmates’
critiques were collected and given to him at the end of the workshop. “Like I think the part in
the middle–Lauren’s internal monologue–that could actually work better as the story’s
introduction.” A queasy rush moves upward through Michael’s chest, throat, and neck, clouding
his mind. He nods and murmurs an acknowledgement, staring vacantly past the girl’s head at
the trees in the quad.
The girl clears her throat and Michael turns, slightly flustered. “Oh, yes. I think that could
work.” He glances at his textbook. “Sorry, I’ve just been a bit lost in my reading.”
“I’m Penelope,” the girl says, offering her right hand. Michael looks at her fingers for a moment,
noticing for the first time the girl’s numerous rings. A blue stone clasped in silver prongs wraps
around her middle finger. A gold, miniature chain-link rings her pinky. A thick silver ring with
a face etched on it gleams from her left hand’s pointer finger. Tears fall from the etching’s eyes.
He shakes her hand. “You’re studying chemistry?” she asks, looking at the symbols in the
textbook on Michael’s lap.
“Michael. And yes, I’ve just declared. You?”
“I’m an English major.”
Michael closes his textbook. His eyes flit from his left to his right knee. “I really should be going
now,” he says, looking at his computer bag. “Class soon.”
“Oh, well,” Penelope says, mildly startled. “Here’s your marked-up copy.” She hands him her
papers. He puts them in the back pocket of his bag. Penelope smiles. “See you in class
Wednesday.”
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4.
When he’d told her she should do what was best for her, he’d meant to set her free, to release
her from any sense of obligation or attachment to him. But freedom from him was not what
Elise imagined to be best for herself. Her ideal was an entirely different order of reality, one
requiring nothing short of a spiritual revolution in Michael. She imagined another world in
which he had fallen as hopelessly in love as she.
By the time he’d reiterated his desire for her to do what was best for her in that dim Portland
lobby, Michael’d been struggling for months with a growing awareness of how incommensurate
he and Elise’s feelings were. He’d battled his intuition to end things, selling himself a narrative
of he and Elise’s intellectual and spiritual compatibility. Although partially true–Elise was
remarkable in many ways that he admired–this fabrication could only forestall Michael’s real
feelings for so long. He eventually admitted his disinterest to Elise, and broke things off.
To Michael’s chagrin, his straightforwardness did nothing to assuage the throb of loss that
enveloped Elise: She could not have what she wanted, and what she wanted had, in a sense,
been stolen from her. Up until their final weeks of contact, Michael’d become a bullshitter in
her eyes, a liar, an illusionist who’d played her from day one. And to an extent, she wasn’t
wrong. He’d been something like these things, albeit accidentally. Michael knew this, and it
tormented him. Elise’d eventually acknowledged his unintentionality, but by then he’d begun to
distrust himself.
As he rounded that alley’s corner last September and caught a final glimpse of her standing in
the half-light of her building’s shadow, he’d begun to make a pact with himself.
5.
Face down on his bed, fists clenched, neck muscles strained, Michael screams “Let me go!” as
loud as he can into his pillow. He shifts his weight back, sitting up on his knees, and scoops the
pillow into his arms. “I was just a kid, just a kid,” he repeats into the pillow while rocking back
and forth.
He gets up and begins pacing about his room, whispering “Don’t you see I’m doing everything I
can to right this?” to himself repeatedly. After about a minute of this he goes into the bathroom
and looks into the mirror, saying “Why do you not get this? Honestly? What the hell else is
there to get?” He runs his sink faucet until it warms, splashing water on his face and then
drying it. He sits down at the small desk by his window, looking at his papers. He’s completed
most of his organic chemistry exercises so far, changing molecular structures from condensed to
Kekule, bond-line to Kekule, hashed-wedged to condensed. He begins working on the exercise
he left off on, mouthing “And now you’ve got me sounding like a fucking kook” as he draws a
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chain of carbon.
When he finishes, he lies down and stares at the ceiling for a few moments before reaching over
the side of his bed and pulling his laptop bag onto his chest. He removes Penelope’s copy of his
story from its back pocket. The pages have short commentaries written in their margins, and
when Michael turns to the back page, he finds it almost entirely filled up with ink. Penelope’s
provided an analysis of Michael’s main character, Lauren. Michael feels the same queasiness he
did when Penelope sat by him earlier in the day but tries quieting it by reading through the
commentary. She’s given more thought to Lauren’s character than Michael’d expected from a
classmate:
What was Lauren’s mother like? I imagine her as an ex-hippie with curly brown hair
who has short-lived obsessions. Her current one being juicing. I know you mention her
brother on the second page, but I was wondering what their age gap is? From the way
she talks about him it seems he’d be at least four or five years younger than her.
The TV show Lauren is watching at the beginning, about pyramids, is it supposed to be
Ancient Aliens? Or a fictional version of it? If it is that’s hilarious. The juxtaposition of
that show with Lauren’s contemplation about her family creates this wacky tension
that you do a good job of sustaining throughout the rest of the story.
Below the final sentence is a drawing of a UFO beaming up a pyramid. Michael raises his head,
pressing his chin against his upper chest. He’s wearing a black, long-sleeve t-shirt with five
images of bats flying in various directions on its front. Michael yawns, putting the papers back
into his computer bag and setting it on the ground beside his bed. He turns over onto his side.
“Letting me go is the best thing you can do for yourself,” he says to himself quietly as he drifts
to sleep.
6.
A tempest quietly gathered in the center of Michael’s brain, rushing up and outward,
ricocheting gently about his skull. He didn’t want to, but he did. Left forearm draped across the
steering wheel, Elise stared in silence. Another will flowed through his larynx, “I love you”
ringing tinnily in his ears. Cold lips. The warm wetness of a tongue.
“I’m so glad you said something – I would’ve never mustered the courage.”
A smile spread across his face at the word “courage.”
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The first few months passed like a skimmed book. He lived a montage: A blonde mane happy
eyes glittered through. Crumpled bedsheets. Mornings in cafes popping poached eggs over
potatoes. Lengthy kisses. Aimless drives along the county’s borders. A triangular yard hemmed
with rhododendrons. Craft beer and cereal.
Such is the intoxication of reckless abandon, of headlong sprints into the unknown. It was as
though his life had begun with that first kiss in her car. Everything pre-Elise dropped away. He
charmed himself into an otherworld.
Michael only partially remembers the night things first came to a head. Elise had voiced a string
of insecurities, insecurities which prodded at the underlying instability of Michael’s
convictions. He’d sat there, battling the urge to thrash about in an uncontrollable frenzy. He’d
steadied himself by focusing on a pulled thread in the room’s carpet, but inwardly continued
spiraling.
Eventually his mind went blank. He lost himself in an immaterial burning that engulfed his
chest. Everything deflated. The external world became a rumor. He savagely beat himself across
the temple with his shoe. An inky fog clouded the room. Unplaceable hissing filled his ears. As
his vision returned, his shoe–bit-by-bit–reappeared, lying on the floor before him, laces
splayed. He heard whimpering and raised his head. She lay on the bed, hands covering her eyes.
“Please–whatever happens–please promise you’ll never do that again.”
7.
“He’s weird, isn’t he?” Penelope says as she exits the classroom behind Michael.
“Who?”
Penelope walks up alongside Michael and they continue down the hallway together. “Gorman,”
she says. Professor Gorman’s saggy jowls and wispy, shoulder-length white hair crackle across
Michael’s mind. “Didn’t you notice when he randomly said ‘he ‘looks good for his age’?”
Michael had drifted into a content-less daydream during class as Professor Gorman talked at
length about making the things your characters want hard to achieve. “Even if they’re doing
little things like shopping – you’ve got to invent hurdles for them to go over,” he’d said,
scanning the room intently. “Otherwise your story’s gonna be boring.”
Michael opens the door leading out of the hallway, holding it open for Penelope. “He got this
funky grin on his face,” Penelope continues, following behind Michael. “And brushed his hair
back, and then just said ‘I look good for my age’ for no particular reason.”
“Huh. That is pretty random,” Michael says detachedly as he turns toward the quad. Penelope
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8.
“Goooooo yooour way. I’ll take the long way ‘round. Oh, I’ll find my own way down.” The song
lilts hauntingly through the cold room, the subdued guitars and drums rolling off the walls.
Her mother was a terribly callous woman who–as far as I can tell–was mentally ill.
She reveled in emotional sadism.
Elise successfully emancipated herself at the age of 17. She was her own council in
court. She lived in a women’s shelter during her senior year of high school; after
graduation she went west alone.
Her father was a decent man but hadn’t actively been in her life for many years. He
tended to prioritize his girlfriends over her, disappearing for long stints whenever he
became romantically involved.
“And hoooold yooour gaze. There’s coke in the Midas touch. A joke in the way that we rust.”
She was bowed down with a history of abandonment.
The thing that really twists me up inside is that I sometimes wonder whether at some
level I knew all of this before really getting to know her. If I could somehow perceive
something of it subconsciously.
I became just another person who abandoned her.
Michael puts down his pen and stares at the paper, humming along with the song.
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Unending rows of redwoods blend into tan-orange streaks flanking the road. His foot leans into
the gas pedal. The coupe hurdles toward the blue pillar of light that fills the space between the
trees, faraway where the sky meets the asphalt and the highway drops from sight.
Elise’s hand feels warm in his. The radio’s volume’s maxed and they’re both yell-singing: “And
you’ll find loss! And you’ll fear what you found! When the weather comes–” they glance at each
other and emphasize–“OH! Tearing down!”
Michael scoots his chair back, his bare feet sliding across the ice-cold tile. He shivers as he
stands. She’d been so obsessed with Ben Howard that his music was synonymous with her in
Michael’s mind. “Oats in the Water” was, for Michael, the sound of Elise. The song’s reached its
crescendo, the reverb-drenched guitar blasting over repeated crash cymbal hits. Michael lets his
arms hang limp at his sides and twists back and forth, bobbing his head all the while. He dances
like a rag doll along to the song’s thumping conclusion.
9.
He stares at her hair, noting the way it swims in the wind, how sunlight illuminates its
concavities. She told him the blue stone she wears is lapis lazuli, which “is good for just about
everything, if you don’t know.” She bent her head forward, staring into the ring, her hair
encircling her like a bed curtain. “It’s like your own little psychologist. It’ll reveal to you habits
of thought and emotion that sabotage healing. It’ll cure insomnia.”
“You’re not one of those people who puts stones out under a full moon to ‘charge’ them, are
you?” Michael asks, eyeing the lapis lazuli on Penelope’s hand in mock suspicion.
She stares at him, smiling. “I’ve done it before.”
Penelope’s come to the University of Oregon by way of Tucson. Her hair’s her mother’s, a native
of the Navajo reservation in White Cone, Arizona. “I’m a bruja,” she says. “A witch.” Michael
nods.
She reads the incredulousness on his face. “It’s part of my heritage,” she laughs. “Don’t worry –
I don’t turn into a wolf at night.”
Michael cocks his head slightly. “A wolf?”
“An old Navajo story,” she explains, waving it away with her hand. “For another time.”
It’s chilly under a cloudless sky. The farmer’s market in the quad bustles with students. Michael
and Penelope sit on the grass watching their peers weave this way and that among the booths
eating and laughing.
“I knew someone who used to claim that our behaviors were reducible to the brain’s
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10.
He’d spent half a lifetime reinventing himself. There’d been freedom in the incertitude, a sort of
eternal escape. He’d lived as no one in particular, a drifting shapelessness, solidifying in fits
and starts only for necessity’s sake.
This mercuriality proved the perfect foundation for wishes to run wild. It drew others in,
fascinating and bewildering them. He’d been a playground for others’ dreams.
After Elise, he’d concluded that it had all been a great refusal and renouncement: elastic and
characterless, his life until then had been little more than a prolonged turning away from living.
It was a miserable realization, and he shuddered at the years spent dancing around defining
himself, lingering in the liminal.
Maybe, at bottom, Elise’d simply been a refuge, a space where he could hold up for a while and
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continue forgetting himself. The thought’d chilled him, and he’d decided that, at present, he
was unfit for anything other than acquaintanceship.
11.
The aromatic scent of burnt cedar hangs in the kitchen’s air. Michael watches his murky, diffuse
reflection in the window opposite him. The darkness outside runs into his features, his face
turning into a depthless jumble of eyes and cheeks, all mixed up with reflected light, lingering
smoke, and black night.
A curved, waist-high table runs along half of the wall to his left. Multiple china storage sets are
stacked on it, looking not unlike pink and grey wedding cakes. Michael sits at a four-person
wooden table. Innumerable candles loom on surrounding shelves, stools, and the kitchen’s
island, reminding Michael of the tiered votives he’d seen when he was a child, travelling with
his parents in Vienna and Rome. Every few moments their flames sway as Penelope’s arm
swoops by.
A chain with a silver key attached to one end lies on the table. Beside it a piece of printer paper
with what looks like x- and y-axes drawn on it in pen. Around the edges of the paper are some
half-moon-shaped arrows, indicating a circular movement around the axes.
Penelope spins slowly for another minute, her arm bobbing the mildly smoking cedar. Michael
stares intently between his knees at the turquoise rug the table sits on. The designs on the
corners remind him of old portrait frames. Penelope pauses and dips the stick in a small bucket
of water on the floor. It gives off a low hiss. She moves to the island and places the wet,
blackened wood on a spoon rest, picking up the small vase of olive oil that sits beside it. She
turns, facing Michael, and makes the sign of the cross three times.
“The Lord is my shepherd; I shall not want,” she says, standing completely still with her eyes
closed. She holds the vase of oil with both hands in front of her chest. Her hair lies along the
lengths of her arms, falling just a few inches beneath her elbows. “He makes me to lie down in
green pastures; He leads me beside the still waters. He restores my soul; He leads me in the
paths of righteousness for His name’s sake.” Michael stares at her quizzically.
“Yea, though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I will fear no evil, for You are
with me; Your rod and Your staff, they comfort me. You prepare a table before me in the
presence of my enemies; You anoint my head with oil; my cup runs over. Surely goodness and
mercy shall follow me all the days of my life; and I will dwell in the house of the Lord forever.”
She places the vase on the table beside the piece of paper. “Voilà,” she says, smiling. “Holy oil.”
“Where’d you get that from?” Michael asks, smirking.
“I read about in a few different places, and I’ve used it before.” She opens her eyes wide.
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“It works.”
“Are you Catholic?”
Penelope laughs. “No, it’s just a way of creating a protective seal on the oil.” She looks at the
clock on the wall. It reads at 2:56am. “Okay, it’s almost time. We only have a few minutes.” She
dips her pointer finger in the oil and puts in her mouth. “Go on,” she says, inching the vase
toward Michael.
He sucks a bit of oil off his finger and watches Penelope curiously. She hurries to the window
across from him and makes the sign of the cross in front of it, then speed walks into another
room, making the same sign she as enters, disappears for a few moments, and then reappears
down the hallway on Michael’s right, where she signs again at the front door. She reenters the
kitchen and sits at the table across from Michael. He yawns and rubs his eyes.
“OK, that’s it. We’re ready.” Penelope points to the chain and key. “Remember what I showed
you?”
Michael nods and picks the chain up by its end. The key swings in a circular motion.
“The movement of the pendulum indicates ‘yes,’ ‘no,’ and ‘I don’t know,’” Penelope says, leaning
against the wall of the womans’ restroom. Michael starts swinging the chain in his hand. The
silver key bounces around in the air. Penelope walks over and gently tries to steady Michael’s
shoulder. She feels him tense and lets go.
“Sorry,” she says, putting her hands up and taking a step back.
“It’s okay,” he says quietly. “It’s just,” he pauses, glancing back at the door. “Are you sure no
one ever comes in here?” He laughs awkwardly. “This might look rather bizarre.”
“Yeah I’m sure,” Penelope says, waving her hand in front of her face. “I’ve literally never seen
anyone in here. I don’t think they’re holding many classes in this part of the building right
now.” She stares at Michael for a moment and smiles. “Just keep your elbow bent and flat and
stick it out away from you.”
Michael follows her instructions and begins swinging the chain and key once more.
“Just deliberately move it along one of the axes. So move it up and down. Do it deliberately,
you’re teaching your body how to do it. Teaching your unconscious.” Michael focuses on the
coordinated motion of his arm and sees the pendulum moving towards and away from his
sternum. “That’s gonna be your ‘yes’ or ‘no’,” Penelope says as she begins to pace. “Now you
want to just begin to move it into a circle – this is called a ‘transitional circular swing’ – and
move it consciously but gently into the other axis, side to side. Keep going, try it again.
Remember, your body needs to become comfortable with this.”
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“That candle,” Michael says, staring over Penelope’s left ear. “It’s dripping on the floor.”
“Shit. It’s burning at a weird angle.” Penelope blows the wick out and tilts the candle so the wax
pools away from its sunken, leaking wall. She gets up and puts it in the sink. “So, start swinging
the pendulum in a circular motion,” she says, wiping her hands on a paper towel and sitting
down again. “And take a moment to find your ‘yes.’” Michael begins lightly turning the
pendulum above the paper on the table.
Penelope leans forward. “Say ‘yes’ to yourself as powerfully as you can.”
Michael closes his eyes and says “yes” as if he’s speaking into his own chest.
“Take that feeling, wherever you feel it in your body, and move it up into your shoulder, your
elbow, your hand, and finally down into the pendulum.” The key slowly moves into a
front-to-back motion. “Good. Now, go back into the circular motion. Say ‘no,’ find it in your
body, feel it. Move it up into your shoulder, your elbow, hand, and into the pendulum.”
With his eyes still closed, Michael says “no.” In his mind, he sees himself shouting the word into
a bottomless ravine. It echoes and fades. Rotation by rotation, the key gradually begins to move
side to side.
“Good,” Penelope says. “We can start by asking something mundane.”
“Will it rain this week?” Michael asks.
“No?” Penelope says in surprise, watching the pendulum. “Thank god. You can ask a question
secretly, Michael. If you want.”
He watches the pendulum circle above the table for a few moments. Shades of orange candle
light reflect off the key, vanishing and reappearing with its twirls. A faint, intermittent tinkling
comes from the chain’s last loop as it rubs against the key’s head. The weight of sleep suddenly
grows palpable and Michael bites his lower lip. The dull sting jolts the drowsiness away. He
hears his name being called faintly as an unsolicited image of Elise passes into his mind’s eye.
Again, he stands at the edge of a bottomless ravine. The key continues to spin. A vague figure
forms in the darkness before him. He hears his name again, slightly clearer. His eyelids sag.
Elise’s face appears in the ravine’s chasm, her features highly defined. Half-sleep whisks him
away. Her eyes and mouth move in slow motion, as if silently pleading.
“Her voice, it changed all of a sudden,” Michael says, his eyes closed. Penelope sits at attention
and watches him intently. “She sounded like a small child, like she was trying to will everything
into being okay by wishing intensely enough that it was. It was as if the part of her the external
world never touched was speaking. And it was like she expected me to magically fix everything
for her, like I was predestined to utterly transform her world.”
Michael blinks rapidly a few times and lifts his head. He feels his cheeks flush as he registers
the shock on Penelope’s face. She speaks slowly, pausing briefly after each word:
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12.
“She was with a guy for, like, two years who was lying to her. She really loved him. It kinda
fucked her up, you know? She’s just fearful, that’s all.”
“Yeah, she told me about that,” Michael says, wishing he could disappear into the larger crowd
indoors. He takes a drink of his whiskey sour and grimaces. It was made by a guy who was
already pretty drunk, and it tastes completely off, almost like pineapple. He’s been cornered in
the house’s backyard by Paul, one of Elise’s oldest friends. It’s Elise’s friend Jenny’s birthday
party. A few groups of people stand around them, smoking and talking.
Paul smiles and puts his beer down on the table beside them. “Well, you know, I don’t mean to
intrude too much, but she’s shared some stuff with me. I just, you know,” he says, looking down
at his hands. “I just wanna make sure you’re okay and that you’re really sure about her, if you
know what I mean.”
Michael looks around, silently panicking. He shrugs and says “I – I – yeah.”
Paul tries to look as reassuring as possible. “Look, man. I’m just trying to talk to you.”
“I know, I know.” Michael feels the tensions of the past month and a half swirling just beneath
his sternum. “And I appreciate it.” His temple stings mildly, as if a ghost has slapped a shoe
across his face. All the back-and-forth dialogue with himself about Elise mounts and throbs
through his brain, creating cacophonous mental crosstalk. He looks at Paul. “It’s just –”
“Hey, you two!” Elise says excitedly, inserting herself between them. “Jenny’s about to do her
birthday cake inside. Come on.” She kisses Michael’s cheek and pulls him toward the house by
the hand. Paul picks up his beer and follows.
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Contributor Problematique Vol 2:
Information FEBRUARY 2021
Sacha Archer
is a Canadian concrete poet, writer and editor of Simulacrum Press (simulacrumpress.ca). He lives
in Burlington, Ontario with his wife and two daughters. Most recently he has published Mother’s
Milk (Timglaset), Lines of Sight (nOIR:Z) and MODELS [of Economic Recovery] (Simulacrum
Press). Forthcoming publications include Framing Poems (Timglaset) and UMO (The Blasted
Tree), a constraint based erasure/ sound poem. His concrete poetry has been exhibited across
Europe, the USA and Canada. Find him on Facebook and Instagram @sachaarcher.
Stephen Bett
is a widely and internationally published Canadian poet with 24 books in print. His personal
papers are archived in the “Contemporary Literature Collection” at Simon Fraser University. His
website is stephenbett.com
Kristopher Biernat
is a writer, artist, and publisher from Florida. His written and visual works have been featured in
The Evergreen Review, isacoustic, The Collidescope, of/with, Synesthesia Literary Journal, and
Poetry Pacific. In 2014 he founded Dink Press. He is in love.
C.H. Gorrie
C.H. Gorrie is a poet, writer, editor, and musician hailing from San Diego, California. He holds an
MA in English Literature from San Diego State University. The current nonfiction editor of
Consequence, he also co-founded Synesthesia Literary Journal and acted as its managing editor
for four years. He is the de facto A&R Representative of Reality House West, a Southern California
music collective and event production company. His creative work has appeared in literary venues
such as The Penn Review, San Diego Poetry Annual, aaduna, Problematique, ANON Magazine,
Aztec Literary Review, Poems-for-All, and Duende.
Rus Khomutoff
is an experimental poet in Brooklyn, NY. He has been published by San Francisco review of books,
Proprose magazine, Silver Pinion and Hypnopomp. In June he published a chapbook called Radia
from Void Front Press. He can be reached at @rusdaboss on twitter.
K Maeby
is an artist from Melbourne, Florida. She spends her time creating glimpses into other universes
and finding the beauty in this one. She hopes you find anything in her words- a connection, a joke,
disgust, even joy. She is in love. She can be reached at @kmaeby on instagram.
Joanna Mariak
to polska fotografka specjalizująca się w portretach, modzie oraz fotografii konceptualnej. Jest
studentką Szkoły Filmowej w Łodzi, jednej z najbardziej prestiżowych uczelni artystycznych w
Europie. Pracuje na aparatach analogowych i używa przeterminowanych filmów – to właśnie one
pomagają jej właściwie opowiedzieć swoje historie.
Joanna Mariak
is a fashion, portrait and conceptual photographer. She is a student of the Cinematography
Department at the Leon Schiller Film and Theatre School, one of the most prestigious art schools
in Europe. In her works she uses analog cameras and expired films because they help her to tell
unique stories.
Shea O’Connor
Due to his Roman Catholic upbringing, Shea O’Connor performs his craft through a blue-collar
perspective, remembering that honest labor is a holy endeavor. His work celebrates his heritage
and is faithful to the brisk precept: if you’re the only Church in town, be a cathedral.
David Piersol
is a new poet living in Albuquerque, New Mexico. His poetry appears in the Acéphale zine,
TSR0002, Scum Gentry Alternative Arts, and Conceptions Southwest. He can be found on Twitter
at @dparasole.