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English Sample Performance Task
English Sample Performance Task
Situation:
Imagine
you
are
on
the
board
of
P.A.C
(Protect
Ancient
Civilizations).
You
have
just
been
informed
that
the
Library
of
Congress
has
decided
to
shred
The
Odyssey
by
Homer.
Prepare
an
explanation
of
why
The
Odyssey
should
be
saved.
Remember
to
highlight
the
prominent
qualities
of
the
piece
in
your
essay.
Use
specific
examples
from
the
text
for
support.
Product
Performance
and
Purpose:
You
will
write
an
article,
letter,
or
essay
in
order
to
show
your
understanding
of
this
famous
epic.
Make
sure
you
use
examples
from
the
text/time
period/or
any
other
knowledge
you
have
to
make
your
argument
persuasive.
Persuasive Essay : P.A.C. Essay
Teacher Name:
4- 3- 2- 1-
CATEGORY Above Standards Meets Standards Approaching Standards Below Standards
Attention The introductory The introductory The author has an The introductory
Grabber paragraph has a paragraph has a interesting introductory paragraph is not
strong hook or hook or attention paragraph but the interesting AND is
attention grabber grabber, but it is connection to the topic is not relevant to the
that is appropriate weak, rambling or not clear. topic.
for the audience. inappropriate for
This could be a the audience.
strong statement, a
relevant quotation,
statistic, or question
addressed to the
reader.
Focus or The thesis statement The thesis The thesis statement The thesis
Thesis names the topic of statement names outlines some or all of the statement does not
Statement the essay and the topic of the main points to be discussed name the topic
outlines the main essay. but does not name the AND does not
points to be topic. preview what will
discussed. be discussed.
Evidence and All of the evidence Most of the At least one of the pieces of Evidence and
Examples and examples are evidence and evidence and examples is examples are NOT
specific, relevant examples are relevant and has an relevant AND/OR
and explanations are specific, relevant explanation that shows how are not explained.
given that show and explanations that piece of evidence
how each piece of are given that show supports the author's
evidence supports how each piece of position.
the author's evidence supports
position. the author's
position.
Audience Demonstrates a Demonstrates a Demonstrates some It is not clear who
clear understanding general understanding of the the author is writing
of the potential understanding of potential reader and uses for.
reader and uses the potential reader arguments appropriate for
appropriate and uses that audience.
vocabulary and vocabulary and
arguments. arguments
Anticipates reader's appropriate for that
questions and audience.
provides thorough
answers appropriate
for that audience.
Grammar & Author makes no Author makes 1-2 Author makes 3-4 errors in Author makes more
Spelling errors in grammar errors in grammar grammar or spelling that than 4 errors in
or spelling that or spelling that distract the reader from the grammar or spelling
distract the reader distract the reader content. that distract the
from the content. from the content. reader from the
content.
Capitalization Author makes no Author makes 1-2 Author makes a few errors Author makes
& errors in errors in in capitalization and/or several errors in
Punctuation capitalization or capitalization or punctuation that catch the capitalization
punctuation, so the punctuation, but the reader's attention and and/or punctuation
essay is essay is still easy to interrupt the flow. that catch the
exceptionally easy read. reader's attention
to read. and interrupt the
flow.