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School of Languages & English
Advanced: Reading & Writing
Hoi An ancient town is one of the most popular public locations are foreign tourists
want to visit in Vietnam. Furthermore, Hoi An has beautiful places that many
people have known, such as small souvenir places for many years. On the other
waste, and noise pollution. This essay will outline Hoi An ancient towns
possible.
Firstly, Hoi An is in Quang Nam province. The town includes old complex
sculpture meticulously that brings attraction with different shapes of red dragons
with long tails. Furthermore, the beautiful lotus flowers symbols marveled by
marble stones. There are many yellow shiny houses with brownish roofs .These
houses are used by wooden and houses are side by side together along the street.
Lantern stores are displayed many traditional colorful lanterns by the shoppers,
Secondly, Hoi An old town has problems with traffic congestion, plastic waste, and
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noise pollution that Hoi An authorities need to tackle the issues to protect the
because there is not enough parking space for buses inside the town. Besides,
there are only a few recycle bins to put the trash into it. Many bars, restaurants,
and cafe shops play loud music or use loudspeakers to have the attention of
travelers cause noise pollution that brings headaches, discomfort for other people
around.
Thirdly, it is the recommendations with many solutions to help Hoi An ancient town
has a clean environment, improve the quality of entertainment lifestyle for the
tourists. There will be three solutions to deal with the problems. The first solution
for traffic congestion is to rent vacant ground near the ancient town that can divide
into three areas for different types of vehicles, such as cars, buses, and
motorbikes for tourists. The second solution for plastic waste by increasing the
recycle bins to make it simpler to divide the waste storage to preserve the
littering. The third solution for noise pollution in many different third places is to set
up patrols at night to check restaurants, bars with other places. The patrols have
to ensure that the noise pollution can decrease as much as possible. Moreover,
the patrols need to have strict punishment for the third places that break the law.
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UNESCO. Additionally, the old town contributes as a vital role not only for the
national culture of Vietnamese people but also as an crucial image when foreigner
talks about Vietnam . Although many problems impact the ancient town, many
solutions for the recommendation to tackle the issues. These solutions are vacant
ground to prevent traffic congestion, increase the recycle bins to reduce plastic
waste, and set up patrols to decrease noise pollution. These resolutions are key to