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Federico Garcia T2.2
Federico Garcia T2.2
Federico Garcia
English Composition
Today's society has a very strong stance on what success means. There is a particular view of
how things should look and be done. Fame, fortune, and power are commonly at the root of what
success looks like. However, there are broader definitions that may be more appropriate and that some
of our society prescribes to. Happiness one attains in life through the achievements of dreams better
defines success and from this perspective, we take into account the uniqueness of every individual,
It is important to understand the meaning of success and how it has transformed over time.
Historically, man sought success in many different ways. Take ancient civilizations for instance. Cave
walls are imprinted with stories of hunting for family. The Ancient Greeks were obsessed with
performing heroic deeds. The medieval European Christians were about martyrdom and upholding
saintly principles. Men rose to power after fighting through wars because justice had been served.
Success at one point was not necessarily placed on monetary value but rather the outcome of events.
The result of these events alludes to the dreams men had and the satisfaction they got from the success
of such events.
Over time, the world has evolved in how they feel about success. Technological advancements
in recent years has really transformed how people feel about success. Television, movies and the
internet drive the ability for one to see another more closely and in ways that were not there previously.
Comparing people to one another is often at the heart of how people describe success. One prime
example is that people often look up to celebrities such as movie stars, artists, and musicians. Many
people look admiringly at these celebrities and even try to achieve the lifestyle they appear to live.
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People compare these individuals and often measure their own success by the similarities or differences
between them. Furthermore, some admire those with power, such as politicians and entrepreneurs.
Interestingly, everyone chooses to admire people they feel are successful and society doesn't always
agree with one another on this. While one person may find a particular politician successful, another
may feel quite differently about them. Again, the definition that we are each unique, desire different
However, the debate continues on the meaning of success. Many define it by taking into
account how they do things. For instance, having patience may be important. For some, it is what they
get in return from different entities, people, monetarily or possibly intrinsically. For others, it is what
they amass in life and leave behind that makes them feel good. Most of those things can count as some
part of society's overall image of a person. The question is, do those things create happy individuals
The attainment of celebrity, wealth, and power, while often viewed as a qualifier of success, is a
perspective that generations are learning to challenge. When looking at those in the sphere of fame and
money, they fall subject to the same downfalls that those of modest means and sometime more severe
consequences. Many renowned actors and actresses, musicians, and politicians fall victim to the
pressure and stress of fame and struggle to form meaningful relationships, maintain mental health,
sobriety and the goodwill of the general public. If fame and wealth are the true measure of success,
would we see these stories about high profile divorce, drug addiction and financial downfall of
Not everyone in today's society desires success in monetary terms. Some of today's very
influential people have defined it very differently and many of the definitions used do not refer to
monetary value or the things acquired in life. For instance, Maya Angelou stated that success is liking
yourself, liking what you do and liking how you do it. Former first lady, Michelle Obama, said that
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success isn't about how much money you make but about the difference you make in people's lives.
These very prominent people have stated it quite well. Each person is unique and his or her journey in
life is different.
Going back to the individuals we discussed earlier, we are inundated by a society that holds
people in powerful positions as “having it all.” They appear to be successful because they are
influential and tend to have monetary value that people admire. Some would argue whether these
individuals are truly happy. This could be detrimental if someone is unable to achieve the fame,
money, or power these individuals have. Success is a relative term and its meaning changes from one
person to another. Therefore, a more expansive definition should be used. The ability to feel content
with one's life and the achievement of goals set forth is a comprehensive definition of success.
One way to think about this approach is by looking at people who acquire very little in terms of
money or material items. They don't have much but yet many are quite happy. They would say theory
are successful at what they have attempted to accomplish. Another example is the stay-at-home mom
or dad. These individuals create a peaceful and nurturing family environment and feel the success
when their children are happy and healthy. It is safe to say that even society looks upon these
accomplishments as successful.
To summarize, a prosperous life is not strictly about having all the materialistic comforts
around. To some extent, this may be true as it's important to have the things needed for survival. How
much is enough though? This is only one very microscopic way to measure someone's success. There
are many other ways to achieve it. In the end, happiness derived from accomplishing meaningful goals
Questions
1. What is the significance of your essay? Why should readers care about what you have written?
I feel this subject is very pertinent to today's society and especially our youth. It is important
that people find their way in life, enjoying every aspect of what they do and not worrying so
much about what other people consider successful. I am passionate about this topic, and I feel
2. Which areas of your draft do you think will benefit most from revision?
I feel that the organization of the paper could benefit from further revision. I struggled most
3. Consider the strengths and weaknesses of your writing. How can you capitalize on your
I think the variance in sentence structure comes easily to me. I can capitalize on this by creating
a more fluid paper that flows in a more organized way. I feel that the paragraphs stay on topic
Federico: this essay is very good. There are no major issues here, just a
variety of minor or isolated ones that will together work to elevate your work.
You do a great job providing specific, logical, clear explanation and analysis—
good luck with your final draft. Ryan