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Facing Adversity 5
INTRODUCTION UNIT
5
Jump Start
Ask students whether they have ever Facing
Adversity
encountered an obstacle that stood in the way
of something that they wanted to do. Were
they able to overcome the obstacle? How?
Facing Adversity
Ask students what the phrase facing adversity
suggests to them. Point out that as they work Sometimes life can feel like an
through this unit, they will read many examples
about people who have faced adversity and obstacle course, but if we try
overcome obstacles.
hard enough we can usually
Video
Project the introduction video in class, ask make it over the hurdles.
students to open the video in their interactive
textbooks, or have students scan the BouncePage
icon with their phones to access the video.
Block Scheduling
Each day in this pacing calendar represents
a 40–50 minute class period. Teachers using
block scheduling may combine days to reflect
Introduce
Whole-Class
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Performance Task
Media:
The Dust
Unit Introduction Bowl from The Grapes of Wrath The Circuit
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Current Perspectives
To increase student engagement, search
online for stories about facing adversity
and overcoming obstacles, and invite your
students to recommend stories they find.
Always preview content before sharing it with
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your class.
• News Story: USC considers ways to
get blind football player into a game
PERFORMANCE TASK PERFORMANCE TASK PERFORMANCE-BASED ASSESSMENT PREP (AP, 9/23/15) An article by Dan Greenspan
WRITING FOCUS: SPEAKING AND LISTENING FOCUS: Review Evidence for about Jake Olson, a blind football player for
Write an Informative `Essay Present Multimedia Profiles an Informative Essay USC, and his coach’s efforts to get him into
a game
PERFORMANCE-BASED ASSESSMENT • Video: The ‘inspirational’ teen singer
Informative Text: Essay and Oral Presentation with Down’s syndrome (BBC, 2/4/15) A
PROMPT: video of Amy Purdy, three‑time Paralympic
How can people overcome adversity in the face of overwhelming obstacles? champion sharing her experiences in facing
adversity
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Introduce Introduce
Small-Group Independent
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Learning Learning
Task
Performance-Based
Assessment
Media: How A Young Tinkerer
from The Story Helen Keller Builds a Windmill, Independent
A Work in Progress of My Life Learned to Talk Electrifying a Nation Learning
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Unit Goals
About the Unit Goals Throughout this unit you will deepen your perspective about facing
These unit goals were backward designed adversity by reading, writing, speaking, listening, and presenting. These
from the Performance-Based Assessment at goals will help you succeed on the Unit Performance-Based Assessment.
the end of the unit and the Whole-Class and Rate how well you meet these goals right now. You will revisit your
Small-Group Performance Tasks. Students will ratings later when you reflect on your growth during this unit.
practice and become proficient in many more
standards over the course of this unit. 1 2 3 4 5
SCALE
NOT AT ALL NOT VERY SOMEWHAT VERY EXTREMELY
Unit Goals WELL WELL WELL WELL WELL
How to Support Kids When They 3. What support will I need from others in that achieving goals take hard work,
Have Trouble When setting goals with order to achieve this goal and how will I resilience, and determination. The third
students, have them consider these ensure that I get that support? question reassures students that help is
questions: The first question helps students see that available and shows them the importance
1. What are the opportunities open to me setting goals helps them take control of seeking—and accepting—help when
if I achieve this goal? of their life and focus on the issues that necessary.
2. What are the biggest challenges that I matter to them. As a result, they are likely
will face in attempting to achieve this to make good decisions. The second
goal? question helps students understand
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“I f you have to ditch a commercial aircraft in the Hudson
River,” the news anchor joked, “this is the guy you want.”
The “guy” was US Airways pilot Chesley “Sully”
the essay. Sullenberger III, a 57-year-old former Air Force fighter pilot and a
Encourage students to read this text on their 29-year veteran of US Airways.
own and annotate unfamiliar words and sections 3 On January 15, 2009, Sullenberger was the pilot on US Airways
of text they think are particularly important. Flight 1549 from New York’s LaGuardia Airport to Charlotte,
North Carolina.
AUDIO SUMMARIES 4 Flight 1549 left the tarmac at 3:25 P.M. Sullenberger thought he
Audio summaries of “Against the Odds” are was in for an average flight—a routine, everyday trip.
available in both English and Spanish in the 5 The flight was unremarkable for the first 90 seconds. Then
Interactive Teacher’s Edition or Unit Resources. something caught the eye of copilot Jeff Skiles. At 3,000 feet, he
Assigning these summaries before students read saw a flock of Canada geese headed toward the plane. Moments
Digital perspectives
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Illuminating the Text To help students Have students discuss what they see and how
appreciate the events described in the Launch this helps them understand “Against the Odds.”
Text, use the search term “Flight 1549” Then, have students write a paragraph discussing
(paragraph 3) to find video footage of the plane whether the video affected their response to
in the Hudson, the rescue of its passengers, and the Launch Text. Did it change their ideas about
interviews with Sully Sullenberger. (Note: Be what they read? Why or why not? If their ideas
sure to preview any video before showing it to changed, in what way did they change?
students.)
Tool Kit
Word Network Model
Rare Words Increasing reading unknown words pertain to known heavy blah indolent
inactive
comprehension relies on a connection concepts, teachers should emphasize comatose inert off sullen
between fluency and vocabulary. Rare semantic connections across words. This
words are less frequently used words that can be achieved effectively with concept Digital tools, including online dictionaries,
represent what might be a common idea. maps or word networks that help students often have features to help demonstrate
Instead of calling a character nervous, an understand the essential characteristics the increasing complexity of the spectrum
author might use disconcerted or flustered. of a word’s meaning. Here’s an example of these words by filtering out levels of
In reading/language arts, where many rare for sluggish: complexity.
Summary Summary
Write a summary of “Against the Odds.” A summary is a concise,
Have students read the introductory paragraph.
complete, and accurate overview of a text. It should not include a
Provide them with tips for writing a summary: statement of your opinion or an analysis.
• Write in the present tense.
• Make sure to include the title of the work.
• Be concise: a summary should not be equal in
length to the original text. Possible response: The informative text “Against the Odds” describes the actions of Chesley “Sully”
• If you need to quote the words of the author, Sullenberger, a veteran airline pilot whose skill saved many lives. In early 2009, he was flying a plane full
use quotation marks. of passengers out of New York City. Less than two minutes into the flight, a flock of geese collided with
• Don’t put your own opinions, ideas, or the plane. The impact disabled the plane’s engines. Sullenberger knew that the plane could not stay in
interpretations into the summary. The purpose the air long enough to get safely back to the airport. Instead, he landed in the Hudson River. With quick
of writing a summary is to accurately represent thinking and skilled piloting, he saved all the passengers.
what the author says, not to provide a critique.
See possible summary on student page.
Launch Activity
Explain to students that as they work on this unit,
they will have many opportunities to discuss the
topic of facing adversity. Remind them that there
is no right or wrong position, but they should be
able to support their position with evidence from
the material they’ve read as well as their prior
knowledge.
Encourage students to keep an open mind and
really listen to their classmates
Launch Activity
Let the People Decide Consider this statement: Chesley
QuickWrite QuickWrite
Consider class discussions, presentations, the video, and the Launch Text
In this QuickWrite, students should present
as you think about the prompt. Record your first thoughts here.
their own answer to the question based on the
PROMPT: How can people overcome adversity in the face material in the Unit Opener. This initial response
of overwhelming obstacles? will help inform their work when they complete
the Performance-Based Assessment at the end
of the unit. Students should make sure they
Possible response: It’s hard to think fast in an unfamiliar situation that’s unfolding very quickly. The answer the question with a clearly stated position
best way to be able to overcome adversity is practice. You don’t have to practice exactly the thing you and support their position with relevant, logical
want to prepare for; there are too many possibilities for that. It’s not like Sullenberger had ever landed reasoning.
a plane in the Hudson River before, but he knew what to do because he had spent so much time flying See possible QuickWrite on student page.
planes. So he could immediately tell the best course of action. I spend some of my free time practicing
math problems beyond homework. A test never has exactly the same questions as my practice, but my Evidence Log for Facing
practice is close enough that I can think quickly no matter how hard the test is.
Adversity
Students should record their initial response in
their Evidence Logs. Then, they should record
evidence from “Against the Odds” that supports
their initial response.
If you choose to print the Evidence Log,
distribute it to students at this point so they can
use it throughout the rest of the unit.
Performance-Based Assessment:
Refining Your Thinking
• Have students watch the video on Refining
Your Thinking.
• A video on this topic is available online in
EVIDENCE LOG FOR FACING ADVERSITY the Professional Development Center.
Review your QuickWrite and
summarize your point of view
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Tool Kit
Evidence Log Model
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Block Scheduling •
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Pacing Plan
Introduce
Whole-Class
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Performance Task
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whole-class learning
WHOLE-CLASS LEARNING
The Circuit
Francisco Jiménez
PERFORMANCE TASK
WRITING FOCUS
Write an Informative Essay
The Whole-Class readings describe the struggles people face dealing with
tremendous adversity. After reading and listening, you will write an informative
essay on the topic of facing adversity.
Introduce Introduce
Small-Group Independent
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Learning Learning
Task
Performance-Based
Assessment
Media: How A Young Tinkerer
from The Story Helen Keller Builds a Windmill, Independent
A Work in Progress of My Life Learned to Talk Electrifying a Nation Learning
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Insight
This selection uses photographs, interviews, and historical film footage
to create a disturbing picture of what came to be called the Dust Bowl.
Students will see the real hardship a climate disaster can cause and
how people got through it.
Essential Question:
How do we overcome Connection to Essential Question
obstacles? “The Dust Bowl” connects clearly and directly to the Essential Question,
How do we overcome obstacles? The obstacles that Dust Bowl farm
families had to overcome went beyond the huge storms of black dust to
dealing with the economic devastation that followed.
LESSON RESOURCES
Instructional RI.10 By the end of the year, read and comprehend literary L.6 Acquire and use accurately grade-appropriate general
Standards nonfiction . . . academic and domain-specific words and phrases . . .
STUDENT RESOURCES
Available online in the
Selection Audio
Interactive Student
Edition or Unit Resources First-Review Guide: Media: Video
Close-Review Guide: Media: Video
TEACHER RESOURCES
Selection Resources Audio Summaries Media Vocabulary
Available online in the
Interactive Teacher’s
Edition or Unit Resources
My Resources
A Unit 5 Answer Key is available online and in the Interactive Teacher’s Edition.
Qualitative Measures
Knowledge Demands Prior knowledge of the Dust Bowl era, the Depression, and labor migrations in America are required in
1 2 3 4 5 order to understand the film clip. Try to make clear the differences between the Great Depression and
the dust storms of the Dirty Thirties, which are two discrete events that happened to occur in the same
decade.
Structure The excerpt illuminates this period in American history with narration, images and film clips from the
1 2 3 4 5 time period, and interviews with those who experienced the Dust Bowl firsthand.
Language Conventionality and Clarity The interviews contain colloquialisms, accents, and lingo but are not on the whole difficult to grasp. The
1 2 3 4 5 narration is heavily informative.
review independently.
WA
WATCH who speaks, what they NOTE elements that you find
WATCH: Students should pay attention to say, and how they say it. interesting and want to revisit.
the causes and effects of the Dust Bowl and
consider how it affected the lives of the people in
the video.
NOTE: Students should note the time stamp of CONNECT ideas in the RESPOND by completing
sTaNDarDs
any facts they find interesting or important, or video to other media you’ve the Comprehension Check at
Reading Informational Text
moments they find especially powerful. experienced, texts you’ve read, the end.
By the end of the year, read and
comprehend literary nonfiction in images you’ve seen.
CONNECT: Encourage students to increase their the grades 6–8 text complexity band
understanding by connecting the video to other proficiently, with scaffolding as
needed at the high end of the range.
media or news reports they have seen or heard,
or other stories they’ve read.
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RESPOND: Students will answer questions to
demonstrate understanding. Point out to students
that while they will complete the Respond step
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Research
Research to Clarify If students struggle to
identify an unfamiliar detail, have them rewatch
the video and notice an idea or concept that
might be new to them, such as things related to 3. (a) When did the climate first start to change? (b) What effects did the
farming, farm equipment, or dust storms. change have?
RESEARCH
Research to Clarify Choose at least one unfamiliar detail from the video. Briefly
research that detail. In what way does the information you learned shed light on an
aspect of the story told in this video?
Challenge
Research Encourage students to research the settlement patterns in
the late-1800s Great Plains, briefly described at the beginning of the
film (0:45–1:40). Direct students to learn more about how ranchers
and farmers used the land in this period and how this background
information helps them understand the causes of the Dust Bowl of
the 1930s.
language development
Media Vocabulary
media vocabulary For more support, see Media Vocabulary.
Possible responses:
panoramic shot voiceover transition 1. The panoramic shot provides an introduction
to region.
Use the media vocabulary words in your responses to these 2. “The Dust Bowl” uses voiceover to provide
questions. background and historical information
1. How does the panoramic shot at the beginning of the video help you evIdenCe log while the viewer sees images on the screen.
understand what follows? Before moving on to a Fictional films and TV shows use voiceover.
new selection, go to your This technique was effective in these instances
Evidence Log and record because it helped me understand the stories.
what you’ve learned
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Media Vocabulary Reinforcement Students This film has a great panoramic shot; it shows a
will benefit from additional practice with the huge dust storm approaching a farm.
media vocabulary. Reinforce their comprehension Then, give students this sentence prompt, and
with “show-you-know” sentences. The first part coach them in creating the clarification part: FORMATIVE ASSESSMENT
of the sentence uses the vocabulary word in
context. The second part clarifies the first. Model The use of voiceover in this movie made the story Media Vocabulary
the strategy with this example for panoramic clear; _________. • If students struggle to answer the media
shot: Possible response: the narrator explained why vocabulary questions, then review relevant
the main character left his native country. parts of the video and discuss how these
techniques are used in the video.
Insight
This selection offers insight into how this terrible period of American
history affected the lives of ordinary people. The excerpt is about more
than the loss of a family’s possessions. It reveals how deep the pain of
an economic disaster can go.
Essential question:
How do we overcome Connection to Essential Question
obstacles? The excerpt from The Grapes of Wrath connects clearly and directly to
the Essential Question. The obstacles Dust Bowl farm families had to
overcome required huge sacrifices, which are symbolized by the loss of
tools, farm animals, and “roses red under glass.”
whole-class learning
Performance Task Connection to Performance Tasks
How did the individuals Whole-Class Learning Performance Task In this Performance Task,
in the selections cope with students will present an informative essay about how the characters
the obstacles they faced? in these selections coped with the obstacles they faced. This selection
presents students with evidence about what people do when their
Unit Performance-Based
Assessment
choices are extremely limited.
How can people Unit Performance-Based Assessment The tenant farmers Steinbeck
overcome adversity in describes in this excerpt from The Grapes of Wrath faced
the face of overwhelming insurmountable obstacles to keeping their land. The topsoil was
obstacles? depleted by unsustainable farming, and then it was swept away by
drought and high winds over the flat plains. After years of unprofitable
farming, in the midst of the Great Depression, banks foreclosed. The
landlords lost the farms, and the tenant farmers were thrown off. The
families had no savings, and there were no jobs. This selection gives
insight into what people do when they can do nothing else. They
move on.
LESSON RESOURCES
Instructional RL.10 By the end of the year, read L.4 Determine or clarify the meaning of RL.9 Compare and contrast a fictional
Standards and comprehend literature . . . unknown and multiple-meaning words portrayal . . .
and phrases . . .
RL.2 Determine a theme or central W.1 Write arguments . . .
idea of a text . . . L.4.b Use common, grade-appropriate
W.1.a Introduce claim(s) . . .
Greek or Latin affixes and roots . . .
RL.3 Analyze how particular
W.1.b Support claim(s) with logical
elements . . . L.6 Acquire and use accurately
reasoning and relevant evidence . . .
grade-appropriate general academic and
domain-specific words and phrases . . . W.1.c Use words, phrases, and
clauses . . .
W.9 Draw evidence from literary or
informational texts . . .
W.9.a Apply grade 7 Reading
standards . . .
STUDENT RESOURCES
Available online in the Selection Audio Word Network Evidence Log
Interactive Student
Edition or Unit Resources First-Read Guide: Fiction
Close-Read Guide: Fiction
TEACHER RESOURCES
Selection Resources
Audio Summaries oncept Vocabulary and
C Writing to Compare: Essay
Available online in the
Word Study
Interactive Teacher’s Annotation Highlights
Edition or Unit Resources Author’s Style: Description
EL Highlights
E nglish Language Support
Lesson: Theme
nalyze Craft and Structure: Setting
A
and Cultural Context
Reteach/Practice (RP)
nalyze Craft and Structure: Setting
A Word Study: Suffix –less (RP)
Available online in the
and Cultural Context (RP)
Interactive Teacher’s Author’s Style: Description (RP)
Edition or Unit Resources
Assessment
Selection Test
Available online in
Assessments
My Resources A Unit 5 Answer Key is available online and in the Interactive Teacher’s Edition.
Reading Support
Qualitative Measures
Knowledge Demands A good background on American labor, the Depression, and the Dust Bowl will help students
1 2 3 4 5 understand Steinbeck’s excerpt. Some discussion of Modernist-style writing may also be warranted.
Structure The structure is ostensibly simple, but the form it takes is intuitive and somewhat hard to follow for a
1 2 3 4 5 young reader. Rereading may be required.
Language Conventionality and Clarity Some difficult above-level vocabulary rendered in a modernist style. Complex sentence structures and
1 2 3 4 5 unique syntax.
Levels of Meaning/Purpose The excerpt touches on sorrow and loss, the extent to which migrant laborers in the Dust Bowl
1 2 3 4 5 were participants in their own debasement, and how the demands of the economy stripped whole
generations and families of their humanity.
TEACH
from
The Grapes of Wrath
John Steinbeck
BACKGROUND
During the Great Depression, a severe drought in Oklahoma caused SCAN FOR
MULTIMEDIA
massive dust storms that blew away topsoil and destroyed farmland.
Devastated farming families had no choice but to sell all their
belongings and leave. This is the situation faced by the Joad family
in John Steinbeck’s novel The Grapes of Wrath. In this excerpt, the
narrator describes the aftermath of the devastating drought.
I n the little houses the tenant people sifted their belongings and
the belongings of their fathers and of their grandfathers. Picked
over their possessions for the journey to the west. The men were
NOTES
ruthless because the past had been spoiled, but the women knew ruthless (ROOTH lihs) adj.
how the past would cry to them in the coming days. The men having no compassion
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or pity
went into the barns and the sheds.
2 That plow, that harrow, remember in the war we planted
mustard? Remember a fella wanted us to put in that rubber bush
they call guayule?1 Get rich, he said. Bring out those tools—get
a few dollars for them. Eighteen dollars for that plow, plus
freight—Sears Roebuck.2
1. guayule (gwy YOO lee) a desert shrub containing rubber, native to Mexico and Texas.
During the Great Depression, it was thought that guayule could be profitably processed
for rubber.
2. Sears Roebuck company that sold clothes, farm equipment, and other goods by mail
order, which supplied much of rural America.
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Social Studies
Farming Review paragraphs 2 and 3 and as well as an image for each. Remind students
call student attention to the farm equipment that this story takes place in the 1930s, so their
described. Have students research and write images should reflect what this equipment
a short report about one of the farming looked like at that time. Have volunteers share
tools or pieces of equipment mentioned in their research with the class, and discuss how the
paragraphs 2–3: plow, harrow, harness, carts, information and images help students understand
seeders, hoes. They should include information the story.
about what the tool is and what it is used for,
3. halters, collars, hames, and tugs parts of the harnesses used to attach horses to
horse‑drawn plows.
4. bay gelding reddish‑brown male horse.
5. hams back of a horse’s knee.
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Strategic Support
Author’s Style Discuss the writing technique the story by revealing both sides of the
Steinbeck uses to tell the story in paragraphs 4–7. conversation but chose to do it this way. A
We experience the men selling their possessions likely reason is that it’s more dramatic this way.
through the speech of one unnamed character as We learn the thoughts and feelings of the man
he argues with the junk dealer. Steinbeck doesn’t selling his possessions as they spill out in one
include the junk dealer’s side of this conversation, long nonstop rush, which makes this entire
though we know he is talking to the man because episode much more emotional.
the man is responding to what the dealer is saying.
Steinbeck could have chosen to tell this part of
about fills us. Right up the sides of the trailer, and the kids can set
in the trailer, and granma on a mattress. Tools, a shovel and saw
and wrench and pliers. An ax, too. We had that ax forty years.
Look how she’s wore down. And ropes, of course. The rest? Leave
it—or burn it up.
14 And the children came.
15 If Mary takes that doll, that dirty rag doll, I got to take my
Indian bow. I got to. An’ this roun’ stick—big as me. I might need
this stick. I had this stick so long—a month, or maybe a year. I got
to take it. And what’s it like in California?
16 The women sat among the doomed things, turning them over doomed (doomd) adj.
and looking past them and back. This book. My father had it. He destined to a bad outcome
Repetition Use paragraph 10 to discuss the a rhythm that emphasizes how long and how
value of well-crafted repetition. Point out that often these people faced these difficulties.
Steinbeck could have written the text this way: Show students the following two sentences:
“the flood, dust, and drought years.” But he Caleb wished until he had no more wishes left.
repeats not only years, but also and and the, Caleb wished and wished and wished until he
giving the reader a sense of the ongoing trials had no more wishes left. Which is a stronger
and challenges these people faced, and creating sentence? Why?
“Chapter 9,” from The Grapes of Wrath by John Steinbeck, copyright 1939, renewed © 1967 by John Steinbeck. Used by
permission of Viking Books, an imprint of Penguin Publishing Group, a division of Penguin Random House LLC.
Vocabulary Development
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Multiple Meanings Call students’ attention years of service, Smith held the rank of general.);
to the word rank in paragraph 16. Explain to “line of soldiers ranged side by side in close
students that the word has several meanings. order” (The soldiers stood at attention in the
As used in the text, it’s an adjective that means ranks.); “the body of enlisted personnel” (Jane
“offensive in odor or flavor.” (That rotten food rose quickly through the ranks.). As a verb it can
has a rank smell.) Explain to students that they mean “to determine the relative position of; to
will probably more often encounter this word rate” (Ken ranked his favorite books from one
as a noun or a verb. As a noun it can mean “a to ten.); “to take or have a position in relation to
grade of official standing in a hierarchy.” (After others” (Melinda ranks first in her class.).
Research
3. What happens after the people burn their belongings? Research to Clarify If students struggle to
identify an unfamiliar detail, have them reread
the text and notice words or details that might be
new to them, such as farm equipment or words
in dialect.
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4. Notebook Write a brief summary of this excerpt from The Grapes of Wrath.
RESEARCH
Research to Clarify Choose at least one unfamiliar detail from the text. Briefly research
that detail. In what way does the information you learned shed light on an aspect of
the story?
Challenge
Interpret Ask students to consider a particularly no, you can’t. The willow tree is you. The
moving passage or two from the story—for pain on that mattress there—that dreadful pain—
example, this passage from paragraph 18: that’s you.
How’ll it be not to know what land’s outside Have students rewrite the passage(s), expressing
the door? How if you wake up in the night and the ideas in their own words. Ask volunteers to
know—and know the willow tree’s not there? share their rewrites with the class.
Can you live without the willow tree? Well,
FORMATIVE ASSESSMENT
Analyze the Text
• If students fail to cite evidence, then remind
them to support their ideas with specific
information from the text.
• If students fail to grasp key ideas in the text,
then have them review the relevant sections of
the excerpt.
CHARACTERS’ ACTIONS
them to discard valuable farm tools and family
heirlooms that hold sentimental value. All that
How do men and women in the excerpt matters is their ability to survive, and there seems
respond differently to their situation? c. to be no room for sentiment in their lives.
3. Answers will vary. Students should address the
2. Repeated words and ideas can highlight key themes. What theme about human themes of the story and not just the specific
nature is suggested by the narrator’s repetition of the noun bitterness? conditions of the time as modern-day conditions
might create a different outcome.
3. Would the themes suggested by this passage of The Grapes of Wrath be much
different if the story were adapted and set in modern-day Oklahoma? Why or
why not?
AUTHOR'S PERSPECTIVE
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Digital Tools As students develop and expand • Lexipedia, for example, is a visual thesaurus.
their word networks, remind them of the digital Users type in any word and Lexipedia
tools available and of their value. Explain what displays that word with others in the word
FORMATIVE ASSESSMENT digital tools offer—pronunciation; audio; word network, color-coded by parts of speech and
Word Study families; definitions; links to synonyms and relationships. Hover over the word for a full
If students have trouble finding appropriate antonyms; interactive levels of complexity of definition.
synonyms and antonyms; words in context • Snappy Words is similar, providing words
words, then review using a dictionary to
sentences, and so much more. Experiment with arranged in networks.
find different word forms. For Reteach and
these digital tools:
Practice, see Word Study: Suffix -less (RP).
horses
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2. Evaluate (a) Which words from the graphic organizer enable you to imagine
the horses most clearly? Explain your choices. (b) To which senses do the words
you chose appeal?
FORMATIVE ASSESSMENT
Author’s Style
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review easily-accessible descriptions in the
• Lingro turns a website into a clickable dictionary,
text and discuss why each is an effective
providing a variety of definitions. For example,
clicking on the word “writing” on the website
description.
provides six different definitions. • If students have trouble understanding or
• Shahi, another visual dictionary, melds Wiktionary interpreting imagery, then review images in
content with Flickr images and more. the text and discuss the picture each creates for
the reader.
For Reteach and Practice, see Author’s Style:
Description (RP).
Possible responses in chart on student page: Write an argumentative essay in which you state and support an
argument about the role of farmers in the Dust Bowl. Use details from
a. Some farmers misused the land and Steinbeck’s novel and the documentary video as evidence to support
contributed to the erosion of the soil. A long your claim. Strengthen your support by addressing one counterclaim.
drought made the situation much worse for
farmers.
b. Tenant farmers could not find work in the Dust Prewriting
Bowl region. Many sold their possessions and
Analyze Perspectives Review both sources to understand how the
headed west to California. video and the novel present different perspectives on farmers during the
c. The images of barren farmland and dead Dust Bowl. Complete the chart to summarize how each source depicts
livestock make a powerful impression. the role of farmers. Then, include details from each source that produce a
d. The information about farmers selling their strong impression or impact.
most cherished possessions for little money is
dismaying. HISTORICAL VIDEO: LITERARY TEXT: from
“THE DUST BOWL” THE GRAPES OF WRATH
Possible responses to Notebook questions:
Role of Farmers in a. See answers in b.
1. The video focuses on wheat farmers, claiming the Dust Bowl Teacher’s Edition.
they were only interested in monetary gain and
did not take good care of the land; background
STANDARDS
music heightens the effect. The literary text
Reading Literature
focuses on tenant farmers’ attitudes toward their
Challenge
Spoken Language Have students rewatch the video “The Dust
Bowl” and focus on the personal stories told by people who lived
through the Dust Bowl. Ask students to write a paragraph discussing
how the everyday speech of the people in the video compares
with how characters speak in The Grapes of Wrath. How are they
different? How are they similar?
Drafting
Drafting
Outline Your Essay Complete the outline to plan and draft your
Outline Your Essay Remind students that as
argumentative essay. Adjust the outline as needed.
they compare the video and the text, they should
I. Introduction Begin with a strong opening that clearly states the claim keep in mind that one is nonfiction and the other
you are making about how much responsibility farmers should bear for is fiction; they should address any impact this has
the Dust Bowl. on their comparison between the two.
Opening Claim: Regardless of which organizational structure
students choose, encourage them to use
transitional words to link the ideas that appear in
the body of their essay.
II. Body
A. Provide Evidence from Sources Choose evidence from the Reviewing, Revising, and Editing
sources that supports your argument. Consider whether you will Remind students to check that they’ve included
begin with your strongest evidence, or present your strongest specific details from both the video and the
evidence last. text to support their claims. Ask them to review
Evidence: their word choice. Finally, remind students to
EVIDENCE LOG
check for grammar, usage, and mechanics.
Evidence: Before moving on to a
new selection, go to your
For more support, see Writing to Compare:
Evidence Log and record Argumentative Essay.
Evidence:
what you’ve learned Evidence Log Support students in completing
from this excerpt from
their Evidence Log. This paced activity will
B. Address a Counterclaim Introduce the counterclaim, or opposite The Grapes of Wrath.
help prepare them for the Performance-Based
position, presented in the video or novel. Then, explain why you
think this argument is weak or incomplete.
Assessment at the end of the unit.
Counterclaim:
Writing
Write arguments to support claims
with clear reasons and relevant
Reviewing, Revising, and Editing evidence.
Formative Assessment
a. Support claim(s) with
Once you have written a complete draft, revise it for clarity and
effectiveness. Is your claim clear and strong? Do you provide enough
logical reasoning and relevant Writing to Compare
evidence, using accurate, credible
evidence to support your argument? Do you describe the counterclaim sources and demonstrating an If students are unable to provide specific
understanding of the topic or text. examples and details, then have them skim the
fairly and explain why you think your claim is stronger? c. Use words, phrases, and clauses
to create cohesion and clarify excerpt from The Grapes of Wrath and rewatch
Swap drafts with a partner to review and proofread one another’s work. the relationships among claim(s), “The Dust Bowl” for ideas.
Make changes and correct errors to prepare a final draft. reasons, and evidence.
• Draw evidence from literary or
informational texts to support Selection Test
analysis, reflection, and research.
a. Apply grade 7 Reading standards Administer the “from The Grapes of Wrath
to literature. (with The Dust Bowl)” Selection Test, which is
available in both print and digital formats online
The Dust Bowl • from The Grapes of Wrath 467 in Assessments.
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Strategic Support
Organization Review point-by-point comparison management as it relates to the text, pointing
as an organizational structure for this kind of out similarities and differences between the two.
essay. Explain that with this kind of structure, After discussing land management, the writer
writers focus on one idea at a time and discuss would move on to the next idea, which might be
how it relates to the things being compared. For weather. Remind students that when using this
example, if the first idea is land management, kind of structure they should still end their essay
the writer would discuss land management as it with a concluding paragraph.
relates to the video and then discuss land
The Circuit
Audio Summaries
Audio summaries of “The
Summary
Circuit” are available online in “The Circuit” is one of author Francisco Jiménez’s best-known
both English and Spanish in the stories. The narrator, a young Latino boy, comes back from a day of
Interactive Teacher’s Edition or picking strawberries to find all the family’s belongings packed. With
Unit Resources. Assigning these strawberry picking season over, the family has to move on. In the
summaries prior to reading the next place, he and his brother pick grapes with their father and hide
selection may help students from school authorities. But after the grape season, the narrator
build additional background
finally gets to join other students in the sixth grade, where he has a
knowledge and set a context for
great teacher. Things are looking up.
their first read.
Insight
This selection reveals what life can be like when supporting a family
means that even children have to work. Although the narrator must
move again just as the teacher, Mr. Lema, begins to show him real
opportunities, the story helps students understand what a difference
one adult can make in a child’s life.
Essential Question:
How do we overcome Connection to Essential Question
obstacles? “The Circuit” connects to the Essential Question by showing that one of
the ways we may be able to overcome obstacles is through the help of
someone else.
Whole-Class Learning
Performance Task Connection to Performance Tasks
How did the individuals Whole-Class Learning Performance Task In this Performance Task,
in the selections cope students will write an informative essay about coping with obstacles.
with the obstacles they This selection shows a boy turning to a supportive adult for help in
faced? coping with the obstacles he faces.
Unit Performance-Based Unit Performance-Based Assessment For the narrator of “The Circuit,”
Assessment one of the biggest obstacles he faces is the difficulty of getting an
How can people overcome education. Students should consider that his family is constantly moving
adversity in the face from one crop to another to find work, leaving him unable to stay in
of overwhelming the same school for any length of time. And much of the year he has to
obstacles? work in the fields. In this situation, what does Mr. Lema offer him that
would help him overcome adversity?
Lesson Resources
Instructional RL.10 By the end of the year, read and L.4 Determine or clarify the meaning of RL.2 Determine a theme or central idea . . .
Standards comprehend literature . . . unknown and multiple-meaning words
W.2 Write informative/explanatory texts . . .
and phrases . . .
RL.1 Cite several pieces of textual
W.2.b Develop the topic . . .
evidence . . . L.4.a Use context as a clue . . .
W.9 Draw evidence from literary or
RL.2 Determine a theme or central idea L.4.b Use common, grade-appropriate
informational texts . . .
of a text . . . Greek or Latin affixes and roots . . .
W.9.a Apply grade 7 Reading standards . . .
L.2 Demonstrate command of the
conventions . . . SL.1 Engage effectively . . .
L.2.a Use a comma . . . SL.1.a Come to discussions prepared . . .
SL.1.c Pose questions . . .
SL.4 Present claims and findings . . .
W.7 Conduct short research projects . . .
STUDENT RESOURCES
Available online in the
Selection Audio Word Network Evidence Log
Interactive Student
Edition or Unit Resources First-Read Guide: Fiction
Close-Read Guide: Fiction
TEACHER RESOURCES
Selection Resources
Audio Summaries oncept Vocabulary and
C Writing to Sources: Explanation
Available online in the
Word Study
Interactive Teacher’s Annotation Highlights
English Language Support Lesson:
Edition or Unit Resources Word Study: Old English Suffix -ly Writing Informative Essays
EL Highlights
Conventions: Commas S peaking and Listening:
Analyze Craft and Structure: Theme
Role-Play Interview
Reteach/Practice (RP)
nalyze Craft and Structure:
A ord Study: Old English
W Writing to Sources: Explanation (RP)
Available online in the
Theme (RP) Suffix -ly (RP)
Interactive Teacher’s S peaking and Listening: Role-Play
Edition or Unit Resources Conventions: Commas (RP) Interview (RP)
Assessment
Selection Test
Available online in
Assessments
My Resources
A Unit 5 Answer Key is available online and in the Interactive Teacher’s Edition.
Reading Support
Qualitative Measures
Knowledge Demands A brief background on Mexico and migrant farm labor will be useful.
1 2 3 4 5
Structure The structure is somewhat sophisticated, with an emotionally stunning ending that may surprise
1 2 3 4 5 some students.
Language Conventionality and Clarity Although the writing is conventional, it contains many regionalisms and Spanish words.
1 2 3 4 5
Levels of Meaning/Purpose The story does not conclude happily and touches on issues of labor, family, Latin culture, migration, and
1 2 3 4 5 youth.
TEACH
Speaking You may wish to administer SL.1.c Pose questions that Challenge students to improvise
and the Speaking and Listening: elicit elaboration and respond portions of their role plays; i.e.,
Listening Role-Play Interview (RP) to others’ questions and allow the class to ask questions.
worksheet to help students comments with relevant
prepare for their role playing. observations and ideas that
bring the discussion back on
topic as needed.
TEACH
Implement the planned lesson, Language You may wish to administer the L.2 Demonstrate command of Introduce students to dashes
and gather evidence of student Conventions: Commas (RP) the conventions of standard and ellipses.
learning. worksheet to help students English capitalization,
Have students practice adding
understand how commas signal punctuation, and spelling when
-ly to the end of words.
a brief pause in a sentence. writing.
You may wish to administer L.4.b Use common, grade-
the Word Study: Old English appropriate Greek or Latin
Suffix -ly (RP) worksheet to affixes and roots as clues to the
help students understand how meaning of a word.
-ly changes words into adverbs.
news reports.
468 UNIT 5 • FACING ADVERSITY
RESPOND: Students will answer questions and
write a summary to demonstrate understanding.
Point out to students that while they will always
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Closer look
2
Mexico, but indirectly establishes that people
of braceros. Sunday, only one—the best picker—came to work.
disappear from his life. This may happen often
I liked him. Sometimes we talked during our half-hour lunch
because we know that, as migrant workers,
break. That is how I found out he was from Jalisco, the same state
the narrator’s family moves frequently. All
in Mexico my family was from. That Sunday was the last time I
this movement—and the loss of potential
saw him.
friendships—is part of the author’s
3 When the sun had tired and sunk behind the mountains, Ito
cultural context.
signaled us that it was time to go home. “Ya esora,”3 he yelled in
his broken Spanish. Those were the words I waited for twelve
hours a day, every day, seven days a week, week after week. And
the thought of not hearing them again saddened me.
Additional English Language Support
1. sharecropper (SHAIR krop uhr) n. one who works for a share of a crop; tenant farmer.
2. braceros (bruh SAIR ohs) n. migrant Mexican farm laborers who harvest crops.
is available in the Interactive Teacher’s
3. Ya esora (yah ehs AW rah) Spanish for “It’s time.” (Ya es hora.) Edition.
Strategic Support
Author’s Style Discuss the point of view from from them because they don’t tell the narrator.
which Jiménez tells the story (first-person point Remind students that in The Grapes of Wrath,
of view of the narrator). This means readers will John Steinbeck alternated between the
know only what the narrator knows. For example, third person (when the narrator told the story)
in paragraph 4 we get a sense of how Papá and the first person (when an individual character
and Roberto feel because of what the narrator was telling the story). Encourage students to
observes, but we don’t learn their feelings directly consider how the point of view affects a story.
it on the far corner of the garage. “Mamá, you and the little ones of migrant workers from
this passage?
sleep on the mattress. Roberto, Panchito, and I will sleep outside
under the trees,” Papá said.
17 Early next morning Mr. Sullivan showed us where his crop was,
and after breakfast, Papá, Roberto, and I headed for the vineyard
to pick.
18 Around nine o’clock the temperature had risen to almost one
hundred degrees. I was completely soaked in sweat and my
mouth felt as if I had been chewing on a handkerchief. I walked
over to the end of the row, picked up the jug of water we had
10. Tienen que tener cuidado (tee EHN ehn kay tehn EHR kwee THAH thoh) Spanish for
“You have to be careful.”
11. Vámonos (VAH moh nohs) Spanish for “Let’s go.”
12. Quince (KEEN say) Spanish for “Fifteen.”
13. “carne con chile” (KAHR nay kuhn CHIHL ay) dish of ground meat, hot peppers, beans,
and tomatoes.
join Papá and Roberto at breakfast. I sat at the table across from
Roberto, but I kept my head down. I did not want to look up and
face him. I knew he was sad. He was not going to school today. He
was not going tomorrow, or next week, or next month. He would
not go until the cotton season was over, and that was sometime in
February. I rubbed my hands together and watched the dry, acid
stained skin fall to the floor in little rolls.
24 When Papá and Roberto left for work, I felt relief. I walked
to the top of a small grade next to the shack
and watched the Carcanchita disappear in the
distance in a cloud of dust. Two hours later, “F inally, after struggling
around eight o’clock, I stood by the side of the
road waiting for school bus number twenty. for English words, I
When it arrived I climbed in. Everyone was
busy either talking or yelling. I sat in an empty
managed to tell her that
seat in the back. I wanted to enroll in the
25 When the bus stopped in front of the
school, I felt very nervous. I looked out the sixth grade.”
bus window and saw boys and girls carrying
books under their arms. I put my hands in my
pant pockets and walked to the principal’s office. When I entered
I heard a woman’s voice say: “May I help you?” I was startled. I
had not heard English for months. For a few seconds I remained
speechless. I looked at the lady who waited for an answer. My
first instinct was to answer her in Spanish, but I held back.
Finally, after struggling for English words, I managed to tell her
that I wanted to enroll in the sixth grade. After answering many
questions, I was led to the classroom.
26 Mr. Lema, the sixth grade teacher, greeted me and assigned me
a desk. He then introduced me to the class. I was so nervous and
scared at that moment when everyone’s eyes were on me that I
wished I were with Papá and Roberto picking cotton. After taking
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roll, Mr. Lema gave the class the assignment for the first hour.
“The first thing we have to do this morning is finish reading the
story we began yesterday,” he said enthusiastically. He walked enthusiastically (ehn thoo
up to me, handed me an English book, and asked me to read. “We zee AS tihk lee) adv. with
eager interest
are on page 125,” he said politely. When I heard this, I felt my
blood rush to my head; I felt dizzy. “Would you like to read?” he
hesitantly (HEHZ uh tuhnt
asked hesitantly. I opened the book to page 125. My mouth was lee) adv. in an unsure or
dry. My eyes began to water. I could not begin. “You can read cautious way
later,” Mr. Lema said understandingly.
understandingly (uhn duhr
27 For the rest of the reading period I kept getting angrier and STAN dihng lee) adv. in a
angrier at myself. I should have read, I thought to myself. knowing way; kindly
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Enriching the Text To help students understand and how it helps them understand the text.
and appreciate what the narrator’s life is like, Also discuss how the video adds to their
use the search term “U.S. migrant workers” to understanding of the reports on migrant workers
find video footage online showing the world of they wrote and listened to earlier. Then, have
migrant workers in the United States. (Note: Be students write a paragraph about how the video
sure to preview any video before showing it and “The Circuit” are connected. (Research to
to students.) Have students discuss the video Clarify)
RESEARCH
Research to Clarify Choose at least one unfamiliar detail from the text.
Briefly research that detail. In what way does the information you learned shed light
on an aspect of the story?
Challenge
Extend Ask students to consider what will happen next to the
narrator of “The Circuit.” Have them write one or two paragraphs
from the narrator’s point of view, briefly describing what happens
to him in the next place his family moves to. Ask volunteers to share
their responses with the class.
family is continually how much they earn. routines are described discusses many cycles:
uprooted for work. Pachito can’t go to many times. Pachito days, weeks, seasons, FORMATIVE ASSESSMENT
school regularly. often nearly cries. harvests, moving.
Analyze Craft and Structure
Theme(s) A boy’s desires to maintain his pride and to belong in society are challenged by
• If students have difficulty understanding
his family’s need to move repeatedly as they seek seasonal farm work. theme, then relate one or two simple stories
(like “The Three Little Pigs” or “The Tortoise
2. (a) Why do you think Francisco Jiménez titled this story “The Circuit”? (b) What and the Hare”) and discuss the message in
clues to theme might the title reveal? each story.
• If students have difficulty identifying theme
3. If you were to adapt this story and provide a stated theme, what would be the in the text, then review theme-related parts
theme, how would it be revealed, and by whom? of the text and discuss what message the
author is trying to communicate in that part of
the story.
For Reteach and Practice, see Analyze Craft and
The Circuit 477 Structure: Theme (RP).
Strategic Support
Theme Help students further understand identifying themes of
magazine articles or TV shows. (They might also identify the theme
of the Launch Text, “Against the Odds.”) Ask students to explain
how they determined the themes. Is the theme directly or indirectly
stated in the article or show? What parts of the article or show help
them understand the theme? Can a text or show have more than
one theme? Why or why not?
5. Someone asking a question hesitantly might 6. What might someone do when listening to a friend understandingly?
speak quietly and sound unsure.
6. Someone listening to a friend understandingly Word Study
might smile and nod often.
Old English Suffix: -ly When added to the ends of adjectives, the Old
English suffix -ly creates an adverb that describes how something was
Word Network
Conventions Conventions
Commas Commas are essential tools for writers. Commas (,) signal a
Commas Tell students that a good way to figure
brief pause; they enable readers to absorb information in meaningful,
accurate chunks.
out where to place commas is to read sentences
aloud. Where you naturally pause while reading,
Use the chart to review the functions of commas. place a comma. Point out that the pause may be
short or subtle. Remind students that commas
Using Commas ExamplE
should never be used in place of a period. See
Use a comma before a conjunction that joins Julia started laughing, and she could not stop. possible responses in the chart on the student
independent clauses—groups of words that can
page. For more support, see Conventions:
stand on their own in sentences.
Commas.
Use a comma after an introductory word, phrase, If it rains, will you still be able to start the project? Make it Interactive
or clause. Have students write sentences with commas and
then read them aloud. Can other students tell
Use commas to separate three or more words, The salad consisted of lettuce, carrots, cucumber, and olives.
where to place the comma?
phrases, or clauses in a series.
Writing to SourceS
Write an Informative Essay
Jump Start
• thE Dust BoWl
You have just read and watched selections that relate to how people
• from thE GrapEs of deal with obstacles. “The Dust Bowl” shows the devastating effects of
Ask students to write one or two additional Wrath a drought. The excerpt from The Grapes of Wrath depicts farmers who
things they have learned about facing adversity lost their land and had to leave their homes. “The Circuit” portrays farm
• thE CIrCuIt
in life as a result of seeing “The Dust Bowl” and workers who don’t have permanent homes.
reading “from The Grapes of Wrath and “The
Circuit.” You might guide them with questions Assignment
such as, “What were some of the most difficult Write an informative essay in which you answer this question:
obstacles the characters faced?” “What do How did the individuals in the selections cope with
you think might help people to overcome the obstacles they faced?
obstacles and endure hardships?” “What good Describe the hardships faced by the people or characters in the
might come from having to face adversity?” selections, and inform the reader about how they dealt with those
As students share, ask them to cite specific obstacles. Use details from the selections to support your ideas.
examples from the selections to support their
ideas.
Elements of a Informative Essay
AcADeMic
VocABuLArY A informative essay presents information about a topic. Ideas are
Write an Informative Essay As you craft your essay,
supported with precise, factual details.
Make sure students understand what they are consider using some of An effective informative essay contains these elements:
being asked to do in the assignment. Explain the academic vocabulary
• an introduction in which the topic and thesis are revealed
that they are being asked to write an informative you learned in the
beginning of the unit. • supporting factual details that support the writer’s ideas
essay that describes how the characters in the
deviate • clear, consistent organization
selections coped with the obstacles they faced.
persevere • a conclusion in which the writer’s thesis is restated and additional
Students should complete the assignment determination
using word processing software to take insights are provided
diversity
advantage of editing tools and features. tradition • a formal, objective tone
Elements of an Informative Essay Tool Kit Model Informative Essay For a model of an LAUNCH TEXT
Student Model of an informative essay, see the Launch text, 5
UNIT INTRODUCTION
Remind students that informative essays contain LAUNCH TEXT | INFORMATIVE MODEL
Informative Essay
informative text, a type of writing
Against the
“Against the Odds.”
in which the author provides
information about a topic. This
Odds
vivid details and sensory images that engage
is the type of writing you will
develop in the Performance-Based
Assessment at the end of the unit.
As you read, notice that the
author presents facts without
offering opinions or arguments.
2
“I f you have to ditch a commercial aircraft in the Hudson
River,” the news anchor joked, “this is the guy you want.”
The “guy” was US Airways pilot Chesley “Sully”
Sullenberger III, a 57-year-old former Air Force fighter pilot and a
29-year veteran of US Airways.
descriptive words.
North Carolina.
4 Flight 1549 left the tarmac at 3:25 P.M. Sullenberger thought he
was in for an average flight—a routine, everyday trip.
5 The flight was unremarkable for the first 90 seconds. Then
something caught the eye of copilot Jeff Skiles. At 3,000 feet, he
Make It Interactive
horrible smell and then an eerie quiet: both engines were disabled.
7 Sullenberger made a Mayday radio call to air traffic control
and calmly explained the situation. They discussed the options:
The plane could either return to LaGuardia or land at Teterboro
Airport in New Jersey.
8 Sullenberger knew the situation was too dire for the plane to
stay in the air long enough for either plan to be successful. He had
about 30 seconds to find an alternative. The pilot decided on a
Author's Perspective
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Read, Analyze, Emulate Teachers can use voice, and organization. Encourage students to
scaffolding to help students grow as writers by look for the moves the writer made to elicit a
studying good writing with them. When students response in readers.
recognize the qualities of good writing, they Step 2: Analyze Focus on the ideas by asking
begin producing it. students questions such as “What is the writer’s
Step 1: Read Provide students with excellent theme? How did the writer develop it?” Then
narratives from the text and direct them to “read turn to style and voice, asking, “How did the
like a writer” by paying attention to ideas, style, writer develop the characters?” “What effect did
• State one key idea clearly and directly. Review your Evidence Log
and identify key details you
• Use precise, formal language. may want to include in
• Avoid overgeneralizations and vague or unnecessary words. your essay.
Notice how one of the following statements would be a much stronger STANDARDS
stronger thesis statement for an informative essay. Writing
• Write informative/explanatory texts
Overgeneralization and informal language: Everybody’s afraid to examine a topic and convey ideas,
of something, and that’s just how it is no matter who you are. concepts, and information through
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STANDARDS
Writing
Write informative/explanatory texts
to examine a topic and convey ideas,
Drafting
concepts, and information through Write a First Draft As you draft, focus on writing down your ideas
Working in Pairs There is an important sense entails social interaction, which fosters language that highlights what they found important,
in which the development of academic expertise development. or responds to a prompt teachers provide.
on the part of English learners is a process of • First, teachers can partner students to read, Encourage students to include specific details
socialization rather than simply instruction. As discuss, and react to a reading in the unit. Select from the text in their drafts.
a result, English writing development will be a text, such as a nonfiction article, poem, or • Then, teachers can invite partners to share their
enhanced when students can work in pairs to narrative. writing with the whole class. Guide students to
create texts to share with others. That’s because explain how working together helped them express
the process of collaboration and communication • Have partners discuss the text, make notes
about their ideas, and together write a response their ideas more effectively than working alone.
As you draft your essay, remember to use commas properly. Copy the faulty
the cabin twice, calling “Is anyone there? Come
sentences and re-punctuate them, either adding or removing commas.
forward!” (Sullenberger and Skiles)
FAULTY SENTENCE MY REVISION
We inched across the rickety, We inched across the rickety, Write It
swaying, bridge. swaying bridge. Review the chart on this page, pointing out the
Studying together, Glenda, and Studying together, Glenda and specific use of commas to revise the sentences.
Jasmine, helped each other earn Jasmine helped each other STANDARDS
better grades. Language
earn better grades. • Demonstrate command of the
At summer camp we learned archery, At summer camp, we learned conventions of standard English
and knots. archery and knots. capitalization, punctuation, and
spelling when writing.
The actor bowed, and smiled. The actor bowed and smiled. a. Use a comma to separate
coordinate adjectives.
Revising Revising
Evaluating Your Draft
Evaluating Your Draft Use the checklist to evaluate the effectiveness of your draft. Then, use
Remind students to use the chart to evaluate their your evaluation and instruction on this page to guide your revision.
draft to make sure it contains all the required
elements of a well-constructed, well-organized, Focus and organization EvidEncE and Elaboration convEntions
informative essay, and to be sure it addresses
both parts of the assignment. Provides an introduction that Clearly shows relationships Uses words, phrases,
reveals the topic and thesis. among ideas. and clauses that create
Revising for Focus and Organization cohesion and clarify
Is organized clearly and logically. Supports ideas with the relationships
Provide a Clear Conclusion Encourage relevant evidence and among ideas.
students to use highlighting to track the details Provides a concluding statement details from the selections.
and evidence from the selections they are using that brings the essay to a Attends to the norms
in their essays. When they’re finished, they can satisfying close. Maintains a formal tone. and conventions of the
review and make sure each paragraph utilizes discipline, especially
details and evidence and that the details are from correct use of commas.
all three selections.
Revising for Evidence and Elaboration Revising for Focus and Organization
Support Ideas With Relevant Evidence Advise Provide a Clear Conclusion Review the conclusion you have drafted,
WORD NETWORK
students that in the revision stage, they may and check to be sure that it follows logically from your thesis and body
Include interesting words
need to make difficult decisions about deleting paragraphs. Strive to keep your conclusion brief but engaging. You might
from your Word Network in
examples and evidence. Some evidence that was your essay.
consider ending your conclusion with a question or with a powerful
present in the essay’s original outline may now quotation from a text you read.
be superfluous, and some of a writer’s “favorite”
Revising for Evidence and Elaboration
examples may lead to tangents.
Support Ideas With Relevant Evidence Evaluate with a critical eye the
Maintain a Formal Tone Remind students details you have used to support ideas. First mark the ideas or claims you
that maintaining a formal tone is essential to an standards
Writing
make. Then, mark support you have given. Add details as needed, and
effective essay. Ask them to pay attention to the • Write informative/explanatory texts delete unneeded or irrelevant information.
words they are using and to avoid any language to examine a topic and convey ideas,
Maintain a Formal Tone A writer’s tone is his or her attitude toward
concepts, and information through
that would be used for informal communication. the selection, organization, and the audience or subject. Apply the following steps to revise for a formal
analysis of relevant content. tone in your essay:
Incorrect Use of Commas Review the rules for 2. Do not separate parts of a compound subject Revision: In the distance we could see whales
revising sentences for incorrect use of commas: or object. and dolphins.
1. Separate coordinate adjectives but do not Incorrect: Lenore, and Ellie are teaching 3. Do not separate the parts of a compound verb.
separate the adjectives from the noun. me archery. Incorrect: The waves pounded, and crashed
Incorrect: The large red, balloon floated across Revision: Lenore and Ellie are teaching against the cliffs.
the sky. me archery. Revision: The waves pounded and crashed
Revision: The large, red balloon floated across Incorrect: In the distance we could see whales, against the cliffs.
the sky. and dolphins.
Peer review
Peer Review
Exchange essays with a classmate. Use the checklist to evaluate your classmate’s essay and Before students begin their peer review,
provide supportive feedback. remind them that they are reviewing for clarity
1. Is there an effective introduction? and completeness, not whether they agree
yes no If no, suggest a better way the writer could introduce the topic. or disagree with the writer’s ideas. They should
not comment on whether their classmate is
2. Are the writer’s ideas supported by details and support from the selections? “right” or “wrong.” They can, however, make
yes no If no, point out where the writer should provide support. helpful suggestions if they see something in the
3. Are there clear connections among ideas?
essay that could be better.
yes no If no, point out where the writer should use transitions to make
these connections clearer.
Editing and Proofreading
As students proofread, they should check for
4. What is the strongest part of your classmate’s essay? grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors.
Remind them to check that all causes lead to
logical, relevant effects, all effects are linked to
logical, relevant causes, and all three selections
are discussed. Also remind students to check for
the correct use of commas.
Challenge
Extend Remind students that dealing with adversity and obstacles
can either defeat people or make them stronger, depending on the
situation and how people deal with the challenges they’re facing.
Have students write two paragraphs, one describing someone who is
defeated by adversity, and one describing someone who overcomes
obstacles and is made stronger because of the experience. Ask
volunteers to share their responses with the class.
Look at these strategies and the actions you can take to practice them as you
Small-Group Learning work in teams. Add ideas of your own for each step. Use these strategies during
Strategies Small-Group Learning.
Block Scheduling •
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Pacing Plan
Introduce
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Performance Task
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NEWS ARTICLE
Sarah Childress
PERFORMANCE TASK
SPEAKING AND LISTENING FOCUS
Present Multimedia Profiles
The Small-Group readings demonstrate how people can overcome tremendous
adversity. After reading, your group will plan and deliver a multimedia presentation
about people who faced huge obstacles, but overcame them in creative ways.
Introduce Introduce
Small-Group Independent
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Learning Learning
Task
Performance-Based
Assessment
Media: How A Young Tinkerer
from The Story Helen Keller Builds a Windmill, Independent
A Work in Progress of My Life Learned to Talk Electrifying a Nation Learning
19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36
small-group learning
SMALL-GROUP LEARNING
Working as a Team
Working as a Team 1. Take a Position In your group, discuss the following question:
1. Take a Position Remind groups to let all Are any challenges impossible to overcome?
members share their responses. You may wish As you take turns sharing your ideas, be sure to provide examples
to set a time limit for this discussion. to make your response clear. After all group members have shared,
discuss your responses. Were other group members’ responses similar
2. List Your Rules You may want to have groups
to yours? Did other group members share challenges that you had not
share their lists of rules and consolidate them
thought of, but could relate to?
into a master list to be displayed and followed
by all groups.
2. List Your Rules As a group, decide on the rules that you will follow
3. Apply the Rules As you circulate among the as you work together. Samples are provided; add two more of your
groups, ensure that students are staying on own. You may add or revise rules based on your experience together.
task. Consider a short time limit for this step. • Everyone should participate in group discussions.
4. Name Your Group This task can be creative • People should not interrupt.
and fun. If students have trouble coming
up with a name, suggest that they think of •
something related to the unit topic. Encourage
groups to share their names with the class.
5. Create a Communication Plan Encourage
•
groups to include in their plans agreed-upon
times during the day to share ideas. They
should also devise a method for recording and
saving their communications.
3. Apply the Rules Practice working as a group. Share what you have
Accountable Talk learned about overcoming obstacles. Make sure each person in the
group contributes. Take notes and be prepared to share with the class
Offer students these Accountable Talk
one thing that you heard from another member of your group.
suggestions:
Remember to . . . 4. Name Your Group Choose a name that reflects the unit topic.
Ask clarifying questions.
Remember to . . .
Explain your thinking. Our group’s decision:
Which sounds like . . .
I believe _____ is true because _____.
Remember to . . .
Build on the ideas of others.
Which sounds like . . .
When _____ said _____, it made me think of _____.
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Accountability in Group Work The or if there is no accountability. To help 2. Let each group know that one student If groups struggle, teachers can prod
teacher’s role during group work is to groups work together well, achieve their will be selected randomly to share the them with questions that support
serve as the facilitator rather than as the goals, and ensure accountability, teachers group’s thinking. This randomness how they will get to the answer. For
leader. This means that the teacher should can follow these three steps: builds in accountability. example, if they are unable to find the
support the thinking and discussion 1. First, define and clarify the task. 3. Pull the whole class back together to main point of the essay, ask them: “In
but not provide the answers or content Explain why it is valuable, and make share back information and to check this type of text, where might a reader
direction. Problems can arise if a group is sure students know what they are learning.
unfocused, if the task is not meaningful, look to find the main idea?”
expected to do.
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A Work in Progress
Audio Summaries
Audio summaries of “A Work
Summary
in Progress” are available online Shortly after Aimee Mullins was born, she reports in “A Work in
in both English and Spanish in Progress,” doctors amputated both her legs below the knee. But
the Interactive Teacher’s Edition that is not the beginning to a sad story. Aimee’s life is a story of
or Unit Resources. Assigning adventure, excitement, and achievement. At every turn, people try
these summaries prior to reading to put her into a mold—the stereotype of a disabled person who
the selection may help students
should work as hard as possible to seem normal. But Aimee is not
build additional background
normal. She is remarkable. Refusing to allow anyone to limit her, she
knowledge and set a context for
their first read.
becomes a world-record-setting athlete and fashion model.
Insight
This intriguing memoir is a loud affirmation of the need to be oneself.
Mullins deals with her physical problems, her prosthetics, and the
authority figures in her life with humor and irreverence as she moves
from athlete to fashion model to international celebrity.
Essential Question:
How do we overcome Connection to Essential Question
obstacles? The connection of “A Work in Progress” to the essential question
is clear and strong. Aimee Mullins faces powerful physical and
social obstacles, but she seems to see them all as challenges and
opportunities.
Small-Group Learning
Performance Task Connection to Performance Tasks
How do people
Small-Group Learning Performance Task In this Performance Task,
overcome enormous
students will present an informative essay about how people face
challenges?
challenges to overcome adversity. This selection provides students with
the insight that being yourself is the surest path to the kind of success
Unit Performance-Based
Assessment you value.
How can people overcome Unit Performance-Based Assessment Aimee Mullins is an excellent
adversity in the face of example of a person who has the confidence and drive to use whatever
overwhelming obstacles? life gives her to build an extraordinary life. For Aimee, obstacles are seen
as opportunities. This is an important insight that students can use in
responding to the assessment.
LESSON RESOURCES
Instructional RI.10 By the end of the year, read and L.4 Determine or clarify the meaning of SL.1 Engage effectively in a range of
Standards comprehend literary nonfiction . . . unknown and multiple-meaning words collaborative discussions . . .
and phrases . . .
L.4 Determine or clarify the meaning of SL.1.a Come to discussions prepared . . .
unknown and multiple–meaning words L.4.b Use common, grade-appropriate
SL.1.b Follow rules for collegial
and phrases . . . Greek or Latin affixes and roots . . .
discussions . . .
L.4.a Use context as a clue . . . L.1 Demonstrate command of the
SL.1.c Pose questions . . .
conventions . . .
RI.3 Analyze the interactions between
individuals . . . L.2 Demonstrate command of the
conventions . . .
RI.4 Determine the meaning of words
and phrases . . .
RI.6 Determine an author’s point
of view . . .
STUDENT RESOURCES
Available online Selection Audio Word Network Evidence Log
in the Interactive
Student Edition or First-Read Guide: Nonfiction
Unit Resources Close-Read Guide: Nonfiction
A Work in Progress: Text Questions
TEACHER RESOURCES
Selection Resources
Audio Summaries Concept Vocabulary and Word Study S peaking and Listening: Group
Available online in the
Discussion
Interactive Teacher’s Annotation Highlights Conventions: Informal Grammar
Edition or Unit Resources
EL Highlights
E nglish Language Support
Lesson: Hyperbole
Analyze Craft and Structure: Humor
Reteach/Practice (RP)
nalyze Craft and Structure:
A Word Study: Latin Prefix extra- (RP) S peaking and Listening: Group
Available online in the
Humor (RP) Discussion (RP)
Interactive Teacher’s Conventions: Informal Grammar (RP)
Edition or Unit Resources
Assessment
Selection Test
Available online in
Assessments
My Resources
A Unit 5 Answer Key is available online and in the Interactive Teacher’s Edition.
Reading Support
Qualitative Measures
Knowledge Demands This is a personal story told by an accomplished athlete.
1 2 3 4 5
Structure “A Work in Progress” is the transcription of a speech given by Aimee Mullins for The Moth Radio Hour
1 2 3 4 5 storytelling series. The structure is conventional.
Language Conventionality and Clarity The language is simple, conventional, and clear with most vocabulary on-level, aside from a few difficult
1 2 3 4 5 technical terms.
Teach
Language You may wish to administer L.1,2 Demonstrate command Have students incorporate
the Conventions: Informal of the conventions of standard commas into their sentences to
Grammar (RP) worksheet to English grammar and usage add direct and indirect objects.
help students understand the when writing or speaking.
Have students find other
difference between direct and L.4.b Use common, grade- examples of Latin prefixes.
TEACH indirect objects. appropriate Greek or Latin
You may wish to administer affixes and roots as clues to the
Implement the planned lesson, the Word Study Latin Prefix meaning of a word.
and gather evidence of student extra- (RP) worksheet to help
students understand that
learning.
extra- means “beyond the
scope of.”
STANDARDS
FIRST READ Reading Informational Text
By the end of the year, read and
comprehend literary nonfiction in
Have students perform the steps of the first read the grades 6–8 text complexity band CONNECT ideas within RESPOND by completing
independently: proficiently, with scaffolding as the selection to what you the Comprehension Check and
needed at the high end of the range.
already know and what you by writing a brief summary of
NOTICE: You may want to encourage students to Language
have already read. the selection.
notice details and specific word choices that add Determine or clarify the meaning
of unknown and multiple–meaning
humor in the selection. words and phrases based on
grade 7 reading and content,
ANNOTATE: Remind students to mark vocabulary choosing flexibly from a range
and key passages. of strategies.
a. Use context as a clue to the
CONNECT: Encourage students to go beyond meaning of a word or phrase.
CLOSER LOOK
Hyperbole
Circulate among groups as students conduct
their close read. Suggest that groups close
read paragraph 1. Encourage them to talk
about the annotations they mark. If needed,
provide the following support.
Annotate: Have students mark words and
phrases that are examples of hyperbole, or
using exaggerations for comic effect.
Question: Guide students to consider what
these word choices might tell them. Ask what
A Work in Progress a reader can infer from the exaggerations,
and accept student responses.
Aimee Mullins Possible response: The hyperbole adds humor
and sets the tone for the selection. The reader
understands that the author has a good sense of
humor and uses it to face challenges in her life
and to entertain others.
Conclude: Help students formulate
conclusions about the importance of humor in
the text. Ask students why the author might
have taken a humorous tone toward her
subject.
BACKGROUND Possible response: The humor sets readers at
ease, helps them identify with the author, and
A prosthetic is an artificial substitute for a missing body part. Over the SCAN FOR
MULTIMEDIA entertains them.
past few decades, prosthetic technology has advanced greatly. Modern
prosthetics can often fully replace the function of a missing limb due to Reminds students that hyperbole is a deliberate
the invention of lighter materials and more sophisticated designs. overstatement or exaggeration used for comic
effect.
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importantly, I survived the slick marble floors that are all over this
building. Tile and marble floors are public enemy number one to a
stiletto-loving girl like me. And I had five-inch heels on that night.
2 Most people learn to walk in very high heels. They bend their
ankle so that the ball of the foot touches the ground first; you have
more stability.
Additional English Language Support
is available in the Interactive Teacher’s
Edition.
Create an electronic template and have represented in a group, students could English Language Support
students work in groups of “language take turns entering words in their home Exaggeration Review paragraph 1 with students. Exaggeration is
detectives” to enter new and interesting language, and all members of the group often based on idiomatic expressions, such as “public enemy number
words onto the group’s template. If could learn that word. At the end of one.” To help students understand the exaggeration in this selection,
time allows, encourage students to each week, the teacher could compile have them listen to the audio recording of Aimee Mullins reading her
complete two to five words each day. the words into a class quiz. work for The Moth Radio Hour (available for free download). Hearing
Where multiple home languages are the author’s inflections as they follow along in the text will help
students make inferences about when Mullins is exaggerating and
will help them understand the humor in the selection. ALL LEVELS
about skin color; I’m talking about the color white. The “skin
color” was the rubber foam foot painted “Caucasian,” which
is the nastiest shade of nuclear peach that you’ve ever seen in
your life. It has nothing to do with any human skin tone on the
planet. And these legs were so good at being waterproof that
they were buoyant. So when I’d go off the high dive, I’d go down
and come straight back up feet first. They were the bane of
my existence.
14 But then we’re at the Jersey Shore one summer. By the time we
get there, there’s three hundred yards of towels between me and
the sea. And I know this is where I first honed my ability to run
really fast. I was the white flash. I didn’t wanna feel hundreds
of pairs of eyes staring at me. And so I’d get myself into the
ocean, and I was a good swimmer, but no amount of swimming
technique can control buoyant legs.
15 So at some point I get caught in a rip current, and I’m migrating
from my vantage point of where I could see my parents’ towel.
And I’m taking in water, and I’m fighting, fighting, fighting.
And all I could think to do was pop off these legs and put one
under each armpit, with the peach feet sticking up, and just bob,
thinking, Someone’s gotta find me.
16 And a lifeguard did. And I’m sure he will collect for therapy
bills. You know? Like, they don’t show that on Baywatch.3
17 But they saved my life, those legs.
18 And then when I was fourteen it was Easter Sunday, and I was
gonna be wearing a dress that I had purchased with my own
money—the first thing I ever bought that wasn’t on sale.
19 Momentous event; you never forget it. I’d had a paper route
since I was twelve, and I went to The Limited, and I bought this
dress that I thought was the height of sophistication—sleeveless
safari dress, belted, hits at the knee.
Coming downstairs into the living room, I see my father
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3. Baywatch popular television show from the late 1990s about the lives of fictional
lifeguards.
her life. She had been born with a brittle bone disease that resulted
in her left leg being seven centimeters shorter than her right. She
wore a brace and orthopedic6 shoes and they got her by, but she
wanted to do more.
Strategic Support
Distinctiveness Review paragraph 44 and discuss the writer’s
attitude about prosthetic legs. Have students quick write about
something that sets them apart from others and that they might
see as a disadvantage. Tell them to identify this difference and then
discuss how they might celebrate this difference and use it as a
source for creative power and strength. Give students the option to
share their responses in their small groups, but do not require it.
Research
5. Notebook Confirm your understanding of the selection by briefly summarizing Research to Clarify Remind groups to
key events. adequately narrow their topics and search terms
for research. For instance, “prosthetic legs”
is too broad a topic and would probably yield
RESEARCH an overwhelming amount of information, but
narrowing the topic to “carbon fiber sprinting
Research to Clarify Choose at least one unfamiliar detail from the text. Briefly
legs” would be more effective. Have groups
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research that detail. In what way does the information you learned shed light on the
selection? Share your findings with your small group. present the findings of their research to the class.
Research to Explore Tell students that the
topic suggested here is just one possibility. They
should choose the topic for further research that
Research to Explore Choose something from the text that interested you. For most interests them. Here are some additional
instance, you might want to learn more about the newest kinds of prosthetic limbs.
ideas: the Americans with Disabilities Act, the
How does this information deepen your understanding of the personal narrative? Share
Paralympics, cheetahs, silicon legs, and wearable
your findings with your small group.
sculpture.
Challenge
Narrative The author of “A Work in Progress” describes Encourage them to incorporate exaggeration, comic
how she overcame the physical challenges associated diction, and other humorous elements in a manner
with having had both of her legs amputated beneath the similar to that employed by author Aimee Mullins.
knee. This is a serious topic, but the author presents her Point out that students need not write about
story in a positive way and writes with a sense of humor anything they feel is too personal—a challenge
that reflects her personality and brings her words to life. might simply be studying for and passing a tough
Have students write a short autobiographical narrative test, working hard to make a sports team, learning
about a challenge they’ve faced. to play an instrument, and so on.
currently facing? How can you overcome these Cite textual evidenCe
challenges? As students discuss in their groups, analyze the text to support your answers.
Conventions
Conventions Informal Grammar “A Work in Progress” is transcribed, or copied, from
Informal Grammar As you discuss Mullins’s use a speech that Aimee Mullins gave at the New York Public Library. While
of informal grammar with students, guide them speaking, Mullins chose informal grammar, or casual language rules, to
to understand the situations in which formal and connect with her audience. Some features of her spoken language include:
A WORK IN PROGRESS
informal grammar are considered appropriate.
• Colloquial Contractions Words such as gonna (going to), wanna
Discuss why most scholarly, legal, business, news (want to) and kinda (kind of) combine two words in a way that
and other professional informative writing uses imitates casual conversation.
formal grammar and how the effectiveness of
• Informal Transitions People often add casual words and phrases
informative writing might be altered if writers use such as man, I’m like, so there I was, and you know when they speak
more informal grammar. For more support, see to link ideas or create emphasis.
Conventions: Informal Grammar.
• Introductory Conjunctions Starting sentences with the
conjunctions and, but, or so can smooth the transition from one
Read It sentence into another in informal speech, even though they are
1. See possible responses in the chart on the discouraged in more formal writing.
student page.
Read It
2. Answers will vary. Students should identify
examples of how listeners’ connection with the 1. Work with your group to find two more examples of informal
speaker is greater if the speaker uses informal grammar in “A Work in Progress.” Then, rewrite each example of
grammar. informal grammar to follow standard English grammar rules.
Organize Your Discussion Assign roles for each member of your group.
EVIDENCE LOG
Roles can include a group leader, who keeps the discussion on topic; a Evidence Log Support students in completing
Before moving on to a
timekeeper, who makes sure that the discussion takes no longer than 15
new selection, go to your their Evidence Log. This paced activity will
minutes; and a note-taker to record the group’s ideas. Once you have Evidence Log and record help prepare them for the Performance-Based
chosen a quotation, use these questions to guide your group’s discussion. what you learned from
Use a chart like this one to record ideas from your discussion.
Assessment at the end of the unit.
“A Work in Progress.”
Here are some things to keep in mind as you hold your group discussion.
• Draw on the selection to explore and support ideas. Support
viewpoints with examples and details from the selection.
• Take turns speaking. Listen to other students’ ideas, and respond with
relevant observations and questions that prompt them to elaborate on
their thoughts.
Selection Test
Administer the “A Work in Progress” Selection
Test, which is available in both print and digital
A Work in Progress 503 formats online in Assessments.
Strategic Support
Discussion Sensitivity The topic of the essay may be an emotional
one for some students. Provide an outlet for expressing feelings that
students might have in response to the essay or to the quotations
called out in the group discussion assignment. Some students might
be better able to complete the discussion assignment with a partner
rather than in a group.
Insight
This selection helps students understand that apparently hopeless
challenges can be met with intelligence, courage, and compassion.
Essential Question:
How do we overcome Connection to Essential Question
obstacles? The Story of My Life provides a strong connection to the Essential
Question, “How do we overcome obstacles?” Helen Keller faced
enormous obstacles due to her inability to see, hear, or speak. However,
with the help of her teacher, she learned to overcome these obstacles
and live a remarkable life.
Small-Group Learning
Performance Task Connection to Performance Tasks
How do people face Small-Group Learning Performance Task In this Performance Task,
challenges in order to students will present an informative essay about how people face
overcome adversity? challenges to overcome adversity. This selection provides students
with examples of courage and compassion.
Unit Performance-Based
Assessment Unit Performance-Based Assessment As students work on the
How can people overcome assessment, they will need to support their response to the prompt
adversity in the face of with evidence about facing challenges. From the moment of her
overwhelming obstacles? revelation at the water pump, Keller faces a stunning challenge with
eagerness and courage.
Lesson Resources
Instructional RI.10 By the end of the year, read and comprehend literary L.4 Determine or clarify the meaning of unknown and
Standards nonfiction . . . multiple-meaning words and phrases . . .
L.4 Determine or clarify the meaning of unknown and L.4.b Use common, grade-appropriate Greek or Latin affixes
multiple–meaning words and phrases . . . and roots . . .
L.4.a Use context as a clue . . .
RI.4 Determine the meaning of words and phrases . . .
RI.6 Determine an author’s point of view . . .
STUDENT RESOURCES
Available online in the Selection Audio Word Network
Interactive Student
Edition or Unit Resources First-Read Guide: Nonfiction
Close-Read Guide: Nonfiction
TEACHER RESOURCES
Selection Resources
Audio Summaries Concept Vocabulary and Word Study
Available online in the
Interactive Teacher’s Annotation Highlights Conventions: Types of Dependent Clauses
Edition or Unit Resources
EL Highlights E nglish Language Support
Lesson: Adverb and Adjective Clauses
from The Story of My Life: Text Questions
Analyze Craft and Structure: Autobiographical Writing
Reteach/Practice (RP)
Analyze Craft and Structure: Autobiographical Writing (RP) Word Study: Greek Root -myst- (RP)
Available online in the
Interactive Teacher’s Conventions: Types of Dependent Clauses (RP)
Edition or Unit Resources
Assessment
Selection Test
Available online in
Assessments
My Resources A Unit 5 Answer Key is available online and in the Interactive Teacher’s Edition.
Reading Support
Qualitative Measures
Knowledge Demands Background knowledge on Helen Keller’s life will help with understanding.
1 2 3 4 5
Levels of Meaning/Purpose The story discusses education, learning, and disability, as well as Keller’s struggle to overcome a unique
1 2 3 4 5 obstacle to her own ability to learn.
Teach
TEACH
Implement the planned lesson,
and gather evidence of student
learning.
ability to see, hear, or speak, or even knowing you do with your group will help prepare you to
that language exists? Engage students in a compare the excerpt and the video.
discussion about the importance of language
that sets the context for reading the excerpt
from The Story of My Life. As students share
their thoughts, guide them to identify specific
About the Author
from The Story of My Life
factors that affected their responses.
Concept Vocabulary
As you perform your first read of the excerpt from The Story of My Life,
you will encounter these words.
from The Story of My Life
Have you ever struggled to learn a new skill? imitate mystery barriers
What are some of the obstacles that come A serious illness left Helen
between a dim understanding and true Keller (1880–1968) blind Context Clues If these words are unfamiliar to you, try using context
and deaf before she was clues to help you determine their meanings. There are various types of
knowledge? Modeling questions readers might
two years old. When context clues that you may encounter as you read.
ask as they read this excerpt from The Story of Keller was nearly seven,
My Life brings the text alive for students and her family hired Anne
connects to the Small Group Performance Task Synonyms: With the help of her teacher, she was able to
Sullivan, a teacher from
comprehend or understand new ideas.
question. Selection audio and print capability are the Perkins School for the
available in the Interactive Teacher’s Edition. Blind, to help her learn Restatement of an idea: There were many obstacles on her path,
to communicate. Keller but she would not let them block her progress.
and Sullivan developed a
Concept Vocabulary remarkable teacher-student
Have groups discuss the different types of relationship as well as a Apply your knowledge of context clues and other vocabulary strategies to
context clues illustrated on the student page. For unique friendship. determine the meanings of other unfamiliar words you encounter during
each word used in the examples (comprehend, your first read.
obstacles), encourage groups to come up with a
First Read NONFICTION
definition based on the clues provided. Ask group
members if they can think of any other types of Apply these strategies as you conduct your first read. You will have an
opportunity to complete a close read after your first read.
teaching her.
504 UNIT 5 • FacINg adversITy
CONNECT: Have students compare Helen’s
struggle to understand language with their
own struggles to learn new skills—or with the
struggles of other people with physical disabilities FACILITATING SMALL-GROUP CLOSE Reading
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about whom students have read or heard.
CLOSE READ: Autobiography Circulate among thoughts and feelings about events as they
RESPOND: Students will answer questions and
groups as they perform their close read, offering happen. However, autobiography also includes
write a summary to demonstrate understanding.
support as needed. the author’s reflections, as an older person, on
Point out to students that while they will always • Remind students that when reading an the significance of the events.
complete the Respond step at the end of the autobiography, they should look for traditional • As they read, suggest that students try to
first read, the other steps will probably happen narrative elements such as characters, setting, distinguish between the thoughts and feelings
somewhat concurrently. You may wish to print and key events. Helen recalls having about events at the time
copies of the First-Read Guide: Nonfiction for • Written from the first-person point of view, they took place and her reflections on those
students to use. autobiographical writing includes the author’s events as a mature adult.
BACKGROUND
In this excerpt from her autobiography, Helen Keller describes her first SCAN FOR
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MULTIMEDIA
experience with language at the age of six. The Story of My Life was
published in 1903, when Keller was 23 years old.
1. Perkins Institution The Perkins School for the Blind, founded in 1829 in Boston.
Edition.
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Research
Research to Clarify If groups struggle to narrow 3. Once Helen Keller learns the word for water, what is she eager to do next?
their research topic, suggest the following
narrower research topics: early life, experience
at the Perkins School for the Blind, or experience
working with Helen Keller. Whichever topic
students choose, encourage them to use reliable
research sources and explain how what they
learned sheds light on the excerpt from The Story
of My Life. 4. Notebook Confirm your understanding of the excerpt by writing a brief
summary of it.
Research to Explore Suggest that students
Research to Explore Choose something from the text that interested you. For
example, you might want to learn more about how blind people learn to read. How
does this information deepen your understanding of the text? Share your findings with
your group.
Challenge
Research Why did Annie Sullivan write into Helen’s hand? Did she
invent this method or did she learn it? Was she writing out alphabet
letters as we know them? Did Sullivan and Helen Keller change the way
people like Helen are educated? Have students look for the answers to
one or more of these questions as they research methods for teaching
people with profound vision and hearing loss. Suggest that they present
their information chronologically, to show how methods have changed
over time. Ask students to share their findings with the class.
notebook Confirm your understanding of these words from STandaRdS selection, all three words relate to overcoming
the text by using them in sentences. Be sure to use context clues that Reading Informational Text
Determine the meaning of words hardship, especially the struggle to understand
demonstrate your understand of the meaning of each word.
and phrases as they are used something.
in a text, including figurative,
connotative, and technical
meanings; analyze the impact of a Practice
Word Study specific word choice on meaning Possible response: Helen learned to imitate writing
and tone.
Greek Root: -myst- The Greek root -myst- means “secret.” In the Language
by making the same symbols in her hand that
selection, Helen Keller describes how the mystery, or “secret,” of Determine or clarify the meaning Miss Sullivan had. Even though Helen could copy
language was revealed to her through her experience with water at of unknown and multiple-meaning the letters in her hand, their meaning remained a
words and phrases based on grade
the well-house. Identify another word you know with the Greek root 7 reading and content, choosing mystery. When Helen finally understood that the
-myst-, and use it in a sentence that shows your understanding of the flexibly from a range of strategies. letters were names for things, she overcame a huge
word’s meaning. b. Use common,
grade-appropriate Greek or
barrier to communication.
Latin affixes and roots as clues
to the meaning of a word.
Word Network
from The Story of My Life 509
Possible responses: succeeded, uncomprehending,
tussle, confounding, attempts, vainly
Word Study
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For more support, see Concept Vocabulary and
Analyze the Text If students fail to see the connection among the Word Study.
If students struggle to close read the text, then vocabulary words, then create a concept map
graphic organizer with each word radiating Possible response:
provide from The Story of My Life: Text
from a circle in the middle, to be filled in mystical: having a spiritual meaning that can’t be
Questions available online in the Interactive
with the thematic connection of the words. understood by senses or thought (Visiting the shrine
Teacher’s Edition or Unit Resources. Answers
Help students see that the common theme is of my ancestors was an almost mystical experience.)
and DOK levels are also available.
overcoming adversity or struggling to learn. For
Reteach and Practice, see Word Study: Greek
Root -myst- (RP).
“Neither sorrow nor regret followed my passionate To explain (in frank words what Helen’s inner world
English Language Support Describe the associations the word has: here, it
Connotations Connotations can relate to suggests strength and stubbornness. Connect this
an author’s purpose by suggesting emotions tone to a possible purpose: the tone suggests the
associated with a word. Draw students’ attention writer wants to express what it felt like before she
to the word tussle (paragraph). Tussle means “a had language. ALL LEVELS
physical contest or intense struggle.”
Conventions Conventions
Types of Dependent Clauses Good writers use a variety of clauses to
Types of Dependent Clauses In order to
enliven their writing and to provide detail.
complete the Read It and Write It activities,
A clause is a group of words with its own subject and verb. An students may need additional explanation of
independent clause, or main clause, can stand alone as a complete dependent clauses. As necessary, provide the
sentence. A dependent, or subordinate, clause also has a subject and
following instruction:
a verb, but it cannot stand alone as a complete sentence.
• Some adjective clauses begin with relative
Dependent clauses are classified according to how they function in adverbs, such as when or where (e.g., “the
a sentence.
village where I grew up). Any adjective clause,
• An adverb clause acts as an adverb in a sentence. It begins with a whether it begins with a relative pronoun or
subordinating conjunction, such as although, if, when, or because. a relative adverb, answers the question what
• A relative, or adjective, clause acts as an adjective. It usually begins kind, which one, or how many about a noun
with a relative pronoun, such as who, whom, whose, which, or that. or pronoun in another clause.
• A noun clause acts as a noun. It begins with a word such as what, • Sometimes the word introducing a relative
whatever, when, where, how, or why.
clause or a noun clause is not expressed but
In the examples in this chart, each type of dependent clause is is understood.
underlined.
Examples: The pants [that] I like best
TYPE OF CLAUSE ExAmPLE have pleats. I know [that] you can hear me.
Adverb Clause Because Keller could not see or hear, she struggled to For more support, see Conventions: Types of
understand language. Dependent Clauses.
(acts as an adverb, modifying the verb struggled)
Read It
Relative Clause Anne Sullivan, who was her teacher, helped Keller break
Possible responses:
through the barriers that challenged her.
a. There were barriers still, it is true, but barriers
(acts as an adjective, modifying Anne Sullivan)
that could in time be swept away.
Noun Clause Keller made the connection between the feel of the water b. adjective clause modifying barriers
and what Sullivan was writing on her hand.
c. When I had played with it a little while, Miss
(acts as a noun, the object of the
Sullivan slowly spelled into my hand the word
preposition between)
“d-o-l-l.”
Read It d. adverb clause modifying spelled
Work with your group to identify examples of dependent clauses in e. I did not know that I was spelling a word or
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the excerpt. Write your examples in the chart, and label the type of even that words existed; I was simply making
dependent clause shown in each example. my fingers go in a monkey-like imitation.
f. noun clauses acting as the compound object of
ExAmPLE FROm THE TExT TYPE OF DEPEnDEnT CLAUSE
the verb know
a. See possible responses in Teacher’s Edition b.
c. d.
e. f.
Write It
Notebook Write a paragraph describing a time you overcame a
barrier to learning. Use specific sensory details to help readers see, hear,
smell, and feel the experience. In your paragraph, correctly use at least
one adverb clause, one relative clause, and one noun clause.
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Conventions
English Language Support If students have difficulty distinguishing
Using Adverb and Adjective Clauses Have Ask students to write a few paragraphs about between dependent clauses and phrases in a
students research additional information about what they learned from their research and if they sentence, then make sure they understand
a part of Helen Keller’s life and then ask them to were surprised by what they learned. BRIDGING that any clause must contain both a subject
write about what they learned using adverb and
An expanded English Language Support and its predicate, or verb. Make sure students
adjective clauses.
Lesson on Adverb and Adjective Clauses is understand that -ing forms of verbs are
Ask students to write three sentences about what available in the Interactive Teacher’s Edition. verbals, and not verbs themselves. For Reteach
they learned from their research. EMERGING
and Practice, see Conventions: Types of
Ask students to write a paragraph about what Dependent Clauses (RP).
they learned. EXPANDING
Small-Group Learning 511
PLANNING SMALL- GROUP LEARNING • How Helen Keller Learned to Talk
Insight
This selection helps students understand that challenges that
may seem hopeless can be met with intelligence, courage, and
perseverance.
Essential Question:
How do we overcome Connection to Essential Question
obstacles? Helen Keller faced great obstacles in her life. Students may see that until
she can grasp the concept of language, the rest of the world remains
out of her reach. Anne Sullivan’s actions and dedication model one
response to the Essential Question.
Small-Group Learning
Performance Task Connection to Performance Tasks
How do people face
Small-Group Learning Performance Task In this Performance Task,
challenges in order to
students will present an informative essay to show the steps and actions
overcome adversity?
people take to overcome adversity. This video provides students with
a vivid demonstration of the steps Helen Keller and Anne Sullivan took
Unit Performance-Based
Assessment together to overcome adversity.
How can people overcome Unit Performance-Based Assessment As students work on the
adversity in the face of assessment, they will need to support their response to the prompt with
overwhelming obstacles? support about facing challenges. From this video, students can easily
infer the countless hours of work Helen Keller endured to overcome the
obstacles she faced.
LESSON RESOURCES
Instructional RI.10 By the end of the year, read and L.6 Acquire and use accurately RI.7 Compare and contrast a text . . .
Standards comprehend literary nonfiction . . . grade-appropriate general W.2 Write informative/explanatory texts . . .
academic and domain-specific W.2.a Introduce a topic clearly . . .
L.6 Acquire and use accurately
words and phrases . . . W.2.b Develop the topic . . .
grade-appropriate general academic
W.9 Draw evidence . . .
and domain-specific words and
W.9.a Apply grade 7 Reading standards . . .
phrases . . .
SL.1 Engage effectively . . .
SL.1.b Follow rules for collegial discussions . . .
SL.2 Analyze the main ideas . . .
SL.5 Include multimedia components . . .
STUDENT RESOURCES
Available online in the Selection Audio
Interactive Student
Edition or Unit Resources First-Review Guide: Media: Video
Close-Review Guide: Media: Video
TEACHER RESOURCES
Selection Resources Audio Summaries Media Vocabulary Writing to Compare: Multimedia
Available online in the
Presentation
Interactive Teacher’s
Edition or Unit Resources
Assessment
Selection Test
Available online in
Assessments
My Resources A Unit 5 Answer Key is available online and in the Interactive Teacher’s Edition.
Qualitative Measures
Knowledge Demands Prior knowledge of Helen Keller and Anne Sullivan will be required to understand the clip.
1 2 3 4 5
Structure The clip’s structure is simple, as Anne narrates and Helen demonstrates their process.
1 2 3 4 5
Language Conventionality and Clarity Anne Sullivan’s language is clear and easily accessible.
1 2 3 4 5
Levels of Meaning/Purpose The concepts of education and disability and are not hard to grasp.
1 2 3 4 5
Reading Informational Texts WATCH who speaks, what they NOTE elements that you find
FIRST REVIEW By the end of the year, read and say, and how they say it. interesting and want to revisit.
comprehend literary nonfiction in
Have students perform the steps of the first the grades 6–8 text complexity band
proficiently, with scaffolding as
review independently: needed at the high end of the range.
WATCH: Remind students to pay close attention Language CONNECT ideas in the RESPOND by completing
Acquire and use accurately grade- video to other media you’ve the Comprehension Check
to how the two women interact with each other. appropriate general academic and
domain-specific words and phrases; experienced, texts you’ve read, at the end.
NOTE: Encourage students to note any parts they gather vocabulary knowledge or images you’ve seen.
may want to revisit during their close review. when considering a word or phrase
important to comprehension or
CONNECT: Encourage students to make expression.
CLOSE REVIEW: Film As groups perform the • If the group is confused by the process
close review of this video, circulate and offer described by Anne Sullivan, suggest that
support as needed. they feel the vibrations on themselves as they
• Remind groups that this is a documentary, speak by holding a finger to their throat, lips,
or nonfiction, film and that the people in the and nose.
scene are the actual Helen Keller and Anne • Challenge groups to come up with their own
Sullivan, not actors portraying them. paraphrase of what happened in the scene.
Possible responses:
1. Helen was six years and eight months old. 1. How old was Helen Keller when Anne Sullivan first met her?
2. Helen placed her thumb on her larnyx (throat),
one finger on her lips, and one finger on the side
of her nose.
3. “I am not dumb now.”
2. In what position on her teacher’s face did Keller have to place her hand in
order to feel the vibrations of the spoken word?
Close Review
Watch the film clip again. Record any new observations
that seem important. What questions do you have? Jump Start
What can you conclude?
Close Review Ask students to consider the
HOW HELEN KELLER LEARNED following prompt: If you were a filmmaker
TO TALK
trying to show this interview from Helen’s
Analyze the Media point of view, how would you go about it? As
Notebook Complete the activities.
students discuss the prompt in their groups,
have them consider possible approaches—such
1. Present and Discuss Choose the section of the video you find as using some combination of camera angles
most interesting or powerful. Share your choice with the group, and
and sound to convey Helen’s perspective.
discuss why you chose it. Explain what you noticed in the section, the
questions it raised for you, and the conclusions you reached about it.
2. Review and Synthesize With your group, review the video interview.
How does the video deepen your understanding of the challenges Close Review
Helen Keller faced? How does it highlight her triumphs? Explain. If needed, model close reviewing by using
3. Notebook Essential Question: How do we overcome the Closer Review note in the Interactive
obstacles? What have you learned about overcoming obstacles and Teacher’s Edition.
facing adversity from the interview? Remind students to use Accountable Talk in
their discussions and to support one another as
LANGUAGE DEVELOPMENT they complete the close review.
descriptions.
3. Responses will vary. Students should cite how
2. What type of shot is used as Anne Sullivan is introducing Helen Keller
Helen Keller’s traumatic struggle and eventual
at the beginning of the video?
success suggests both the difficulty and the
possibility of overcoming obstacles.
Strategic Support
Support for Making Comparisons Students may elements in the clip, particularly how the body
require support in locating relevant information is used, and compare them to descriptions of
for making comparisons between the text and the body and physical sensations in the book
the video. Suggest to students that they compare excerpts. Students can also compare the voice
and contrast the content of each selection—what of the selections’ subject, Helen Keller—her
Helen is shown learning in the book excerpt and narrator’s voice in the text and her speaking voice
in the video. Explain that because film is a visual in the video.
medium, students should look at the key visual
Assign Tasks Make a list of tasks you will have to accomplish in order to
finish your presentation. Assign the tasks to individual group members. Assign Tasks
Adapt this list to suit the needs of your group. Guide groups to work cooperatively in assigning
tasks to individual group members. Make sure all
TASK LIST
evidence log group members are active and engaged.
Before moving on to a
Research the Topic: Decide whether you need more background
new selection, go to your Drafting
information on Keller and Sullivan. If you do, research and gather Evidence Log and record
the information. Determine Your Central Idea Remind students
what you’ve learned from
that their thesis statement should clearly state
Assigned To: the text excerpt from
The Story of My Life and their point of comparison between the treatment
Locate Media: Find multimedia elements—audio, video, and the video “How Helen of the content in the two media, text and video.
images—that will highlight the information in your presentation Keller Learned to Talk.” In the drafting phase, students should be flexible
and engage your audience. to possible changes in the central idea they
Assigned To: decide at the outset of the project.
Gather Quotes and Details: Identify details from both selections that STANDArDS
Include Comparisons of Text to Video Remind
support and clarify your central ideas. Note direct quotations that Writing students to provide examples and evidence from
will strengthen the support for your main points. • Write informative/explanatory texts both text and the video sources when describing
to examine a topic and convey ideas,
Assigned To: concepts, and information through their comparisons. Examples should be concise;
the selection, organization, and text and dialogue should be quoted directly or be
Make a Rough Outline: Organize a sequence for your content so analysis of relevant content.
a. Introduce a topic clearly,
accurately paraphrased.
that the text and multimedia elements complement each other. You
previewing what is to follow;
can change the sequence as you develop your presentation. organize ideas, concepts, and
information, using strategies Reviewing, Revising, and Editing
Assigned To: such as definition, classification, Guide students to include attributions to title
comparison/ contrast, and cause/
effect; include formatting, graphics, and author for all sources of content in their
and multimedia when useful to presentations. As a new source is introduced it
Drafting aiding comprehension.
can be easily attributed in transitional language.
Determine Your Central Idea Write a one-sentence thesis in which you b. Develop the topic with relevant
facts, definitions, concrete details, Subsequent references to sources do not need
state your central idea. quotations, or other information to be fully attributed but do need to be clearly
and examples.
Thesis: • Draw evidence from literary or
identified to avoid audience confusion. For more
informational texts to support support see: Writing to Compare: Multimedia
analysis, reflection, and research. Presentation
Work with your group to incorporate the media so that it supports your b. Apply grade 7 Reading
standards to literary nonfiction. Evidence Log Support students in completing
central idea.
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Enriching the Text To give students a different dramatic retelling, students can compare and
perspective on the same content, locate online contrast Keller’s own account of the scene in
clips from the 1962 film version and the 1979 her autobiography to filmmakers’ dramatized
and 2000 TV movie versions of The Miracle adaptations of the same events. To extend this
Worker, and show the water pump scene that activity, students can also locate the script to the
corresponds to the autobiography excerpt. stage play The Miracle Worker for an additional
Because filmed versions are based on Helen point of comparison.
Keller’s autobiography but are adapted for a
Insight
The inspiring story of William Kamkwamba shows how determination
and ingenuity can not only build a windmill but change a life.
Essential Question:
How do we overcome Connection to Essential Question
obstacles? The challenge in William Kamkwamba’s life is how to get an education
and help his family. He begins the process of educating himself by
reading, and that leads him to an endeavor that improves his family’s
life. His innovation and persistence were noticed by people who paid
for him to continue his education, and his TED talks brought his story
to a wider audience.
Small-Group Learning
Performance Task Connection to Performance Tasks
How do people face Small-Group Learning Performance Task In this Performance Task,
challenges in order to students will present an informative essay about how people face
overcome adversity? challenges to overcome adversity. This selection provides students with
examples of ingenuity and determination.
Unit Performance-Based
Assessment Unit Performance-Based Assessment William Kamkwamba is a young
How can people man with a desire for education, but his family cannot afford to pay
overcome adversity in the for it. Students should consider that, while Kamkwamba had some
face of overwhelming remarkable luck later in his story, he begins with actively pursuing
obstacles? knowledge by reading books from the local library. One of those books
presented him with the idea that changed the course of his life and the
knowledge to pursue it.
LESSON RESOURCES
Instructional RI.10 By the end of the year, read and L.4 Determine or clarify the meaning of W.2.a Introduce a topic
Standards comprehend literary nonfiction . . . unknown and multiple-meaning words clearly . . .
and phrases . . .
L.4 Determine or clarify the meaning of W.2.b Develop the topic . . .
unknown and multiple-meaning words L.4.b Use common, grade-appropriate
W.7 Conduct short research
and phrases . . . Greek or Latin affixes and roots . . .
projects . . .
L.4.a Use context as a clue . . . L.2 Demonstrate command of the
W.8 Gather relevant
conventions . . .
RI.1 Cite several pieces of textual evidence . . . information . . .
RI.3 Analyze the interactions between
individuals . . .
RI.5 Analyze the structure an author uses . . .
STUDENT RESOURCES
Available online in the Selection Audio Word Network Evidence Log
Interactive Student
Edition or Unit Resources First-Read Guide: Nonfiction
Close-Read Guide: Nonfiction
TEACHER RESOURCES
Selection Resources
Audio Summaries oncept Vocabulary and
C riting to Sources:
W
Available online in the
Word Study How-to-Essay
Interactive Teacher’s Annotation Highlights
Edition or Unit Resources Conventions: Capitalization
EL Highlights
Young Tinkerer Builds a Windmill: Text
A
Questions
E nglish Language Support Lesson:
Personal Interviews
nalyze Craft and Structure:
A
Biographical Writing
Reteach/Practice (RP)
nalyze Craft and Structure:
A Word Study: Etymology (RP) riting to Sources:
W
Available online in the
Biographical Writing (RP) How-to-Essay (RP)
Interactive Teacher’s Conventions: Capitalization (RP)
Edition or Unit Resources
Assessment
Selection Test
Available online in
Assessments
My Resources
A Unit 5 Answer Key is available online and in the Interactive Teacher’s Edition.
Reading Support
Qualitative Measures
Knowledge Demands Students may need an introduction to African issues, culture, and economic struggles, but otherwise
1 2 3 4 5 the story is straightforward.
Language Conventionality and Clarity The language is simple and conventional, very clear, and easy to read.
1 2 3 4 5
Levels of Meaning/Purpose The true story works as an inspirational piece and as a kind of short primer on Africa, development,
1 2 3 4 5 and entrepreneurialism.
TEACH
Language You may wish to administer the L.2 Demonstrate command of Have students locate capital
Conventions: Capitalization the conventions of standard letters in the selection.
(RP) worksheet to help English capitalization,
Have students find other
students understand that punctuation, and spelling when
suffixes they recognize in
capital letters signal the writing.
the text.
beginning of a sentence or
L.4 Determine or clarify the
quotation and identify proper
TEACH meaning of unknown and
nouns and proper adjectives.
multiple-meaning words and
You may wish to administer the phrases based on grade 7
Implement the planned lesson, Word Study: Transitions (RP) reading and content, choosing
and gather evidence of student worksheet to help students flexibly from a range of
learning. understand that both single strategies.
words (such as “because” and
“since”) and phrases (such
as “for that reason”) can be
transitions.
A Young Tinkerer Builds Restatement of an Idea: More power supplies are needed for the
a Windmill, Electrifying expansion of the electrical grid, which will lead to the proliferation
of the home use of electric appliances.
a Nation Contrast of Ideas and Topics: He strived to make his invention
Can a self-taught child help a nation develop? work, but he eventually had to quit.
Modeling questions that readers might ask as
they read “A Young Tinkerer Builds a Windmill, Apply your knowledge of context clues and other vocabulary strategies to
Electrifying a Nation” brings the text alive for determine the meaning of other unfamiliar words you encounter during
students and connects to the Small Group your first read.
Performance Task question. Selection audio and
print capability are available in the Interactive
Teacher’s Edition. First Read NONFICTION
Apply these strategies as you conduct your first read. You will have an
Concept Vocabulary opportunity to complete a close read after your first read.
Ask groups to look closely at the three types of
context clues—synonym, restatement of an idea,
and contrast of ideas and topics—and have group NOTICE the general ideas of ANNOTATE by marking
CLOSER LOOK
Analyzing Description
Circulate among groups as students conduct
their close read. Suggest that groups close
read paragraph 2. Encourage them to talk
about the annotations they mark. If needed,
provide the following support.
ANNOTATE: Have groups mark descriptions
of the tallest windmill and people’s reaction to
it in paragraph 2.
A Young Tinkerer Question: Ask, “What does this description
blue-gum trees and bicycle parts. His tallest, at 39 feet, towers power at all. Mr. Kamkwamba’s village must be
over this windswept village, clattering away as it powers his very poor, very remote, or both.
family’s few electrical appliances: 10 six-watt light bulbs, a TV set, Remind students that description in a
and a radio. The machine draws in visitors from miles around. newspaper article includes facts, examples,
3 Self-taught, Mr. Kamkwamba took up windmill building after statistics, quotations from interviews with
seeing a picture of one in an old textbook. He’s currently working people involved, and direct observations.
on a design for a windmill powerful enough to pump water from Journalists try to present these facts
wells and provide lighting for Masitala, a cluster of buildings objectively, without judgment or bias.
where about 60 families live.
4 Then, he wants to build more windmills for other villages
across the country. Betting he can do it, a group of investors are
putting him through school.
Illuminating the Text Before or after their first final column (I Learned). Then have groups share
reading of the text, ask each group to create a what they learned, and as a class try to resolve
K-W-L chart about windmills, and then have them any unanswered questions from the middle
fill out the first two columns (I Know; I Want to column. Be sure to preview the online resource
Know). Show a brief video or other concise online before sharing it with the class. (Research to
resource explaining how windmills work. After Clarify)
reviewing sources, have students complete the
Transitions Call student attention to the earliest events, first. Draw students’ (a) William Kamkwamba built windmills for
the shift in time between paragraphs 6 attention to transitions his home. (b) William saw a picture of a
and 7. Some students may be confused that appear in this article, such as so windmill in a book. (c) William is working
by the way this article jumps around in far (paragraph 2), then (paragraph 4), on a windmill to light and pump water for
time. Although biographies often proceed recently (paragraph 6), and years ago Masitala. (d) William built a windmill for
chronologically, the newspaper format of (paragraph 7). Then, ask students to use a primary school in Masitala. (e) William
this article demands that the author put transitions in the text to help them place stopped going to school.
the most important ideas, rather than the following events in time order: Possible response: e, b, a, d, c
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Multiple Meanings Review paragraph 2. She only reads serious novels. (requiring Guide students to identify which meaning
28. Tell students that the word serious has great effort to create or understand) is used in the sentence from the text.
multiple meanings. Have students reread 3. People who are serious about acting Discuss how to use context clues to define
the last sentence in the article and discuss should audition. (feeling sincere, a word with multiple meanings.
the following sentences. wholehearted, or committed)
1. The congregation grew serious when 4. Chocolate can cause serious health
the minister asked them to reflect on problems for dogs. (significant because
the past year. (thoughtful, solemn) of risk or danger)
Research
Research to Clarify If students have difficulty
3. What is “energy poverty”?
choosing a detail to investigate further, suggest
that they look more deeply into windmills,
focusing either on how a windmill can be rigged
to generate electricity or how they were used
originally in the various cultures where they
emerged. Remind students to explain how their
findings shed light on the text.
Research to Explore Suggest that students
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4. Notebook Confirm your understanding of the article by writing a brief interested in looking into renewable energy
summary of it. projects look at the websites of international
aid and development groups like the Center
for Global Development, or groups focusing on
RESEARCH energy development like the International Energy
Agency. Students may want to investigate the
Research to Clarify Research an unfamiliar detail in the article. In what way does the
state of Africa’s power grids—the systems of
information you learned shed light on the article? Share your findings with your small
group.
wires, switches, and substations that connect
energy producers to consumers.
Research to Explore Research other ways that energy poverty is being addressed in
poor parts of the world. Share your findings with your group.
Challenge
Research Groups researching energy poverty • How might the development of African nations
in Africa may want to investigate how climate affect climate change?
change could be affected as African nations • What is the relationship between the amount
continue to develop their electrical grids. For of fossil fuels extracted from African nations
example, students may want to pursue these lines and people’s access to energy in those nations?
of investigation:
Ask groups to share their findings with the class.
• Which renewable energy sources are being
developed in Africa?
do it? As students discuss the prompt in their notebook Complete the activities.
groups, have them consider what obstacles they
1. Review and Clarify Review the selection with your group. How did
might face. GROUP DISCUSSION
the lack of modern conveniences inspire William Kamkwamba to be
When you work in your
innovative? What were the results of his innovations?
group to answer the
Analyze the Text questions,
Close Read the Text be sure to direct listeners to
2. Present and discuss Now, work with your group to share the
passages from the text that you found especially important. Take turns
If needed, model close reading by using the specific words, sentences,
and paragraphs in the story.
presenting your passages. Discuss what you noticed in the text, the
Annotation Highlights in the Interactive questions you asked, and the conclusions you reached.
Teacher’s Edition.
Remind students to use Accountable Talk in 3. essential Question: How do we overcome obstacles? What has
their discussions and to support one another as this selection taught you about how people overcome obstacles?
they complete the close read.
WoRd netWoRK language development
Word Network
524 UNIT 5 • FacINg adversITy
Possible words: self-taught, poverty, jealousy,
taboo, tensions, rebuild
FORMATIVE ASSESSMENT
Analyze Craft and Structure
If groups have difficulty identifying and analyzing
elements of biographical writing, then have them
refer to the T-chart created in the teaching note
above, or instruct them to create a similar chart.
The chart will help them see the relationship
between each element and its contribution to
the text’s development. For Reteach and Practice,
see Analyze Craft and Structure: Biographical
Writing (RP).
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English Language Support their list and then have them explain why they
Writing Interview Questions Have students write want to ask them. EXPANDING
a list of people that they would like to interview Have students write two closed questions and
to find out more about Mr. Kamkwamba. three open-ended questions for a person on
Have pairs of students write two open-ended their list. Have students explain the kinds of
questions for one of the people on their list. information they would want to gather from their
EMERGING questions. BRIDGING
Have students write three open-ended questions An expanded English Language Support
and one closed question for one of the people on Lesson on Personal Interviews is available in the
Interactive Teacher’s Edition.
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FACILITATING Language deveLopment
Conventions Conventions
Capitalization Capital letters signal the beginning of a sentence or
Capitalization Remind students of some of
quotation and identify proper nouns and proper adjectives. Learning to
the important instances when capitalization use correct capitalization will ensure that your writing looks professional
is needed: names, titles, days of the week and authoritative.
A YOUNG TINKERER BUILDS
and months of the year, countries, cities, and A WINDMILL, ELECTRIFYING
so on. For more support, see Conventions: A NATION Proper nouns include the names of people, geographic locations,
Capitalization. specific events and time periods, organizations, languages, historical
events and documents, and religions. Proper adjectives are derived
from proper nouns, as in French (from France) and Canadian (from
Read It
Canada). Here are some examples taken from the selection you have
Answers will vary. just read:
Write It
Sentence beginning: The contraption causing all the fuss . . .
Possible responses:
Quotation: “. . . I was thinking, ‘What can I do?”
1. William Kamkwamba [proper noun: name of
person] is only twenty years old [not proper Proper nouns: His sister Dolice and cousin Geoffrey . . .
adjective or noun], but he has built a windmill Proper adjectives: One afternoon, a pair of Malawian health
[not a proper noun] to provide electricity to his workers . . .
family in Malawi [proper noun: name of country].
2. William’s [first word of sentence, proper noun:
name of person] windmill [not a proper noun] Read It
has brought a lot of attention to the small [not Work with your group to identify examples of correct capitalization
a proper adjective] village [not a proper noun] in the selection. Find two examples in the selection for each of the
of Masitala where the Kamkwamba [proper following items.
adjective] family [not a proper noun] lives.
1. a sentence beginning 3. a person’s name
Possible Response: Students’ paragraphs will vary,
but they should use at least three proper nouns, one 2. a proper adjective 4. a quotation
proper adjective, and one quotation.
Write It
Identify the errors in capitalization in each sentence, and note the reason
each word should or should not begin with a capital letter. Then, revise
each sentence to correct the capitalization.
FORMATIVE ASSESSMENT
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Writing to Sources
If students have trouble explaining a particular
step, then suggest that they break it down into
PERSONALIZE FOR LEARNING
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• A Work in Progress
Present Multimedia Profiles
Before groups begin work on their projects, have • from The sTory of Assignment
them clearly differentiate the role each group My Life Review the selections you have just read and viewed. Work in your
member will play. Remind groups to consult the small group to present a series of multimedia profiles, in which you
• hoW heLen keLLer
schedule for Small-Group Learning to guide their address this question:
LeArneD To TALk
work during the Performance Task. How do people overcome enormous challenges?
Students should complete the assignment • A young Tinkerer
using presentation software to take advantage of BuiLDs A WinDMiLL,
Digital Speech Since “a picture is worth a • Keep It Simple: Choose one striking image should have no more than six words across and
thousand words,” help students find and use rather than several smaller ones. Position the six lines down of text.
effective images for oral presentations. Remind visual carefully, allowing “white space” to make • Choose Color and Font Carefully: Cool colors
students to give full credit to visual sources, as they the image stand out. (blues, greens) work best for backgrounds; warm
would for print ones. Teachers can guide students • Go for Quality: Choose clear, high-quality colors (orange, red) work best for objects in the
to create rhetorically powerful digital presentations images or take high-resolution photos. foreground. Use a simple, standard font such as
such as slideshows, blogs, and online forums using Arial or Helvetica.
these suggestions: • Limit Bullet Points and Text: The most effective
slideshows have limited text. Suggest that slides Last, teachers can help students create a rubric
to assess presentations.
Strategic Support
Check-In As groups finalize their presentations, intended when it needs to, and is practical
circulate among them and check in to ensure that (or could be replaced with a simpler method
each group member has a role in the presentation of presentation that might be more effective).
and is prepared for his or her part. You may also Remind groups that they should have an idea of
wish to review the media students plan to use, how long their presentation will take to deliver so
determining whether it is appropriate for the that it doesn’t seem too short or run too long.
classroom setting, is reliable and will function as
Strategies Look Inside Take a few minutes to scan through the text you chose. Choose a
different one if this text doesn’t meet your needs.
Review the Learning Strategies with students and
explain that as they work through Independent
Learning they will develop strategies to work on Independent Learning Strategies
their own. Throughout your life, in school, in your community, and in your career, you will
• Have students watch the video on Independent need to rely on yourself to learn and work on your own. Review these strategies
and the actions you can take to practice them during Independent Learning.
Learning Strategies.
Add ideas of your own for each category.
• A video on this topic is available online in the
Professional Development Center.
STRATEGY ACTION PLAN
Students should include any favorite strategies Create a schedule • Understand your goals and deadlines.
that they might have devised on their own during
• Make a plan for what to do each day.
Whole-Class and Small-Group Learning. For
example, for the strategy “Create a schedule,” •
students might include:
• Understand the goals and deadlines.
• Make a schedule for what to do each day.
Practice what you • Use first-read and close-read strategies to deepen your understanding.
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Pacing Plan
Introduce
Whole-Class
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Learning
Performance Task
Media: The
Unit Introduction Dust Bowl from The Grapes of Wrath The Circuit
1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18
whole-class learning
SHORT STORY
Performance Based-Assessment Prep
Rikki-tikki-tavi Review Evidence for an Informative
Rudyard Kipling Essay Point out to students that collecting
Can one little mongoose protect the people and evidence during Independent Learning is the
animals around him from two deadly cobras? last step in completing their Evidence Log. After
they finish their independent reading, they will
synthesize all the evidence they have compiled in
the unit.
The evidence students collect will serve as the
MEMOIR primary source of information they will use to
complete the writing and oral presentation for
from Facing the Lion: Growing Up Maasai
the Performance-Based Assessment at the end
on the African Savanna
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Introduce Introduce
Small-Group Independent
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Learning Learning
Task
Performance-Based
Assessment
Media: How A Young Tinkerer
from The Story Helen Keller Builds a Windmill, Independent
A Work in Progress of My Life Learned to Talk Electrifying a Nation Learning
19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36
INDEPENDENT LEARNING
Audio Summaries
Connection to Essential Question
This selection connects directly to the Essential Question—How do we
Selection Audio overcome obstacles?—by showing a young woman who overcomes
Selection Test almost unimaginable adversity.
Text Complexity Rubric: The Girl Who Fell from the Sky
Quantitative Measures
Qualitative Measures
Knowledge Demands Mostly familiar situations. The story is exciting, true, and somewhat exotic, but no prior knowledge is
1 2 3 4 5 absolutely necessary.
Language Conventionality and Clarity The syntax and sentence structure are easy to understand. Vocabulary is largely on-level, with a few
1 2 3 4 5 regionalisms included.
Levels of Meaning/Purpose The meaning of Koepcke’s work touches on family, biology, courage, wilderness survival, fortune,
1 2 3 4 5 and youth.
Selection Test
Connection to Performance-Based Assessment
In this assessment, students will write an informative essay responding
to this question: “How can people overcome adversity in the face
of overwhelming obstacles?” This poem provides students with one
element that can be used in answering that question.
Qualitative Measures
Knowledge Demands Beyond the idea of trees growing in urban settings, this prose does not require previous knowledge.
1 2 3 4 5
Language Conventionality and Clarity The syntax and sentence structure are easy to understand. Vocabulary is on-level.
1 2 3 4 5
Levels of Meaning/Purpose The meaning of Cisneros’s work is very personal and impressionistic. Most readers will see the metaphor
1 2 3 4 5 of the trees and their strength.
Rikki-tikki-tavi
Summary Insight
Rudyard Kipling’s short story “Rikki-tikki-tavi” describes the This selection explores how
adventures of a young mongoose in India. He adopts a family and determination, cleverness, and
becomes their guardian. In the family’s garden, he meets Darzee, a agility can overcome enemies
SELECTION RESOURCES with great power.
tailorbird who has lost a baby bird to Nag, a cobra in the garden.
First-Read Guide: Fiction The cobra has also frightened the family’s son, Teddy. Nag terrorizes
the other animals and threatens the family’s safety. Rikki-tikki-tavi
Close-Read Guide: Fiction
resolves to get rid of the five-foot-long poisonous snake.
ikki-tikki-tavi: Text
R
Questions
Qualitative Measures
Knowledge Demands “Rikki-tikki-tavi” is a familiar children’s story. Some knowledge of cobras and mongeese is helpful.
1 2 3 4 5
Language Conventionality and Clarity The syntax and sentence structure are not difficult, though the register is somewhat elevated and some
1 2 3 4 5 vocabulary is above-level.
Levels of Meaning/Purpose This is an exciting story for children with a straightforward conclusion.
1 2 3 4 5
Text Complexity Rubric: from Facing the Lion: Growing Up Maasai on the African Savanna
Quantitative Measures
Qualitative Measures
Knowledge Demands Students will need background information on Africa, Kenya, and nomadic life. Students may need
1 2 3 4 5 background on boarding schools.
Language Conventionality and Clarity The syntax and vocabulary are easy to understand, but there are a few regionalisms.
1 2 3 4 5
Levels of Meaning/Purpose The real-life story touches on the nature of education, poverty, and cultural marginalization in an
1 2 3 4 5 African setting.
Anchor Standards
In the first two sections of the unit, students
worked with the whole class and in small
groups to gain topical knowledge and
greater understanding of the skills required
by the anchor standards. In this section, they
are asked to work independently, applying STANDARD
what they have learned and demonstrating Reading Read and comprehend complex literary and informational texts independently and proficiently.
increased readiness for college and career.
532 UNIT 5 • FacING adveRsITy
Challenge
Additional Questions To help students reflect on their first read
and prepare for the close read, encourage them to think about what
more they would like to know about a text. Ask students to write
two to three questions they have about the text. Then, students can
meet in small groups with others who have read the same text. Each
group can share First-Read Guides and their additional questions
before proceeding to the close read.
QuickWrite
Pick a paragraph from the text that grabbed your interest. Explain the power of this passage.
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STANDARD
Reading Read and comprehend complex literary and informational texts independently and proficiently.
Challenge
Group Review Have students who have read members should revise and edit the writing for
the same text collaborate to write a group review coverage of the entire text, and make sure ideas
of the entire text. The review should include a are logically organized and expressed clearly. They
summary and excerpts from each group member’s can use signal words and transitions to connect
Close-Read Guide. Group members should agree the ideas and writing of all the contributors. After
on contributions, the order in which the excerpts editing and proofreading, the completed reviews
will appear, and how the excerpts will fit into may be posted in a blog or printed and distributed
paragraphs within the review. Together, group to the class.
Powerful Speaking in Small Groups 1. Earn credibility. Speakers who are words that convey their precise meaning.
Explain to students that learning how to prepared with evidence tailored to their Further, effective speakers avoid “loaded
speak with confidence, without over- audience’s needs will sway their audience words” that attempt to sway an audience
compensating, will help them make and/or with the power of their proof. As a result, by appealing to stereotypes.
defend an argument and point of view in a these speakers will have no need to try to 3. Be audible, not loud. Speakers who
small group. Point out that their goal is to harass or intimidate their listeners. avoid shouting convey their point with
be convincing, but not argumentative. To 2. Choose words carefully. Effective greater confidence than those who do
help build this skill, provide students with speakers use the exact words they need, raise their voices
the following guidelines:
Identify a real-life experience that illustrates one of your ideas about how
we overcome obstacles.
STaNdardS
Writing
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ASSESSING performance-based assessment
sources Part 1
Writing to Sources: • Whole-class selections Writing to sources: Informative essay
Informative Essay
• small-group selections In this unit, you read about people who overcame various obstacles. You
Students should complete the Performance-Based will now write an informative essay in which you explore the topic of
Assessment independently, with little to no input • independent-learning
facing adversity as illustrated by the selections in this unit.
selection
or feedback during the process. Students should
use word processing software to take advantage
Assignment
of editing tools and features. Write an informative essay in response to the following question:
Prior to beginning the assessment, ask students
to think about obstacles they have faced and Word NetWork How can people overcome adversity in the face
of overwhelming obstacles?
overcome, and how they did it. As you write and revise
your essay, use your Word Develop a clear thesis in response to the prompt. Your thesis for this
Review the Elements of an Effective Network to help vary your informative essay should make a generalization about ways in which
Informative Essay Students can review the word choices. people persevere as they struggle to overcome adversity.
work they did earlier in the unit as they complete
the Performance-Based Assessment. They may Then, use specific examples and quotations from the selections to
support your response. Your ideas should be logically organized,
also consult other resources such as:
and your essay should include transitions to show the relationships
• the elements of an informative essay, including between ideas. Use precise vocabulary and a formal tone in your
relevant facts, descriptions, and examples writing. Be sure to include a conclusion that follows from and supports
that illustrate causes and effects, and detailed the information in your essay.
explanations that show cause-and-effect
relationships, available in Whole-Class Learning
Reread the Assignment Review the assignment to be sure you fully
• their Evidence Log understand it. The assignment may reference some of the academic
• their Word Network words presented at the beginning of the unit. Be sure you understand
Although students will use evidence from unit each of the words given below in order to complete the assignment
selections for their informative essays, they may correctly.
need to collect additional evidence, including
relevant facts, details, and quotations from Academic Vocabulary
the text.
deviate determination tradition
persevere diversity
The introduction includes a clear Details, examples, and The essay mostly adheres to
thesis. quotations from the selections standard English conventions
are relevant. of usage and mechanics.
The thesis is supported by details,
examples, and quotations from the The style and tone is mostly
selections. formal and objective.
The introduction states the thesis. Some details and examples The essay contains some
from the selection are mistakes in standard English
The thesis is supported by some relevant. conventions of usage and
details, examples, and quotations from mechanics.
the selections. The style and tone is
2 occasionally formal and
Ideas are vaguely organized, with a few objective.
transitions to orient readers.
Words are somewhat suited to
The conclusion relates to the purpose and audience.
information in the essay.
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The thesis is not clearly stated. There is little or no relevant The essay contains many
support. mistakes in standard English
The thesis is not supported by details, conventions of usage and
examples, and quotations from the The style and tone is informal. mechanics.
selections.
Words are not appropriate to
1
Ideas are disorganized and the purpose or audience.
explanation is difficult to follow.
Part 2
Speaking and Listening:
Speaking and Listening: Oral Presentation
Oral Presentation
Students should annotate their written Assignment
informative essay in preparation for the oral After completing your informative essay, use it as the foundation for a
presentation, marking the important elements StandardS brief multimedia presentation. Record your presentation and post
(thesis, quotations drawn from text) as well as Writing it on a class or school Web site so you can watch the presentations
any supporting facts or statistics. Use technology, including the outside of class and respond and interact digitally.
Internet, to produce and publish
Remind students that the effectiveness of an writing and link to and cite sources
oral informative essay relies on how the speaker as well as to interact and collaborate
with others, including linking to and Use these tips to make your presentation engaging:
establishes credibility with his or her audience. citing sources.
If a speaker comes across as confident and Speaking and Listening • Review your essay, and mark the most important ideas and
authoritative, it will be easier for the audience to • Present claims and findings, supporting details from your introduction, body paragraphs, and
emphasizing salient points in a
give credence to the speaker’s presentation. focused, coherent manner with conclusion.
pertinent descriptions, facts, details, • Use appropriate eye contact, and speak with clear pronunciation and
Review the Oral Presentation Rubric As and examples; use appropriate eye
you review the Oral Presentation Rubric with contact, adequate volume, and clear adequate volume.
pronunciation. • Include well-sequenced multimedia that emphasizes key points.
students, remind them that it is a valuable tool • Include multimedia components
that can help them plan their presentation. They and visual displays in presentations
Review the Oral Presentation Rubric Before you deliver your
to clarify claims and findings and
should strive to include all of the criteria required emphasize salient points. presentation, check your plans against this rubric.
to achieve a score of 3. Draw their attention to
some of the subtle differences between scores Content Organization Presentation Techniques
of 2 and 3.
The introduction states the thesis The speaker uses time effectively. The speaker maintains
in a compelling way. effective eye contact and
Ideas progress logically, with clear speaks clearly and with
The presentation includes specific transition among ideas. adequate volume.
3 examples, quotations, and
multimedia elements. The timing of the images matches
the timing of the explanation.
The conclusion offers fresh insight
into the topic.
The introduction states a thesis. The speaker uses time effectively, The speaker sometimes
spending the right amount of time maintains effective eye
The presentation includes on most parts. contact and speaks somewhat
examples, quotations, and clearly and with adequate
2 multimedia elements. Ideas progress logically with some
The introduction does not clearly The speaker does not use time The speaker does not
state a thesis. effectively. maintain effective eye contact
or speak clearly with adequate
The presentation does not Ideas do not progress logically. volume.
1 include examples, quotations, or
multimedia elements.
DIGITAL PERSPECTIVES
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Preparing for the Assignment To help students make each speaker successful (gesture, pacing,
understand what an effective oral presentation tone, and so on). Suggest that students record
of an essay looks and sounds like, find examples themselves presenting their informative essays
on the Internet of students or adults reading from so they can practice incorporating some of the
their own work. Project the examples for the elements in the examples you showed them.
class, and have students note the techniques that
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