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Writing Thay Tu
Writing Thay Tu
To begin with, the extinction of animals results from many factors. The primary reason of this
trend is pollution generated by human activities. These days, factories are operated to produce a
lot of things to serve humans and mass production is surely one major cause of air pollution and
water pollution. Such types of pollution have negative impacts on nature and animal world in one
way or another. In addition, illegal hunting is a severe phenomenon that we have confronted for a
long time. Many people in certain parts of the world still mistakenly believe that products from
wild animals contain health-giving properties and these products are in great demand. As a
certain consequence, rhinos , elephants as well as some breeds of tigers are in real danger in
many parts of the world. deforestation and overexploitation of natural resources also emerge as
main causes of the problem.
As regards some optimal measures to tackle the problem, the most effective one must come from
the government.
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On the whole, there is a close connection between human welfare and wildlife. Hence, efforts
should be made from all members of the society so as to maintain biodiversity and protect the
environment
v1
. justified in some cases
. evi : nations , focus : tourism ………
. protecting : priority : Sing : prosperous , clean
. if have to : put factories in other nations
. not many achieve
View 2 : really convincing
. to develop : industry ……………. : hurt the environ
. regard : pollution : acceptable cost
. examples : everywhere
Pollution has emerged as a global issue and it poses a lot of challenges for most nations across
the world. However, some people hold the view that economic growth can go together with a
clean environment while others are of the opinion that this situation is infeasible. This essay will
discuss these views in depth.
To start with, the first view seems rather justified in some cases.
. evidence :
There is a lot of evidence of nations with high living standards and a good environment as these
nations have certain policies to protect nature. Singapore is a case in point; This country has
earned a strong reputation as one of the cleanest cities in the world as the major proportion of the
national income comes from tourism and eco-friendly sectors.
. priority , if have to : factories
In fact, conserving Mother Nature has become the national priority in some countries and going
green is also the guideline that people should follow. Therefore, businesses that may hurt the
environment have to pay heavy taxes and people are also aware of their duty in this mission of
the whole community. In case they need to produce something, manufacturing plants are often
located in areas with low population density and some are even encouraged to move their
factories to other countries.
As regards the second view,
As far as the second view is concerned,
When the second view is taken into account,
When the second view is put into consideration,
When the second view is considered, ………
it seems that this view is much more convincing.
. hard :
I am firmly convinced that it is almost impossible to develop the economy without harming our
environment. With industrial agriculture and industrial activities, chemicals are used and toxic
waste as well as greenhouse gas emissions are generated. As a certain result, the environment is
seriously damaged and what people can do is just to limit the harmful effects.