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Annotated-Hoi An Ancient Town
Annotated-Hoi An Ancient Town
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Name: Nguyen Pham Thien An S3818385
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Mathew D
Advance 18/08/2021
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School of Languages & English
Advanced: Reading & Writing
Hoi An ancient town is one of the popular public locations are foreign tourists want to
visit in Vietnam. Furthermore, Hoi An has beautiful places that many people have
known, such as small souvenir places for many years. On the other hand, many
problems cause controversies, such as traffic congestion, plastic waste, and noise
pollution. This essay will outline Hoi An ancient towns characteristics and recommend
Firstly, Hoi An is in Quang Nam province. The town includes old complex architecture
structures, frame buildings, religious buildings, such as churches, pagodas during the
different shapes of red dragons with long tails. Furthermore, the beautiful lotus flowers
symbols marveled by marble stones. There are many yellow shiny houses with
brownish roofs. These houses are used by wooden and houses are side by side
together along the street. Lantern stores are displayed many traditional colorful lanterns
Secondly, Hoi An old town has problems with traffic congestion, plastic waste, and
noise pollution that need to tackle the issues to protect the environment, travelers, and
tourists and local visitors is increasing. It also includes buses transporting international
tourists by encroach on the roadside because there is not enough parking space for
buses inside the town. Besides, the plastic waste around the street. Because there are
only a few recycle bins to put the trash into it. Many bars, restaurants, and cafe shops
play music loud or use loudspeakers to have the attention of travelers cause noise
Thirdly, it is the recommendations with many solutions to help Hoi An ancient town has
a clean environment, improve the quality of entertainment lifestyle for the tourists. There
will be three solutions to deal with the problems. The first solution for traffic congestion
is to rent vacant ground near the ancient town that can divide into three areas for
different types of vehicles, such as cars, buses, and motorbikes for tourists. The second
solution for plastic waste by increase the recycle bins to make it simpler to divide the
waste storage to preserve the ecosystem. Hence, install cameras to watch any
indiscriminate and inattentive littering. The third solution for noise pollution in many
different third places is to set up patrols at night to check restaurants, bars with other
places. The patrols have to ensure that the noise pollution can decrease as much as
possible. Moreover, the patrols need to have strict punishment for the third places that
UNESCO. Additionally, the old town contributes as a vital role not only for the national
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culture of Vietnamese people but also as an crucial image when foreigner talks about
Vietnam. . Although many problems impact the ancient town, many solutions for the
recommendation to tackle the issues. These solutions are vacant ground to prevent
traffic congestion, increase the recycle bins to reduce plastic waste, and set up patrols
to decrease noise pollution. These resolutions are key to solve the issues.
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