HOMEWORK 1 – KIM NGÂN

1. Do you think extreme sports should be banned?

   No I don't agree that extreme sports should be banned. Because extreme sports
are very interesting and adventurous, so when I participate in an extreme sport I
can release stress and eliminate negativity. Besides, it can show negativity, I’m
the adventurous type, strong and brave.
2. Why do people enjoy shopping online ?
    I think people enjoy shopping online because shopping online has many
advantages for them. Firstly, people can easily compared prices between stores,
so they choose to buy the products with the cheapest price. Secondly, something
or like a very convenient and time-saving so people just need to stay at home
and use the mobile phone to buy anything.
3. Which one do you prefer: working alone or working with other people?
    At my job, I prefer to work with other people. People can get access to more
ideas so they can get the job done quickly. Besides I think I enjoy talking to
people like teamwork in my team, so the working atmosphere becomes more
positive and makes to work more effectively.
4. Why do people prefer watching movies at the cinema?
    They There are some factors that make people prefer watching movies at the
cinema. Firstly, in terms of picture and sound, the screen is large and the sound
system is better than the sound of TV or mobile phone. so it gives is a great
experience. Secondly, people can hang out with the friends so it changes the
atmosphere and it makes them more funny and relaxing.

Essay 150 words: How to choose a good hotel for a holiday?

    Choosing a good hotel that makes the trip for a holiday more meaningful.
There are some factors that people should consider when choosing a hotel.
    Firstly, I think we should choose a hotel with good price. Price should be
suitable with the financial budget, or the quality of service. So we will not waste
the money. Secondly, a hotel has a beautiful scenery, for example, when we go
to the beach, we will choose a hotel near the beach that has great view of sea. So
we can enjoy the view, release stress or take photos to share the amazing
experience. Finally, we should a hotel with a good review. We can go to the
websites or blogs to read reviews and comments of other people who have
stayed at the hotel, so we can find out whether the hotel we choose is reliable or
not. 
      In conclusion, there are some factors to choose a good hotel such as good
price, beautiful scenery, or good reviews. Choosing a good hotel makes your
vacation more comfortable and meaningful.
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