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Can Tho University Journal of Science Vol. 12, No.

1 (2020): 37-44

DOI: 10.22144/ctu.jen.2020.005

Common grammartical errors in English writing - A case study with second-year


students of information technology at HAUI

Nguyen Thi Huyen*


*Correspondence: Nguyen Thi Huyen (email: nguyenthihuyen@haui.edu.vn)
Article info. ABSTRACT

Received 10 Oct 2019 This study is conducted to find out common grammatical errors in English
Revised 01 Aug 2020 writing paragraphs made by the second-year Information Technology stu-
Accepted 31 Mar 2020 dents at Hanoi University of Industry (HaUI). Quantitative method was
used with data collection instruments including survey questionnaires for
seven teachers and 667 students, and 125 randomly chosen students’
Keywords weekly paragraph writings in the study. The findings revealed four most
common grammatical errors, namely verb tense, sentence structure, verb
Causes, common English form and subject-verb agreement. Besides, the data analysis results also
grammatical errors, error indicated some causes and suitable error correction types to help students
correction types, writing par- avoid these kinds of errors. This paper hopes to provide useful information
agraphs for those who would like to find out effective ways to eliminate grammatical
errors in writing in general and in writing paragraphs in particular.

Cited as: Huyen, N.T., 2020. Common grammartical errors in English writing - A case study with second-
year students of information technology at HAUI. Can Tho University Journal of Science. 12(1):
37-44.
1 INTRODUCTION Vietnamese learners commit a great number of er-
rors, especially in grammar when they write in Eng-
1.1 Rationale
lish regardless of their level (Bui Thi Tram, 2010).
English is the most commonly used language among Students often confront with difficulties in using
foreign language speakers, particularly in the con- tenses, articles, sentence structures and so on (Nguy
text of globalization and integration. Among four Van Thuy, 2010; Nguyen Thi Duyen, 2011). How-
English skills, namely speaking, listening, reading ever, they seem to pay inadequate attention to gram-
and writing, the last one is considered as a difficult matical error correction in writing English, which
skill requiring much energy and practice for almost might affect their writing seriously next times.
second language learners if they aim to master it. To
Similar problems appear to be confronted by non-
achieve the target of communication, writers are ex-
English majored students in Hanoi University of In-
pected not only to write coherently and cohesively,
dustry (HaUI). This study focusing on common
but also perform the rules of grammar and syntax.
grammatical errors in writing paragraphs faced
Hence, writing is considered as the most complex
by the second-year Information Technology stu-
and difficult skill to master.
dents at HaUI will contribute to the improvement
In the writing process, it sounds undeniable that of teaching and learning writing in English for
writing in a foreign language cannot be separated teachers and students there.
from making errors. In Vietnam, it can be seen that

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1.2 Literature review majored students at Hung Yen University of Tech-


nology and Education make a great number of errors
So far there have been numerous definitions of writ-
in writing with high frequency. They often commit
ing. According to Byrne (1997) “writing is produc-
common grammatical errors, including the use of
ing a sequence of sentences arranged in a particular
verbs, pronouns, articles, and sentence structures,
order and linked together in certain ways”. In other
particularly correct verb forms and verb tenses. It
words, a writing or a text includes sentences ar-
can be found out that Vietnamese students tend to
ranged in a coherent and grammatical way to con-
struggle with grammatical errors compared to other
nect the ideas together. As for Carroll and Wilson
written errors. It is really true to the non-English ma-
(2007), writing is defined as the act of expressing
jored students in general and the Information tech-
ideas, thoughts, and feelings to other people in writ-
nology sophomores in particular at HaUI. It is be-
ing symbols so that readers can understand the ideas
cause their English ability is limited, and even a lot
conveyed. Nunan (2003:p.88) has the same view-
of students did not learn English in secondary or
point with these two scholars above and claims that
high schools. That is the reason why grammatical
writing is a mental act of inventing ideas and think-
errors were classified into six types, namely verb
ing about how to express and organize them into
tense, verb form, subject-verb agreement, sentence
statements and paragraphs that will be comprehen-
structure, article and pluralization, which are
sible to a reader. In short, despite numerous writing
adapted from both Nguy Van Thuy’s research
definitions, it can be understood in the simplest way
(2010) and Nguyen Thi Duyen ’s (2011).
that writing is an activity of arranging words,
phrases, and sentences in papers to express writers’ There is a variety of reasons why learners commit
ideas, emotion or anything that exists in their head. grammatical errors. Researchers provide different
Besides, coherence and cohesion are important as- causes of grammatical errors due to their distinctive
pects of academic writing. Craik (2000: p.117) perspectives of error classification. In Ancker’s
states that an effective paragraph needs consistently English Teaching Forum (2000: 20-25), he states
to contain four elements namely a topic sentence, that the learners often make errors because of the in-
unity, coherence, and sufficient development. In this terference from the native language, overgeneraliza-
sense, a well-written paragraph needs to feature a tion, incomplete knowledge of the target language
clear topic sentence, of a topic sentence, supporting and its complexity. Brown (2000: 218) agrees with
sentences and a concluding sentence. It conveys Ancker about causes of grammatical errors, but he
only one main idea, and should be arranged logically classifies into two main types of causes: interlingual
and coherently (Bednar, 2014). It is difficult for the – interference from the first language and intralin-
second language learners, especially Vietnamese gual – difficulties coming from the second language.
learners, to produce sentences correctly by means of Richards (as cited in Ellis and Barkhuizen,
well-structured and understandable sentences in 2005:232) divides intralingual interference into four
English. Therefore, making errors, typically gram- groups as follows: over-generalization, ignorance of
matical errors in paragraphs, seems unavoidable. rule restrictions, incomplete application of rules,
and false concept hypothesized. Unlike those re-
There are few studies on grammatical errors in Vi-
searchers, Norrish (as cited in Yulianti, 2007) thinks
etnam. Most of them show that grammatical errors
that non-native English learners make errors be-
are the most common among written errors such as
cause of three main causes, namely carelessness,
style, expression, word choice, lexical items and so
first language interference, and translation. All in
on. For example, according to Nguy Van Thuy
all, each scholar has different ways to explain causes
(2010), preposition, article, verb tense, verb form,
of errors. It was noted that students are more likely
pluralization and subject-verb agreement errors are
to use word-for-word translation for expressing their
the most common types of errors made by first-year
ideas. For instance, numerous students tend to write
students at Nghe An Economics and Technology
as follows “I very like it” instead of “I like it very
College. Interestingly, they all belong to grammati-
much”. Or regarding the rule “adding “s” after verb
cal errors. Bui Thi Tram (2010) illustrates that Eng-
if the subject is the third person singular” in English,
lish grammar is problematic for the first-year main-
some students make such errors as “it help me a lot
stream students at the Faculty of English language
in studying” instead of right form which is “It helps
teacher education, Hanoi University of International
me a lot in studying”. In this study, therefore, causes
Studies and Foreign Languages due to the domi-
of the students’ grammatical writing errors were an-
nance of grammatical errors in writing. Similarly,
alyzed as the way Brown and Richards do.
Nguyen Thi Duyen (2011) also reveals that English

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Error correction is also an important stage in writing 2 RESEARCH METHODOLOGY


process. Research evidence on error correction in
Quantitative method was used in the study. Collec-
the second language writing classes shows that error
tion instruments include survey questionnaires for
correction can assist students to acquire their accu-
students and for teachers) and students’ weekly
racy in a short term. As correction is a way to remind
writings.
students of the English standard forms, it will help
them be aware of what errors they have made, in or- The students have ten weeks for online and offline
der to avoid similar ones next time (Ashwell, 2000; English lessons, therefore, so data collection was
Ferris & Roberts, 2001; Brown & Rodgers, 2002; conducted within week 8 and week 9 of the second
Bitchener & Ferris, 2012). Numerous studies on the semester of the 2018-2019 academic year (from
effectiveness of error correction types have been February 25 to March 09, 2019). In fact, there are
done. Mangelsdorf (1992), for example, investigat- 757 second-year non-English majored students at
ing freshman in an American university, found that HaUI taking a course in English for Information
peer correction is useful for organizing, revising Technology 4. Copies of survey questionnaires for
content, and sharing ideas. Self-correction increases students (including 10 questions) were prepared to
the sense of audience awareness and student auton- deliver to students at 25 different classes. However,
omy (Leki,1991). Meanwhile, Zhang (1995), Ferris only 667 (88.1%) students officially joined this
& Roberts (2001) and Chandler (2003) all prove that study because of 51 students’ absence and 39 stu-
the students still preferred teacher correction which dents’ invalid answers. Their English level is ex-
allows them to identify their own errors and improve pected to reach A2 according to CEFR-VN at the
their writing skill in the target language. In general, end of the course. In this study, they were asked
there are three common kinds of error correction in- about the importance of writing skill, the frequency
cluding teacher correction, peer correction, and self- of making grammatical errors, their common types
correction. Each kind is advantageous to some ex- of grammatical errors, causes of errors, and their
tent. This study is expected to discover the effective view on the effectiveness of error correction tech-
error correction technique(s) to help the target stu- niques and how often they get techniques from their
dents avoid committing grammatical errors in their teachers.
writings.
Another survey questionnaire including 8 questions
1.3 Aim and objectives of the study were given to seven lecturers of English for Infor-
mation Technology 4 with the purpose of collecting
The general aim of the study is to investigate com-
their view about the importance of writing skill, stu-
mon grammatical errors in writing paragraphs made
dents’ grammatical errors, causes as well as their
by the second-year Information Technology stu-
suggestions on what should be done to help students
dents at HaUI. The study objectives include:
avoid grammatical errors. These lecturers have ever
− To examine common grammatical errors in been teaching the student participants; therefore,
paragraphs; they probably have a good understanding of stu-
− To find out the factors leading to these dents’ grammatical writing errors. The results
grammatical errors; gained from the survey questionnaire for teachers
will contribute greatly to the feasibility and effec-
− To investigate type(s) of suitable error tiveness of the study.
correction to eliminate students’ grammatical errors.
Both types of survey questionnaires are adapted and
In order to achieve these objectives, three following edited from Nguyen Thi Duyen’s thesis (2011).
research questions will be addressed:
In order to achieve desired results and deal with the
(1) What are common English grammatical errors in three research questions, 125 paragraph writings
writing paragraphs faced by the second-year Infor- with teachers’ correction were randomly collected
mation Technology students at HaUI? from 25 different classes (five writings of each
(2) What are causes of grammatical errors in writing class). These are weekly writing tasks, for which
paragraphs? students were asked to themselves write short para-
graphs (100-120 words) about different topics in
(3) What type(s) of error correction is considered as their sample papers at the end of each online unit,
most effective to help them avoid grammatical er- and submit their work to their teacher at the begin-
rors in writing paragraphs? ning of the next lesson.

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SPSS was used to calculate and convert the data. When being asked about their opinions on what
They were transferred to numerical form or percent- types of grammatical errors made by students, sur-
age and displayed in figures and tables for analysis prisingly teachers and students have a dissimilar
and discussion. look on the most common error. In terms of stu-
dents’ perceptions, the proportion of verb form er-
3 RESULTS AND DISCUSSIONS
rors accounted for the largest percentage, followed
3.1 Common grammatical errors (in writing) by verb tense. Remarkably, the rate of students com-
mitting sentence structure errors was the lowest. In
In order to answer the first research question, the re-
comparison with students’ opinion, all teachers af-
sults gained from survey questionnaires and stu- firmed that verb tense and sentence structure were
dents’ writings collected weekly will be discussed the most serious errors.
below.

Table 1: Teachers’ and students’ view on students’ common grammatical errors


Students Teachers
Grammatical error
Number Percentage Number Percentage
Sentence structure 87 6.3 7 22.6
Article 126 9.1 2 6.4
Subject-verb agreement 252 18.2 5 16.1
Verb tense 310 22.4 7 22.6
Verb form 439 31.7 6 19.4
Pluralization 171 12.3 4 12.9
Total 1,385 100 31 100
To find out an accurate answer for the first research their randomly collected writings were examined
question, the results will be compared with data and categorized into 17 types of error, which were
analysis of students’ weekly writings. All errors in presented in the table below:

Table 2: Comparative data about written errors made by students


Students’ weekly writings
No. Types of error
Number Percentage
1 Pluralization 49 7.4
2 Subject-verb agreement 79 12
3 Sentence structure 96 14.5
4 Article 12 1.8
5 Preposition 25 3.8
Grammar

6 Verb form 83 12.6


7 Verb tense 115 17.5
8 Singular/plural noun 21 3.2
9 Pronoun 7 1.1
10 Run-on sentence 64 9.7
11 Comparison 7 1.1
12 Relative clause 27 4.1
13 Possession 5 0.7
14 Spelling 9 1.4
15 Expression 36 5.5
16 Word choice 24 3.6
Total 659 100
Table 2 shows that the most common error in these verb tense, sentence structure, verb form and sub-
papers was grammar occupying nearly 90%, 10 ject-verb agreement in descending order, and they
times higher than that of three other types of written all belong to grammatical errors. Table 3 is a spe-
errors. The common errors in their writings were cific description of typical examples of grammatical
errors in students’ writings.

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Table 3: Typical examples of grammatical errors in students’ writings


Grammatical errors Examples
Listen music.
Preposition
You spend too much time to surfing internet.
It has six-axis sensing system.
Articles
LG KG320 is a input device I like most.
I have to studying a lot of subjects.
Verb form
It is used for program.
Pluralization It is compatible with most hardwares and application softwares.
When the connection failed, no one can work.
Verb tense
You must very patient to fix bugs.
When used it I feel it run fast.
Sentence structure
I like the most is USB.
It also have some constrains.
Subject–verb agreement
Networks is popular with everybody.
Possession It’s color is black.
I must study a lot of subject.
Singular/plural noun
There are different type of network.
Pronoun Being a software engineer is not easy, you must write programs, then test it.
I really like it because it is very great and vivid color but this screen has delay
Run-on sentence
with 14ms so it’s not suitable for playing games.
Comparison I usually use my laptop so the OS is the most.
Computer networking has become one of the most successful way of sharing
Relative clause information, where all computers or other devices are wirelessly linked to-
gether.
3.2 Causes of grammatical errors in writing
In sum, the data analysis results from the two survey
paragraphs
questionnaires and 125 students’ weekly writings
are quite similar in terms of common grammatical Data collected from the two survey questionnaires
errors confronted by the Information Technology revealed that both the teachers and students consid-
sophomores at HaUI. Verb tense, sentence structure, ered interference from the mother tongue as the
verb form and subject-verb agreement were the stu- main reason for grammatical errors in writing para-
dents’ most common grammatical errors in their graphs.
weekly writings. It could be deduced that the stu-
dents’ grammar knowledge is limited and needs to
be improved.
Table 4: Teachers and students’ viewpoint on causes of grammatical errors
Students Teachers
Causes of grammatical errors
Number Percentage Number Percentage
Mother tongue interference 633 49.6 7 36.8
Overgeneralization 76 6 1 5.3
Ignorance of rule restrictions 284 22.3 5 26.3
Incomplete application of rules 145 11.4 3 15.8
False concepts hypothesized 137 10.7 3 15.8
Total 1,275 100 19 100
As can be seen in Table 4, all seven teachers choose example, a student wrote: “The first problem, it re-
the first option, and nearly a half of the students quires an expensive setup” to express disadvantages
agreed with their teachers’ assessment. This was of network. In this sentence, the student made a verb
also demonstrated clearly in students’ weekly writ- tense, which was corrected by the teacher as follows
ings. The students tended to comply with Vietnam- “The first problem is that it requires an expensive
ese grammatical rules to write in English. For setup.” Another example is that “I very like it, I use

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it to play video games.” It can be said that students 3.3 Suitable error correction techniques to help
have a tendency to translate their ideas word-by- students avoid grammatical errors in writing
word, which resulted in grammatical errors such as paragraphs
verb tense, verb form and sentence structure.
The results from data collection of two survey ques-
In brief, it is necessary for them to know how to tionnaires indicated that the seven teachers often un-
avoid those grammatical errors, and it is worth for derlined errors and corrected them in order to assist
teachers at FFL (HaUI) to find out useful methods students in eliminating grammatical errors in writ-
to support students in solving their grammatical er- ing. This also was demonstrated obviously the
rors. teachers’ feedback in students’ writing portfolios
where students’ errors were underlined or circled by
red color and then corrected quite carefully. There-
fore, it is truly proved that a significant proportion
of students (74%) asserted they often got teacher
correction (Fig.1).

Fig. 1: Students’ view on the frequency of using types of error correction


When receiving writings with teacher correction, rors and self-corrected them; and a very small pro-
most of the students also gave the answer that they portion of them (8.9%) looked at the given marks;
looked at the marks and errors indicated by teachers; and only 4.1% examined all errors, compared with
a small percentage of them (17.7%) examined all er- classmates’ work and corrected them together re-
spectively. This will be displayed in Table 5.
Table 5: Students’ reaction to grammatical errors
Students’ reaction Number Percentage
Only look at the given marks 67 8.9
Look at the marks and errors indicated by teachers 525 69.3
Examine all errors and self-correct them 134 17.7
Examine all errors, compare with classmates’
31 4.1
work and correct them together
Total 757 100
It seems that the writings with teacher correction are be considered effective to help eliminate grammati-
helpful for the students. They might know where ex- cal errors in writing. Besides, 31.6% of the teachers
actly mistakes are, thereby drawing out beneficial also highly appreciated the importance of remedial
lessons to write better next times. That might be the work in correcting and improving the students’ writ-
reason why both of the teachers and students gave ings, whereas only 13.1% of the students chose this
the greatest interest in teacher correction with the option. Surprisingly, none of the students and only
rate of 36.8% and 69.6%, respectively when being two teachers answered that self-correction is a good
asked about what error correction technique(s) can technique to help reduce grammatical errors (Table

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6). The researcher quite totally agreed with their few can find and correct their grammatical errors by
opinions. Self-correction can partly improve stu- themselves. This might be due to their limited Eng-
dents’ writing skills, but she makes sure that few lish proficiency, particularly their grammatical
students have their own awareness of doing it, and knowledge.
Table 6: Students’ and teachers’ view on effective error correction technique(s)
Students Teachers
Types of error correction
Number Percentage Number Percentage
Self-correction 0 0 2 10.5
Peer correction 166 17.3 4 21.1
Teacher correction 667 69.6 7 36.8
Remedial work 125 13.1 6 31.6
Total 958 100 19 100
In general, both teachers and students regarded error found that all of the participants agreed that teacher
correction, especially teacher correction, as the most correction is regarded as the most effective tech-
effective type to improve students’ writing skill and nique to help students avoid grammatical errors,
limit grammatical errors. The students recognized thereby improving their writing competence.
the significance of teacher correction, which its per-
It is hoped that this study will be a useful source for
centage made up the highest rate as opposed to the
teachers to have an outlook on students’ common
remaining error correction techniques. When teach-
grammatical errors and causes of their students’
ers scored students’ writing, 100% of them under-
poor writing proficiency so that they will know what
lined errors and corrected them. They also put an
should be done to assist students to write effectively
emphasis on remedial work, but a small number of
by means of making use of appropriate error correc-
students examined all errors, and wrote again after
tion techniques. For students, the study is expected
getting the teachers’ feedback about writing errors.
to be an advantageous reference to understand what
Clearly, it is necessary to ask students to give the
grammatical errors they often have in writing pro-
second version to the teacher in the hope that their
cess. Then, they will be aware what they need to do
writing skill will be improved.
to avoid these types of error, thereby improving their
4 CONCLUSIONS AND PEDAGOGICAL writing skills.
IMPLICATIONS
4.2 Pedagogical implications
4.1 Conclusions
To help students minimize grammatical writing er-
The study is in an attempt to investigate common rors, it is necessary for the teachers to require stu-
grammatical errors in writing paragraphs confronted dents to have remedial work or write the second or
by the second-year students of Information Technol- final draft of their writing. This greatly increases the
ogy at HaUI. The data analysis results of survey effectiveness of teacher correction. In addition, writ-
questionnaires and students’ writings show that ing teachers in general and teachers belong to Divi-
grammar was the most common error in the stu- sion of Non-English major at HaUI in particular can
dents’ writings. The four most serious grammatical deploy teacher correction, peer correction and reme-
errors are verb tense, sentence structure, verb form dial work in an attempt to correct students’ writing
and subject-verb agreement. These results partly errors by creating classes in Google Classroom
match with those from Nguy Van Thuy’s study where teachers can create and organize writing tasks
(2010) and Nguyen Thi Duyen’s (2011) mentioned quickly, provide feedback efficiently and communi-
above. The data collected from the students and cate with their classes easily.
teachers’ questionnaires demonstrate that the inter-
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